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    Posted: November 12 2024 at 08:05
Originally posted by richardh richardh wrote:

Lyricists in prog often just stick in a bunch of interesting words that scan well with the music. I have no problem with that at all. Peter Nicholls of IQ is a good example of that and I'm sure you could put a whole bunch of his stuff on this thread. Greg Lake has often been criticised as well. The silly lyrics of Karn Evil 9 Part One might not go down well for many. For me though the music itself is much more important.
BTW In general I'm against negative threads. They are divisive and hopefully this will be shut down.

I don't know who wrote Greg or ELP's lyrics before Pete Sinfield arrived, but in general, him, Keith Reid (Procol), Pete Brown (Cream, and J Bruce) or Palmer James (Crimson, Supertramp & Emergency) had obscure poetry talents, which I won't condemn on the account that it doesn't make sense to me.

 
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Originally posted by Grumpyprogfan Grumpyprogfan wrote:

Robert Wyatt is normally not a bad lyricist, but when he sings the alphabet?

Not just the alphabet. The British Alphabet, m'lud!
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Robert Wyatt is normally not a bad lyricist, but when he sings the alphabet?

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Originally posted by Grumpyprogfan Grumpyprogfan wrote:

^^In the PA forum rules it states personal insults are not allowed. Or does that apply to only certain members?
This is nothing personal ;)

BTW the voice who says "The Rednex, Shockin'!" at 2:24 mark is none other than Nad fricking Sylvan. :D

Edited by Hrychu - November 12 2024 at 06:56
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^^In the PA forum rules it states personal insults are not allowed. Or does that apply to only certain members?


Edited by Grumpyprogfan - November 12 2024 at 06:50
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Think you the sh*t, bitch?
You not even the fart (Grrah)
I be goin' hard (Grrah)
I'm breakin' they hearts, like
Bitches be quick, but I'm quicker (Like)
Bitches be thick, but I'm thicker (Like)
She could be rich, but I'm richer (Damn)
A phenomenal example of rebelious dada potery A true masterpiece if you ask me. Another fantastic experimental avant-garde piece of lyrics is Old Pop in an Oak by a certain progressive country band from Bunkeflo, ID.

Old pop in an oak, pop in an oak
Once you could hear the older sucker lingo show
Thought I ever gonna see my old pop in an oak
Ever gonna see his old pipe in a smoke
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Originally posted by moshkito moshkito wrote:

... and folks here are not happy with someone saying something they do not agree with because it is not the popular ash kissing sentiment ...
Indeed. If I don't agree with some lyrics and its not an ass kissing sentiment, I'll turn the music off straight away. Because agreement and ass kissing is all I look for in art. I'm sure everyone else here except for you, feel the same.
Originally posted by moshkito moshkito wrote:

One could even suggest some of these folks are experimenting with words to add to their music in some cases.
Really? Some artists actually experiment with words?? I've never thought of it that way before. This changes everything! Ice Spice lyrics aren't bad. She's just experimenting with words.

Think you the sh*t, bitch?
You not even the fart (Grrah)
I be goin' hard (Grrah)
I'm breakin' they hearts, like
Bitches be quick, but I'm quicker (Like)
Bitches be thick, but I'm thicker (Like)
She could be rich, but I'm richer (Damn)

-I know we all look very small from up there on your high horse. But maybe you should try and get down from it.
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For the record, Madrigal is my #1 favorite track on Tormato. Except for the nonsense lyrics. I mean, "seventh age"? Like, why is that specific era significant for those "sacred ships" to sail? Is it the same thing as the "Golden Age" mentioned earlier in the song? Is it something else? Man, Jon Anderson must've been tripping hard.
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Originally posted by Starshiper Starshiper wrote:

Originally posted by Cristi Cristi wrote:

Originally posted by Starshiper Starshiper wrote:

Originally posted by Hrychu Hrychu wrote:

Jon Anderson
Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love
Most of all play with the game of the age
Highest of places remain all as one with you
Giving us light and the freedom of the day
And if that firelight, I could match the inner flame
Sacred ships do sail the seventh age

When did you hear the Madrigal song last time? "Madrigal" is nothing less than a tiny masterpiece; Anderson's vocals, Howe's acoustic guitar, and Wakeman's harpsichord are only majestical! The verses "Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love, giving us light and the freedom of the day," et cetera, sound like they belong in a song. The fact that prog rock views the human voice more like an instrument and views words as merely decorative is one of its key characteristics; it is impossible to assess prog lyrics separately from music. It is foolish to judge prog rock songs' lyrics the same way you would a typical rock song.

Foolish?! LOL Bad lyrics can ruin the listening experience no matter the genre. it's no different with prog. 

