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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 12 2014 at 06:45
Uh, it depends I guess. The vague sound in my head that I mentioned is relatively free-form, more like Kayo Dot than anything else I can think of (but not really, less avant and freeform than that, no metal, less winding vocals), fairly earthy and raw in sound against floating sections. I write at the piano/keyboard more often than not. I'm a classical clarinettist; the sound in my head owes something to Debussy & Messiaen if i do it right.
Half my trouble is that these ideas aren't really straightforward to write. Even if I try later in the year and don't quite find what I'm looking for, I'll try to write some stuff that I like and that's fun and record it (my friend has is an amateur engineer and has a good amateur studio). 

Previous things I have done have been towards the alt-rock side of things (due to bands I was in at the time) or classical-esque compositions which always end up sounding like film music.

Lyrics... I'm no lyricist, really, I haven't written lyrics in an even longer period of time than I have composed. I like images, even when they don't necessarily mean much, or anything at all.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 12 2014 at 13:34
^ I would say that as long as it's something underground/progressive, there is a lot of room for mistakes ... err, "mistakes". I mean, where can you go wrong? Now, to my question you've answered with ...
Originally posted by Kazza3 Kazza3 wrote:

Uh, it depends I guess.
Well, I think that if you really want to cook up something soon, then may I suggest sticking with one style for now? If you want your body of work to be stylistically consistent, look at what the other artists are/were doing. For instance, I'm planning on having a dual repertoire, just the kind of thing that most classic rock guys were doing: loud rock and soft ballads. In fact, I think that if you want your music to be somewhat diverse, start with dynamics (loud pieces and soft pieces).
Originally posted by Kazza3 Kazza3 wrote:

I write at the piano/keyboard more often than not. I'm a classical clarinettist; the sound in my head owes something to Debussy & Messiaen if i do it right.
Half my trouble is that these ideas aren't really straightforward to write. Even if I try later in the year and don't quite find what I'm looking for, I'll try to write some stuff that I like and that's fun and record it (my friend has is an amateur engineer and has a good amateur studio).
I recommend you stick with that. Feed on whatever your inner musical voice has to offer. But really, you can write whatever you want.

You are saying that some of your ideas in your head aren't very clear. What I would do is try to pull them even in their vague form; otherwise, I'd just stick with the ideas that come into my head in a very clear form.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 13 2014 at 06:04
Yeah, I agree with much of that, cheers.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 13 2014 at 07:34
Note to self: present lyrics without music before moving on with them.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2014 at 06:18
Oh, if I may be so bold, Dayvenkirq- don't be so self-deprecating when you introduce your material, don't sell yourself short! My brother always used to speak during his gigs about how sh*t he was, in a playful way, but it's still a poor impression- obviously you're not doing this live, you're just on a message board looking for tips/advice, so it's hardly as bad- but you're still not doing yourself any favours, you don't need to give all the disclaimers. Doesn't matter if it's a rough demo, just put yourself out there, loud and proud!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2014 at 07:21
^ One of the pillars in my songwriting approach is evolution. It's easy to write crappy music, music with no ideas. I want to put some effort in my work. I want my music to have ideas. Simply showing melody-less (or bland in some other way) material doesn't really cut it for me. Also, I'm still having trouble deciding on a musical style that would do a song the justice it deserves. That's why I wrote:
Originally posted by Dayvenkirq Dayvenkirq wrote:

Note to self: present lyrics without music before moving on with them.
It's just a stage of evolution of a song. I'm still learning how to write.

Here's my method:

1) Take everything you have to say, group together related thoughts for a lyrical theme of a song.
2) Re-shape those thoughts into somewhat more poetic, less everyday-sounding lyrics. Follow the scheme MAaB MAaB C B ... or ... MAaB MAaB C AaB A (where M - an intro tune that can also be used in the middle of a song, A - musical idea for the 1st verse before chorus, a - musical idea for the 2nd verse before chorus).
3) When the lyrics are finished, ornament them with music, be that soft/hard rock (electric guitar-driven) or ballad-type music (acoustic guitar or piano).

And so, before I get to the musical part of a song, I need to have a good idea of what the lyrics will be like.

