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    Posted: October 20 2013 at 08:50
Probaby been done a hundred times before but heres a fresh thread...

Rules?
you just write your own complete original poetry

heres one from me

The Unbroken Vow


Here comes the pain   _|_|

Here comes the fire _|_|

There’s my reward _|_|

There goes desire _|_|

Out the window with the flame 

Time to start the funeral pyre 

This is where I’m heading now 

So much for the unbroken vow   


She saw me coming and then she made me suffer in the ash 

Who’d have thought she’d leave me and turn my life into a sonic crash

Everything about her was never as it seems 

When she turned a detour on the road to shattered dreams

I turned around and looked for her she’d vanished in the night

Never had I felt such agony by firelight

 

Here comes the pain

Here comes the fire

There’s my reward

There goes desire

Frozen future doused the flame

Inner turmoil on the pyre

Passing signposts by the hour

So much for the unbroken vow

 

Took my breath away when I saw her that day|

She lit my eyes up and then she tore out my heart 

My love breached clean out of the ocean of dismay

Now my temperament is really off the chart

 

Never in my life had I felt such a killing pain inside

Only when I stopped to think did I realise our love had died

I turned around and looked for her she’d vanished in the night

Now I know what lovers go through entangled in a fight

 

Here comes the pain

Here comes the fire

There’s my reward

There goes desire

Frozen future doused the flame

Inner turmoil on the pyre

Passing signposts by the hour

So much for the unbroken vow

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 20 2013 at 15:58
Err... I write only in my native language (Polish). Does it count?
"Music is much like f**king, but some composers can't climax and others climax too often, leaving themselves and the listener jaded and spent."

Charles Bukowski
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 20 2013 at 04:21
Polish counts
my account
is no doubt
chicken out
finger gout
drinking stout
messing about
twist and shout
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 20 2013 at 09:43
Such a poem's aforehand demolished
if Polish doesn't sound polished
I tell you straight from the heart:
That language
and English
are poles apart.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 20 2013 at 09:53
The rage of an acorn
On the stepladder of man
Does it squeeze the fruit of sad paint cans?
I know not; nor do I care
A doorway to frog school opens everywhere
The pupils dripping wet with memory
And the feet on their way to another way
Their profile in the moonlight can't erase those fears
And the test of their will postponed
They wait in the darkness
With nothing to read
At all.
My other avatar is a Porsche

It is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle if it is lightly greased.

-Kehlog Albran
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