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Andy Webb
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 19:24 |
Dean wrote:
Andy Webb wrote:
My one piece of constructive criticism is learn music theory. Know all your scaled and chords and progressions and whatnot. Not that I think you should apply them to your music because obviously that's not what your trying to accomplish, but I believe it was Picasso who said first you have to learn the rules before you can break them.
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There is a lot more to that quote than mere literal meaning of the words. It's not just learning the rules but knowing how to apply them, in Picasso's case this was not just knowing the rules of pigment, composition, perspective, light and shade and all the technical theory of painting, but knowing how to use them, break them and then use those new rules within existing rules:
...painted by Picasso when he was 12 - he can paint, but there is still a juevenile quality to the composition and you don't get the sense that the girl is actually sat on the chair, or that the chair itself has any dimension or substance - we can see the back, but there is no indication that the rest of it even exists from the girl's posture or positioning.
Four years later, we get this:
Eventhough we cannot see the chair the doctor is sitting on very clearly we know it is there, the painting conveys the substance and dimension of the chair by the composition of the painting and the positioning of the doctor in relation to the chair.
...and from that (if you follow his painting chronologically) is a progression of applying the rules and breaking them that leads to cubism, neoclassicalism and surrealism in his work:
Woman in an Armchair - painted when he was 29 - heavily abstracted and superficially nothing like the previous two paintings, except that it is a similar subject to the first and shows all the compositional merits that the second possess. It is abstract but there is nothing random or improvised about it, it is avant garde but it is still following the rules of composition in the use of light and shade, balance, focal points and all those other techniques that depict the substance and dimension of the chair without showing it realistically.
For me this is what separates good avant garde music from random notes - the use composition and the use of music theory "rules", breaking those rules knowingly and resolving them effectively (or at least satisfactorily)
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Oh god yes, that quote is far deeper than the textual meaning, but I was just making a point. Picasso was an undisputed genius of his craft and a master at the pure philosophy of artwork.
On avant-garde music, I completely agree. There's a big difference between "avant" music that is just to be avant (perhaps Metallica's Lulu), and then "avant" music that goes against the stream of music for a purpose (such as Henry Cow, Univers Zero, etc)
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 19:04 |
Epignosis wrote:
Andrew, I want to ask you this: What emotions did you intend for the listener to have while hearing your material? |
Well, I didn't really have emotion(s) in mind. Each song was made under a different emotion, so maybe a few. But I honestly didn't think about it prevoking an emotion.
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Also, what reaction did you expect this audience (i.e., members of PA) to have when hearing your material?
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Well, the best I hoped for is that people would recognise some promise. That's what I really want. because as I get better at playing, I'll be able to expand on that promise and make some genuinely good stuff.
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 18:09 |
Andrew, I want to ask you this: What emotions did you intend for the listener to have while hearing your material? Also, what reaction did you expect this audience (i.e., members of PA) to have when hearing your material?
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 17:59 |
smartpatrol wrote:
Well, that's what I aim to do. I know a lot about theory and am learning more and more every week. But in the mean time, I'll keep on doin' what I does
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I'm afraid it shows. It sounds like someone just improvising with whatever comes to them. I can hear some great ideas in there and some real promise but it just seems like a record of extended ideas, both good and bad, at the moment.
All in all though, not a bad place to start.
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 17:54 |
He could walk down a street, and girls could not resist his stare Pablo Picasso was never called an......
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 17:44 |
Andy Webb wrote:
My one piece of constructive criticism is learn music theory. Know all your scaled and chords and progressions and whatnot. Not that I think you should apply them to your music because obviously that's not what your trying to accomplish, but I believe it was Picasso who said first you have to learn the rules before you can break them.
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There is a lot more to that quote than mere literal meaning of the words. It's not just learning the rules but knowing how to apply them, in Picasso's case this was not just knowing the rules of pigment, composition, perspective, light and shade and all the technical theory of painting, but knowing how to use them, break them and then use those new rules within existing rules:
...painted by Picasso when he was 12 - he can paint, but there is still a juevenile quality to the composition and you don't get the sense that the girl is actually sat on the chair, or that the chair itself has any dimension or substance - we can see the back, but there is no indication that the rest of it even exists from the girl's posture or positioning.
Four years later, we get this:
Eventhough we cannot see the chair the doctor is sitting on very clearly we know it is there, the painting conveys the substance and dimension of the chair by the composition of the painting and the positioning of the doctor in relation to the chair.
