Create a prog song - one verse or line at a time

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   I got places to go, people to see
I can see them but they cannot see me
My heart is electrified
If my feet were exotic carvings would you still be my friend?

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Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67421	Posted: June 24 2010 at 15:02
	I got places to go, people to see I can see them but they cannot see me My heart is electrified If my feet were exotic carvings would you still be my friend?

AtomicCrimsonRush Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: July 02 2008 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 14258	Posted: June 30 2010 at 11:00
	Scaramouche, will you do the Foxtrot?


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67421	Posted: June 30 2010 at 11:37
	Actually I only wrote the second line.

someone_else Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: May 02 2008 Location: Going Bananas Status: Offline Points: 24391	Posted: July 01 2010 at 08:15
	Vompatti wrote the second line The third, fourth, fifth will then be mine Herafter the sixth should be thine...


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67421	Posted: July 01 2010 at 08:33
	No, the third and fourth were written by someone I forgot.

RoeDent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 08 2009 Location: Wales Status: Offline Points: 850	Posted: July 01 2010 at 08:35
	Announcer: We interrupt this prog epic for a brief jazzy interlude... Page 70 (A Brief Interlude) (jazz band kicks in) Male singer: Aaaand...we're halfway through the fourth song on our epic prog rock album! jazzhands Announcer: We now return to our regularly scheduled prog

AtomicCrimsonRush Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: July 02 2008 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 14258	Posted: July 01 2010 at 10:48
	(Vuvezela solo)


RoeDent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 08 2009 Location: Wales Status: Offline Points: 850	Posted: July 02 2010 at 09:05
	drum fill, followed by funky rhythmic pattern on guitars, bass and keys Male: And number 11 has the ball He passes it down to number 7 Who runs with it but... Choir: AWWWW Male: Bad tackle there That surely deserves...a FREEEEE KICK!

AtomicCrimsonRush Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: July 02 2008 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 14258	Posted: July 03 2010 at 09:13
	GOAL! (*celebratory music) The crowd go wild! (Vuvezelas increase to deafening volume) BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBB BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBB BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBB BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZBBBBBBBBBB


RoeDent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 08 2009 Location: Wales Status: Offline Points: 850	Posted: July 05 2010 at 12:46
	Ten tam-tams (gongs), each increasing in size (thus lowering in pitch), are rolled, the crescendo building to a cataclysmic explosion of sound on all available voices and instruments (except vuvuzelas)

AtomicCrimsonRush Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: July 02 2008 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 14258	Posted: July 09 2010 at 10:57
	The crowd go wild.... then there si silence as the orcestra begins to play. 2 violins solo foir a minute, then the bass drukms pounds. The song is ending.... everyone cries.


RoeDent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 08 2009 Location: Wales Status: Offline Points: 850	Posted: July 09 2010 at 15:31
	Then, from the highest gallery in the hall, a solo boy soprano intones Boy soprano: I'm recording it... The choir takes this line as a message of hope, singing in 8-part harmonies, the orchestra and choirs building to a climax (but not a chaotic climax). Then the rock band comes in with power-ballad music.

Tarquin Underspoon Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 12 2009 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1416	Posted: July 09 2010 at 23:43
	The lyrics resume: The sound of the everlasting temporary silence Is only heard if it is never made The ground upon which you and I walk is really just the ocean Or maybe swamps, such as the Everglades The endoplasmic heartfelt yearnings, Curry drips, the curry's burning, Feed my feet, feel free to flee Fe fi fo fum, selfless greed The dog it snarfs the poppies And the turtles do aspire The cream of mushroom seeps immortal Down cathedral spires Captain Crunch is just a poser, Wrinkled knees, a bland composer, Sitting silent on the branch of death Eat this cereal, suck the light-balls Fluffy Himalayan pitfalls Postman Dave has stopped to catch his breath heavily reverbed sounds of breathing segue into silence silence very abruptly and unapologetically segues into a Meshuggah-inspired breakdown
	"WAAAAAAOOOOOUGH! WAAAAAAAUUUUGGHHHH!! WAAAAAOOOO!!!" -The Great Gig in the Sky

CinemaZebra Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: March 13 2010 Location: Ancient Rome Status: Offline Points: 6795	Posted: July 09 2010 at 23:47
	A song for Ady Sutton is written by her man He says she don't taste sour as long as the illusion sticks He left her 'cause he found out that she was a shape-shifting alien who's original form looks hideous but he don't know that she was just lonely so I'll take care of her instead Choir: Wait, whaaaaaaaaaaat?

Tarquin Underspoon Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 12 2009 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1416	Posted: July 09 2010 at 23:50
	choir blows up
	"WAAAAAAOOOOOUGH! WAAAAAAAUUUUGGHHHH!! WAAAAAOOOO!!!" -The Great Gig in the Sky

DisgruntledPorcupine Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: January 16 2010 Location: Thunder Bay CAN Status: Offline Points: 4395	Posted: July 09 2010 at 23:52
	Cristiano Ronaldo vocal solo

CinemaZebra Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: March 13 2010 Location: Ancient Rome Status: Offline Points: 6795	Posted: July 10 2010 at 00:06
	We got the choir to come back to life through a powerful resurrection thanks to a fictional mythology that proves useful in 70-page long prog songs. Choir: YaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAaaaaaaaaaaay... Although they are a little f**ked up because the resurrection process didn't quite work up like we planned so they have become a zombie choir. Choir: BraaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaAaaaAaaaaaaiiiiiiiiIInnnnnnnNnnNsssss.....

CPicard Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: October 03 2008 Location: Là, sui monti. Status: Offline Points: 10841	Posted: July 10 2010 at 06:57
	(Brains solo)

RoeDent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 08 2009 Location: Wales Status: Offline Points: 850	Posted: July 10 2010 at 09:42
	(The entire choir begin a complex hand-clapping solo, with occasional grunts and whoops)

AtomicCrimsonRush Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: July 02 2008 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 14258	Posted: July 10 2010 at 10:42
	Robot: We are programmed to destroy the choir! Choir: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Robot: Eliminate them! Choir: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! ZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaPPPPPPPPppppppppp!!!!! The Choir explode in a paroxysm of thiunder and lightning! (Machine Gun solo) ratataratarararataratatatataratarataratrararatatatarataytataratatataratatataratataratatatattattattattatararararraratatatatatarartartartartratrtartratratratratra ratataratarararataratatatataratarataratrararatatatarataytataratatataratatataratataratatatattattattattatararararraratatatatatarartartartartratrtartratratratratra ratataratarararataratatatataratarataratrararatatatarataytataratatataratatataratataratatatattattattattatararararraratatatatatarartartartartratrtartratratratratra ratataratarararataratatatataratarataratrararatatatarataytataratatataratatataratataratatatattattattattatararararraratatatatatarartartartartratrtartratratratratra ratataratarararataratatatataratarataratrararatatatarataytataratatataratatataratataratatatattattattattatararararraratatatatatarartartartartratrtartratratratratra (Drum solo)