Create a prog song - one verse or line at a time

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I haven't written the sex scene yet, but this is from the part that leads to it:

He stood with his back turned towards me as I took off my bra and crawled under the blanket. Having undressed he lay down beside me and wrapped his arm around me. My body shivered of his touch. As he felt how I trembled he moved closer and squeezed me tightly against his breast. His steady heartbeat and his gentle touch soothed me. In his arms I felt I was safe.

(The protagonist is a female character, not a transvestite.)

Edited by Vompatti - June 04 2010 at 13:06

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Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 13:04
	I haven't written the sex scene yet, but this is from the part that leads to it: He stood with his back turned towards me as I took off my bra and crawled under the blanket. Having undressed he lay down beside me and wrapped his arm around me. My body shivered of his touch. As he felt how I trembled he moved closer and squeezed me tightly against his breast. His steady heartbeat and his gentle touch soothed me. In his arms I felt I was safe. (The protagonist is a female character, not a transvestite.) Edited by Vompatti - June 04 2010 at 13:06

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 13:00
	Give us a sample, wombat writer we want to get a taste of your romantic little story and we hope it's all worth the pain.


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:57
	Would you like a sample? (no pun intended)

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:56
	Choir: I wonder how a master of vomit, feces and urine writing would write a romantic sex scene.


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:54
	No, it's a romantic story. It features a loving couple gently caressing each other and rubbing their genitals together - but NOT urinating upon each other. Edited by Vompatti - June 04 2010 at 12:55

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:50
	Does it feature people standing on the golf course dressed in PVC?!


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:49
	Cry me a river And I'll vomit an ocean over you! (OMG I will soon be writing the SEX SCENE!!1!!!!)

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:48
	But little wombat don't you know you cry me a river with sonic flow. Edited by The Sleepwalker - June 04 2010 at 12:49


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:46
	I'm not a river, you fool!

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 12:45
	Nobody knows why rivers meander, you fool!


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 11:13
	LOLWUT?!

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 10:49
	Still nobody understands why you're meandering all the time


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 10:43
	I present the following image to be imported into the song and reflected in it by musical means:

Falx Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: May 05 2010 Location: New Zealand Status: Offline Points: 859	Posted: June 04 2010 at 10:36
	"Better dead than red", that's what dear father said "Better dead than a dead-head", said I, to which the old man replied... "don't be ungrateful"
	"You must go beyond the limit of the limit of your limits!" - Mr. Doctor "It is our duty as men and women to proceed as though the limits of our abilities do not exist." - Pierre Teilhard de Chardin

AtomicCrimsonRush Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: July 02 2008 Location: Australia Status: Offline Points: 14258	Posted: June 04 2010 at 09:05
	The wombat dominates the thread Sometimes i wish he were red But he somehow makes this a good read and i must go now with all speed


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 07:51
	Like it fills the emptiness of my rugged wombat soul.

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 07:44
	Not the flu, it's just a cold snot now fills the emptiness of my nostrils.


Vompatti Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member VIP Member Joined: October 22 2005 Location: elsewhere Status: Offline Points: 67444	Posted: June 04 2010 at 07:31
	An itch? An ITCH?! Have you got the FLU?!?!?!??! Cause I've got it too.

RoeDent Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 08 2009 Location: Wales Status: Offline Points: 850	Posted: June 04 2010 at 07:31
	Narrator: The sleepwalker is unable to stop the madness, which continues... (Prog metal version of Benny Hill theme song)

The Sleepwalker Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: February 03 2009 Location: The Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 15141	Posted: June 04 2010 at 07:09
	An uncomfortable silence as my nose starts to itch the sneeze won't come - itch, be gone! but it won't fade away. Perhaps I'll stay here like a goldfish in a bowl or an elephant in a kennel it's the only way. Edited by The Sleepwalker - June 04 2010 at 07:09