And Yes lyrics are problematic, half of the time people don't know what they mean LOL. Even the lyrics above fall in this category. LOL
One must just gasp at the audacity of calling the Yes lyrics "problematic" within a genre literally built on confusing narratives and ponderings on existence—it's almost like one would expect Shakespearean clarity from a band named after a fish! Indeed, if one were to deconstruct many a prog rock anthem, the lyrics would likely find themselves lost in some sort of labyrinthine web of metaphors that even the most seasoned of philosophers might raise an eyebrow at. But fear not, kind interlocutor; as much as your quip about the unintelligibility of lyrics might carry some truth, it is somewhat hypocritical coming from a man who appears to take such glee in his own misunderstanding—the reading glasses are kept in the drawer for a reason; perhaps it's time to whip them out before complaining about the small print!

You don't have to get all sarcastic and rude because someone disagrees with you. 

I agree with hrychu here, i think the Madrigal lyrics are not good. 


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A movement is accomplished in six stages
and the seventh brings return
seven is the number of the young light
it falls when darkness is increased by one

It might be as uncomprehensible as some of Jon's lyrics, until you realize that Syd is talking about the "I Ching"
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Originally posted by Cristi Cristi wrote:

Originally posted by Starshiper Starshiper wrote:

Originally posted by Hrychu Hrychu wrote:

Jon Anderson
Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love
Most of all play with the game of the age
Highest of places remain all as one with you
Giving us light and the freedom of the day
And if that firelight, I could match the inner flame
Sacred ships do sail the seventh age

When did you hear the Madrigal song last time? "Madrigal" is nothing less than a tiny masterpiece; Anderson's vocals, Howe's acoustic guitar, and Wakeman's harpsichord are only majestical! The verses "Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love, giving us light and the freedom of the day," et cetera, sound like they belong in a song. The fact that prog rock views the human voice more like an instrument and views words as merely decorative is one of its key characteristics; it is impossible to assess prog lyrics separately from music. It is foolish to judge prog rock songs' lyrics the same way you would a typical rock song.

Foolish?! LOL Bad lyrics can ruin the listening experience no matter the genre. it's no different with prog. 

And Yes lyrics are problematic, half of the time people don't know what they mean LOL. Even the lyrics above fall in this category. LOL
One must just gasp at the audacity of calling the Yes lyrics "problematic" within a genre literally built on confusing narratives and ponderings on existence—it's almost like one would expect Shakespearean clarity from a band named after a fish! Indeed, if one were to deconstruct many a prog rock anthem, the lyrics would likely find themselves lost in some sort of labyrinthine web of metaphors that even the most seasoned of philosophers might raise an eyebrow at. But fear not, kind interlocutor; as much as your quip about the unintelligibility of lyrics might carry some truth, it is somewhat hypocritical coming from a man who appears to take such glee in his own misunderstanding—the reading glasses are kept in the drawer for a reason; perhaps it's time to whip them out before complaining about the small print!
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Originally posted by Starshiper Starshiper wrote:

Originally posted by Hrychu Hrychu wrote:

Jon Anderson
Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love
Most of all play with the game of the age
Highest of places remain all as one with you
Giving us light and the freedom of the day
And if that firelight, I could match the inner flame
Sacred ships do sail the seventh age

When did you hear the Madrigal song last time? "Madrigal" is nothing less than a tiny masterpiece; Anderson's vocals, Howe's acoustic guitar, and Wakeman's harpsichord are only majestical! The verses "Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love, giving us light and the freedom of the day," et cetera, sound like they belong in a song. The fact that prog rock views the human voice more like an instrument and views words as merely decorative is one of its key characteristics; it is impossible to assess prog lyrics separately from music. It is foolish to judge prog rock songs' lyrics the same way you would a typical rock song.

Foolish?! LOL Bad lyrics can ruin the listening experience no matter the genre. it's no different with prog. 

And Yes lyrics are problematic, half of the time people don't know what they mean LOL. Even the lyrics above fall in this category. LOL
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Originally posted by Hrychu Hrychu wrote:

Jon Anderson
Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love
Most of all play with the game of the age
Highest of places remain all as one with you
Giving us light and the freedom of the day
And if that firelight, I could match the inner flame
Sacred ships do sail the seventh age

When did you hear the Madrigal song last time? "Madrigal" is nothing less than a tiny masterpiece; Anderson's vocals, Howe's acoustic guitar, and Wakeman's harpsichord are only majestical! The verses "Cast off your garments of fear, replace them with love, giving us light and the freedom of the day," et cetera, sound like they belong in a song. The fact that prog rock views the human voice more like an instrument and views words as merely decorative is one of its key characteristics; it is impossible to assess prog lyrics separately from music. It is foolish to judge prog rock songs' lyrics the same way you would a typical rock song.

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Originally posted by moshkito moshkito wrote:

Hi,

It's a real shame that some of you can only imagine that this is all some idealistic concept of mine about high-art, or better yet ... internet art!

For the longest time, up until the Internet age not everything was "known" and there seemed to be a distinction between the artistic stuff (as defined by academia more or less) and the rest ... today, there is no such thing, and honestly, I'm glad of it ... but some folks still go around thinking that the "high art" stuff is not as important as some of the other crap ... I'm don't think of it that way ... what might be considered "high art" by some of the folks here, is not me!