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How do you write a piece of music? Do you come up with something coherent from an improvisation, or do you build music around a single valuable, almost unique, memorable idea, or something else?


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2014 at 04:03
Originally posted by Dayvenkirq Dayvenkirq wrote:

^ One of the pillars in my songwriting approach is evolution. It's easy to write crappy music, music with no ideas. I want to put some effort in my work. I want my music to have ideas. Simply showing melody-less (or bland in some other way) material doesn't really cut it for me. Also, I'm still having trouble deciding on a musical style that would do a song the justice it deserves. That's why I wrote:
Originally posted by Dayvenkirq Dayvenkirq wrote:

Note to self: present lyrics without music before moving on with them.
It's just a stage of evolution of a song. I'm still learning how to write. 

Yeah I agree, but I'm not really sure what that has to do with it- even if you're putting up rough work that you don't like, it still doesn't do you any favours to downplay yourself.

Originally posted by Dayvenkirq Dayvenkirq wrote:


Here's my method:

1) Take everything you have to say, group together related thoughts for a lyrical theme of a song.
2) Re-shape those thoughts into somewhat more poetic, less everyday-sounding lyrics. Follow the scheme MAaB MAaB C B ... or ... MAaB MAaB C AaB A (where M - an intro tune that can also be used in the middle of a song, A - musical idea for the 1st verse before chorus, a - musical idea for the 2nd verse before chorus).
3) When the lyrics are finished, ornament them with music, be that soft/hard rock (electric guitar-driven) or ballad-type music (acoustic guitar or piano).

And so, before I get to the musical part of a song, I need to have a good idea of what the lyrics will be like.

That's interesting, lyrics first. I've tried that a couple of times before, never really worked for me. Generally, I either come across a melody/riff/idea/progression while messing around, or maybe while intentionally looking for a particular sound, and then build off that in some way.


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I spose I may as well put up on old example. This was actually my composition for my last year of high school, so you know, but it's the last thing I completed (3 and a half years ago), the piano riff/ostinato and string melody are the last things I'm proud of writing, and it's just a midi performance by Sibelius (I'm not putting up my poor playing and mixing efforts from years ago). I reached a point not far into the piece where I had no idea where I wanted to go, but I needed to finish it on time, so I more or less did a couple of prog rock cliches (which in an orchestral setting are slightly less cliched) so it's hardly a great example of achieving all you want to with an idea, but there you go.  It sounds more like an overture to film music, given the (mandated) short length, than anything else really, and you might find it interesting, or might not.

http://vocaroo.com/i/s15wE292uMvw

The piano riff/ostinato that the opening (main section) is based on was originally intended to be part of a prog rock song of some kind, but then I needed something for a composition so I used this. Written messing around at the piano. The progression repeats with the melody (written on Sibelius, rather than at the piano, I think) added in the strings, and then again with a brass countermelody, before switching to the major and ending fairly triumphantly.
The short, quiet section with pizzicato strings and woodwind bits I wrote at the piano again (and the strings echo the rhythm of the piano ostinato), and it was the last bit I properly liked before I had no idea where to go. So then the cliches: the 7/8 'Arabian' trumpet & flute melody, a typical bass riff comes in underneath and is then left by itself; itbecomes a 'pedal point groove' staying put with the chords change over it and the original melody is restated/developed over the top. It leads into a quieter piano section beginning with the restatement of the countermelody in the flute, then a piano & cello section with frankly has nothing to do with anything else and was from another song. Then the opening section comes back and repeats itself with some variations, and then closes out with celeste.

So with the exception of the piano bit towards the end, it's all pretty much based on the piano riff & string melody. 


n.b. Given that it's a years old composition that was completed with an 'I'll just do whatever' attitude, in a style I don't really intend on replicating anymore, I'm not specifically looking for constructive criticism on it or anything, just throwing it up there.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2014 at 04:48
Originally posted by Kazza3 Kazza3 wrote:

Originally posted by Dayvenkirq Dayvenkirq wrote:

^ One of the pillars in my songwriting approach is evolution. It's easy to write crappy music, music with no ideas. I want to put some effort in my work. I want my music to have ideas. Simply showing melody-less (or bland in some other way) material doesn't really cut it for me. Also, I'm still having trouble deciding on a musical style that would do a song the justice it deserves. That's why I wrote:
Originally posted by Dayvenkirq Dayvenkirq wrote:

Note to self: present lyrics without music before moving on with them.
It's just a stage of evolution of a song. I'm still learning how to write. 