...and from that (if you follow his painting chronologically) is a progression of applying the rules and breaking them that leads to cubism, neoclassicalism and surrealism in his work:
Woman in an Armchair - painted when he was 29 - heavily abstracted and superficially nothing like the previous two paintings, except that it is a similar subject to the first and shows all the compositional merits that the second possess. It is abstract but there is nothing random or improvised about it, it is avant garde but it is still following the rules of composition in the use of light and shade, balance, focal points and all those other techniques that depict the substance and dimension of the chair without showing it realistically.
For me this is what separates good avant garde music from random notes - the use composition and the use of music theory "rules", breaking those rules knowingly and resolving them effectively (or at least satisfactorily)
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 16:40 |
Well, that's what I aim to do. I know a lot about theory and am learning more and more every week. But in the mean time, I'll keep on doin' what I does
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 16:37 |
My one piece of constructive criticism is learn music theory. Know all your scaled and chords and progressions and whatnot. Not that I think you should apply them to your music because obviously that's not what your trying to accomplish, but I believe it was Picasso who said first you have to learn the rules before you can break them.
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 09:05 |
And thanks for the feedback, everyone. I appriciate it
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 09:02 |
HolyMoly wrote:
When I was that age, I would write songs in my head. I'd have lyrics on paper, but the music was all in my head.
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I still do that now, sense my skills are still pretty limited. I've had this whole 20 minute suite in my head for like a year and a half. And thanks
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 08:57 |
When I was that age, I would write songs in my head. I'd have lyrics on paper, but the music was all in my head. I had no way to record it and I didn't really play any instruments yet anyway. I'd envision the album, and trace a circle on a piece of cardboard, cut it out, and draw the record grooves on it. That's as close as I came to making an album. I for one am proud of smarty for turning a thought into an actual recording to present as an album. Granted, it's a lot easier to record yourself now, but still, kudos.
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Posted: September 10 2012 at 03:30 |
This is progarchives. Aren't we all about 12?
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Posted: September 09 2012 at 18:36 |
Didn't know you were 12 either. Still, some good ideas there, not an album yet though. Keep at it!
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Posted: September 09 2012 at 18:17 |
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Oh your 12! I tought it wasn't legal to be on the site at 12. Haha. In fact, for a 12 years old dude it isn't bad, give yourself time and you'll be great. I thought you were older than me! But sincerely, at your age I wouldn't put my music on download because your playing with the bigs, at your age too I was doing music but it really would've been an error to post it online. Still sounds like John Cage though. Really really sorry, I'm intensely ashamed of what I did. ![Confused Confused](smileys/smiley5.gif)
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Posted: September 09 2012 at 18:12 |
Just wanna point out some slight irony that I have seen you be quite mean, not constructive, and throw blind criticisms around quite a few times. If you want to be serious, you do need a thicker skin, especially on the net. Rarely will you get smart, thought out criticism. Have to take a lot of crap man.
Anyway, it's not real good, I can't say anything that hasn't been already, but the fact you even know 10% of the music you do at 12 is impressive, let alone trying to make your own. Keep listening, to as much as you can, keep it diverse, and try to just be you. In time it may come. I mean, even a lot of bands that made it big/are good weren't real good to start, needs time.
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Posted: September 09 2012 at 18:10 |
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Dean wrote:
I did not say you cannot take criticism, I said you need to take it with more grace. In other words "do not rise to the bait" - acknowledge it, learn from it and move on. |
He's right, by getting frustrated and by insulting me, you're only getting my point right. I don't say it is, I agree I was over-reacting. In fact, I could've presented it in an other way. But the sure thing is: I was honest and I guess it's better than false praise or trying to be nice. I was too harsh I agree but even from harsh criticism we can try to learn something. I've been through loads of harsh criticism but instead of closing my eyes, I improved myself, I understood the others point, I understood why John Cage was only pretentious as opposite to his master, Schoenberg who was a genius. I understood the work of great composers like Bach, Debussy or Beethoven. Anyway, like I said, do as you wish.
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Posted: September 09 2012 at 18:03 |
Well... I would say to not quit your day job, but you're also too young to legally be employed anywhere. And I think that's all I have to say in regards to your music too.
But hey, you gotta start somewhere. You're lucky you've gotten into music at a young, impressionable age.
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Posted: September 09 2012 at 17:51 |
Also, its not bad at all for someone that's just trying to do this on their own at the age of 12.
I mean, give yourself 6 years of working very very hard and you will hopefully be able to catch up to your ambition.
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Posted: September 09 2012 at 17:51 |
Not gonna lie, I didn't really think it was good at all. Not a joke sure, but quite a bit of work could be put into everything about the album.
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