Lyrics, like a lot of literature, are gloriously illusive ... and folks here are not happy with someone saying something they do not agree with because it is not the popular ash kissing sentiment ... not to mention that tomorrow's expression will be totally different and a new "art" form. One could even suggest some of these folks are experimenting with words to add to their music in some cases.

You are the most illusive though, despite your long posts. LOL
Can you be on topic for once and be on point?! LOL
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Hi,

It's a real shame that some of you can only imagine that this is all some idealistic concept of mine about high-art, or better yet ... internet art!

For the longest time, up until the Internet age not everything was "known" and there seemed to be a distinction between the artistic stuff (as defined by academia more or less) and the rest ... today, there is no such thing, and honestly, I'm glad of it ... but some folks still go around thinking that the "high art" stuff is not as important as some of the other crap ... I'm don't think of it that way ... what might be considered "high art" by some of the folks here, is not me!

Lyrics, like a lot of literature, are gloriously illusive ... and folks here are not happy with someone saying something they do not agree with because it is not the popular ash kissing sentiment ... not to mention that tomorrow's expression will be totally different and a new "art" form. One could even suggest some of these folks are experimenting with words to add to their music in some cases.


Edited by moshkito - November 12 2024 at 04:34
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Moshkito. You need to practice Logorrhea management real bad. It's not really criticism, more like a friendly advice.
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Originally posted by The Dark Elf The Dark Elf wrote:

Originally posted by moshkito moshkito wrote:

Originally posted by Hrychu Hrychu wrote:

 
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But can you for once stick to the frikkin' topic, Mosh, and list your top worst prog lyricists?

I mean. It's not the first time you COMPLETELY ignore the general idea of a forum topic and instead write some vanilla commentary semi-related to it.
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Hi,

I'm not sure that you are getting the gist of what I'm saying.

There is no such thing as good or bad in lyrics...

Come on, Mosh -- whatever your "gist" is, I would suggest that you don't even believe in this simplistic notion. There are certainly good and bad lyrics (hell, even horrifically awful lyrics), just as there are good, great and utterly trash novels -- or plays, for that matter.  Given your dilettantish adherence to high-art principles, I find your statement at odds with your constant bashing of music you deem inferior. It seems to be downright hypocritical.
Just here to chime in and agreeing with The Dark Elf here. Until quite recently I used to think "well ok, I guess that's actually Moshkito's opinion", but lately he's been writing stuff I don't believe that he means.

Ok, while I'm here: I listen to everything and even check out newer popular music (even songs in the actual charts), so my impression is that there's far more awful lyrics written than good nowadays. None of the worst offenders create anything resembling Prog though.   

-on topic: the short period I was getting into - or rather trying to get into Porcupine Tree, I often found Steven Wilsons lyrics very on the nose and sometimes genuinely cringeworthy. But he also has his moments where music and lyrics go perfectly together. So I guess I find him uneven and not plain bad as such. I never became the biggest fan, but I still enjoy some of PT's music nevertheless.

If the lyricist isn't a native speaker of english - like myself, I'm usually very forgiving. I don't mind a little clumsiness - or vocalists like Damo Suzuki - who seem to be mainly just playing with words. Vocalists that rub me the wrong way are much worse than bad lyricism.
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Peter Nicholls is very polarizing. I personally consider him one of the greatest lyricists in prog. He normally avoids the cringeworthy "moon in June" (heart/apart) rhymes, and uses linguistic surrealism to his advantage. I see the complaints about his lyrics being too "word salad-y" and "not making sense" as absolutely valid though. It's a bit like expressionist art. Also, to me, what sets Nicholls' lyrics way higher than Jon Anderson's in terms of quality is the style. Jon Anderson's lyrics just look so obviously random and 'disguised amateurish' in contrast. It's a bit like comparing Pablo Picasso's abstract pieces to a 5 year old's scribbles.
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Originally posted by moshkito moshkito wrote:

Originally posted by Hrychu Hrychu wrote:

 
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But can you for once stick to the frikkin' topic, Mosh, and list your top worst prog lyricists?

I mean. It's not the first time you COMPLETELY ignore the general idea of a forum topic and instead write some vanilla commentary semi-related to it.
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Hi,

I'm not sure that you are getting the gist of what I'm saying.

There is no such thing as good or bad in lyrics...
Come on, Mosh -- whatever your "gist" is, I would suggest that you don't even believe in this simplistic notion. There are certainly good and bad lyrics (hell, even horrifically awful lyrics), just as there are good, great and utterly trash novels -- or plays, for that matter.  Given your dilettantish adherence to high-art principles, I find your statement at odds with your constant bashing of music you deem inferior. It seems to be downright hypocritical.  



 

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Lyricists in prog often just stick in a bunch of interesting words that scan well with the music. I have no problem with that at all. Peter Nicholls of IQ is a good example of that and I'm sure you could put a whole bunch of his stuff on this thread. Greg Lake has often been criticised as well. The silly lyrics of Karn Evil 9 Part One might not go down well for many. For me though the music itself is much more important.
BTW In general I'm against negative threads. They are divisive and hopefully this will be shut down.


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