Eggroll - The Girl
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Topic: Eggroll - The Girl
Posted By: Pr0bl3m
Subject: Eggroll - The Girl
Date Posted: February 12 2010 at 11:49
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I'm trying to rewrite the lyrics of this song, but I'm such a stack in the middle of the progress.
The song can be found right here: http://www.myspace.com/eggrollband - http://www.myspace.com/eggrollband Sitting alone on a Saturday night Can't tell but feeling left out She was the girl that no one knew about So shy and so full of doubt Trying to find out a place in the crowd Quietly watching them all Feeling like she was just touring the world As life was taking its toll And she tried... And she tried... Sitting alone on a bench near the yard Watching them kicking the ball Gazing Here I'm stack. I'll be happy to get any help in completion of the rewrite progress. Thanks! |
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Posted By: Padraic
Date Posted: February 12 2010 at 11:59
| How about "Sitting on a park bench, eyeing little girls with bad intent". |
Posted By: Pr0bl3m
Date Posted: February 12 2010 at 12:02
That's not funny.
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Padraic wrote:Posted By: fuxi
Date Posted: February 12 2010 at 12:24
| ^ Yes it is! |
Posted By: fuxi
Date Posted: February 12 2010 at 12:28
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But seriously. Perhaps Kevin Ayers's "Girl on a Swing" can be of help?
It goes: She’s got a feeling for the spring I’ve got another song to sing Girl on a swing Girl on a swing Girl on a swing, 0n a swing Such a pretty thing She’s not a victim of despair She’s just a feeling in the air [chorus] She sways, silently she sings Her song gives my body wings [chorus] |
Posted By: Padraic
Date Posted: February 12 2010 at 12:29
It's a little bit funny. |
Posted By: MovingPictures07
Date Posted: February 13 2010 at 12:51
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Posted By: Tsevir Leirbag
Date Posted: February 13 2010 at 18:24
The second remark is even funnier than the first  ------------- Les mains, les pieds balancés Sur tant de mers, tant de planchers, Un marin mort, Il dormira - Paul Éluard |