Yeah I agree, but I'm not really sure what that has to do with it- even if you're putting up rough work that you don't like, it still doesn't do you any favours to downplay yourself.
I'm not downplaying myself; otherwise my self-esteem would be really low.  I just recognize the idea that I've yet to mature, evolve. I can do better. In fact, I think it's more likeup-playing. Good things are gonna come; they just take time. I can't say right now that I know what it takes to make a classic album. These are the favours I'm doing to myself. I'm still regrouping, recharging, reinventing myself. There is no point in documenting a phase in my evolution if that phase tells of a time when I really didn't know what I was doing or what I wanted to do, a phase when I was making a mistake when I could do better. Who learns something from that?

Trust me: I'm the author of my own stuff. I know my own trash when I hear it.  There are good ideas I have in my bag, but they are incomplete and need to be put in or be a part of a musical context. That's as non-disingenuous as I can be. ... I swear I'll let you know when I finish the lyrics ... or a song.

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Any ideas or half-assed compositions you have ready?


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2014 at 05:41
Apart from the above? Ready, as in new? No.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2014 at 05:44
^ Any ideas on what you want to do with your music? Move people or inform them musically or lyrically?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2014 at 06:29
Well, moving people in some way is the name of the game. But also doing it for my own satisfaction, possibly more that than the former. I'm not particularly interested in lyrically trying to get a point across to people or telling narrative as the main focus.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2014 at 11:19
^ So, what are the elements/features/characteristics of the music in your head that you think would help you connect with the listeners?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 16 2014 at 04:57
Perhaps I understated the 'self-satisfaction' part... I would like to make music that I enjoy for largely my own amusement, and if others like it, that's just swell. I don't have intentions of trying to 'make it' as an artist, or anything like that. But the elements that listeners connect with would hopefully be the same things that I find interesting about the music if I do find it interesting- good melodies, interesting textures, sound, rhythms, sections, etc.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2014 at 14:34
Throwaway #1 - "Bread And Wine".



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2014 at 20:17
Here's a new-ish recording. Now you can read along with the score!

http://https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1reU6B6YPAY
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2014 at 20:25
^ Holy s$%t ... that's really good! I like those fast runs with the colorful chords. Reminds me of GG for sure.

I wish we could work together some time, if I only had a recording equipment suitable for those purposes.

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Throwaway #4 - Sunshine Of Alberta. (It's only 30 seconds long. Ermm )


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2014 at 23:46
Thanks! Glad you like it.
Yeah, maybe we could try to make something. My recordings are all pretty lofi anyway. Have anything in mind?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2014 at 23:55
^ That depends on how our writing styles could gel, if at all. I look in my "garbage can" and see bits in different styles. I've got Romantic classical, folk, experimental, free jazz, rock, etc. So far maybe nothing really serious. I've got an alto sax, a violin, a keyboard, guitars, bass, soprano recorder, digital sound-producing software, and editing software.

I guess if there are bits that we have and don't know what to do with them, we could pitch them between each other.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 19 2014 at 05:35
Originally posted by Dayvenkirq Dayvenkirq wrote:

Throwaway #1 - "Bread And Wine".




 Nice! These all, particular the first and last, sound like they have a lot of potential. I know they're throwaways, but some tuning wouldn't hurt, and obviously as you practice them you'll be able to get those parts sounding really clean, and it'll be even better.


Originally posted by N-sz N-sz wrote:

Here's a new-ish recording. Now you can read along with the score!

http://https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1reU6B6YPAY

Really cool! And thanks for the score. Is the intention for it to be an actual joint strings & guitar ensemble, and the keys are just filling in? For my tastes, sections of it are bit too weird and seem to lack a direction, or there could be a bit more repetition of themes for listeners to hang on to. Particularly towards the beginning- and at times some of the rhythmic complexity/number of parts gets a bit messy (though that could partly be the performance of the keys). The roughly middle section was better in these regards, with some particularly cool bits, and my favourite part was the guitars alone at the end. But nice!
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