Eggroll - The Girl

I'm trying to rewrite the lyrics of this song, but I'm such a stack in the middle of the progress.

The song can be found right here: http://www.myspace.com/eggrollband

Sitting alone on a Saturday night

Can't tell but feeling left out

She was the girl that no one knew about

So shy and so full of doubt

Trying to find out a place in the crowd

Quietly watching them all

Feeling like she was just touring the world

As life was taking its toll

And she tried...

And she tried...

Sitting alone on a bench near the yard

Watching them kicking the ball

Gazing

Here I'm stack.

I'll be happy to get any help in completion of the rewrite progress. Thanks!

Edited by Pr0bl3m - February 12 2010 at 11:51

Padraic wrote: How about "Sitting on a park bench, eyeing little girls with bad intent".

But seriously. Perhaps Kevin Ayers's "Girl on a Swing" can be of help?

It goes:

She’s got a feeling for the spring
I’ve got another song to sing

Girl on a swing
Girl on a swing
Girl on a swing,
0n a swing
Such a pretty thing

She’s not a victim of despair
She’s just a feeling in the air

[chorus]

She sways, silently she sings
Her song gives my body wings

[chorus]

Padraic wrote: Pr0bl3m wrote: Padraic wrote: How about "Sitting on a park bench, eyeing little girls with bad intent". That's not funny. It's a little bit funny.