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Pnoom! 
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 Posted: November 17 2006 at 12:31 |
 progismylife wrote:
Took you a while. |
Gah... Hollywood Again!?!?!?!
I'm back out.
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progismylife
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 12:33 |
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Actually I live in London now, California is in the past, but the very recent past
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 12:35 |
Oh, um, I wrote some new stuff, so I guess I'm back in.
The Follies of Youth
While gathered today, the people all pray
That they might someday find purpose in life
The poor chained inmates locked behind church gates
To escape their fate, the cut of the knife
They all lift their heads, to face waht they dread
A life of the dead in the near future
Talking to the king, hoping he might bring
A silent cloaking of human nature
And the things they do to win life anew
Yet they all stay true, to life they create
The lies they hold dear to overcome fear
Of suffering here, at the hands of fate
They mindlessly hold to a far-out truth
Suffering while old from the follies of youth
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progismylife
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 12:39 |
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Philéas
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 12:41 |
As far as I know, we haven't got a drummer yet.  - Great lyrics folly!
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 13:48 |
Pardon me for having time on my hands, but here are the rhyme schemes I have though up but still have to use (side note: x/x notes internal rhymes on the fifth syllable - see The Follies of Youth for an example):
AAAABCCCBDDBEB
ABACBCBDCDCEDD
ABABBCDCDDEFEF
AAABCCCBDDDBEE
ABCDDCBAABBCDD
ABAABABCDCCDCD
ABCCABBCAACBDD
ABCBBCDCCDEDEE
ABACBCDBDEBEFF
AABCCDEEBFFDBD
ABCCDEFFGHIIAA
ABBCBBDEEFEEGG
A/B,B/C,C/D,D/E,E/F,F/G,G/H,H/I,I/J,J/K,K/L,L/M,A,M
The Follies of Youth rhyme scheme is as follows:
A/A
A/B
C/C
C/B
D/D
D/E
F/F
F/E
G/G
G/H
I/I
I/H
J/K
J/K
Too much free time, I know. I'm glad you like it/thank you for your support.
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 13:49 |
Philéas wrote:
As far as I know, we haven't got a drummer yet.
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Great lyrics folly!
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We don't need a drummer. We have Australian's heavy wood, instead.
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Philéas
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 14:07 |
inpraiseoffolly wrote:
We don't need a drummer. We have Australian's heavy wood, instead. |
Of course, I nearly forgot. Very Prog, heavy wood.
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Bastille Dude
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 15:20 |
Philéas wrote:
As far as I know, we haven't got a drummer yet.
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Great lyrics folly!
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His name is Alesis Yamaha.
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DEATH TO FALSE PROG!
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 16:10 |
Bastille Dude wrote:
Philéas wrote:
As far as I know, we haven't got a drummer yet.
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Great lyrics folly!
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His name is Alesis Yamaha.
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If that even suggests a drum machine...
THEN I QUIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DRUM MACHINES ARE BASTIONS OF EVIL.
DESTROY
DESTROY
DESTROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm  serious.
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Philéas
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 16:31 |
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Drum machines can be useful. But I would rather have Australian playing heavy wood than using one.
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Australian
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 16:43 |
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You must hate drum machines...
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Philéas
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 16:45 |
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Like I said, I don't, but heavy wood is certainly more progressive! Don't you agree? (If you don't, I'm out)
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Australian
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 16:49 |
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I agree. It has never been done before.
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Philéas
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 16:59 |
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It has probably been done, but not in Rock music!
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Australian
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 17:02 |
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Good!!
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Philéas
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 17:07 |
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Yes. Otherwise we'd have to use something else, something more
unconventional. Unconventional stuff can be really expensive. Luckily,
wood isn't too expensive (depends on the kind though).
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Australian
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 17:09 |
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We should use ent wood.
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Philéas
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 17:10 |
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Hard to get hold of. But I've heard it sounds good.
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Australian
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 17:12 |
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I'll look on ebay.
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