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Philéas 
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 Posted: November 16 2006 at 15:48 |
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Yeah, really. Actually, I just noticed that there is a guy here on the
forum who plays it. Perhaps he could join The Moody Noobs...
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progismylife
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 15:50 |
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That would be sweet. Did you noice the poem thingy I posted a while ago? It needs to be edited and I can't edit my own work.
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Philéas
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 15:52 |
I quite liked it as it is. However, as English isn't my native
language, I'd probably make it worse if I tried to edit it, sorry. 
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progismylife
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 15:54 |
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Damn it all to hell! I'll get my brother to edit it.
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:00 |
I'm going to write a sonnet:
Tyranny of the One
The King of Kings owns what no one else knows
Watching over all that shames the good book
Controlling the direction humanity goes
Catching all of the commands we mistook
Thinking they were laws we ought to follow
Ruler of all the people he forsook
Whatever we do he always seems to know
They don’t call him King of Kings for nothing
Breaking our backs for gains to call his own
Sundays we go out to worship the king
At the beckoning of his holy gun
And Mondays we head on out to serve him
But he who sees all God has truly done
Sees the clear case--tyranny of the one
I've decided that for every sonnet I write I will invent a new rhyme scheme.
That one is:
A
B
A
B
C
B
C
D
C
D
E
D
E
E
The next one, which I will have up soon, will be:
A
B
C
A
B
B
C
D
E
C
D
D
E
E
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Philéas
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:07 |
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So far it's awesome. You're really good!
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:12 |
The Plight of the Talking Heads
Gathered round the table the greatest heads
Laze in their lounge chairs, pretending to think
Planning the future of a failing race
Befroe time has slowly killed them all dead
With their survival standing at the brink
The lazing heads watch as their chances sink
The brains in the war-room all seem out of place
It's not their natural situation
They'd rather be out amidst all the gore
For you can hide a brain behind a face
But there is not much that is to be done
When the actual brains do not function
And the grave sight the enemies watch for
Our severed arms seizuring on the floor
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progismylife
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:13 |
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Very very very good. Heres the edits from my bropther:
wishful, wanting the dream to come again
trying to bring back a memory
quickly fading, colours drain until
all is black and white
where did it all go?
why does it have to leave?
out of touch with time
the empty spaces in my mind
consume all
drown myself in the blues
only to find that the muse
drags me back to the shore
i try to lock it all the way
throw the key down the well
pretend to block that feeling from my mind
but too late i've been found out
maybe the clouds will go away
and bring out the sun
if only things were this bright
on the inside
Edited by progismylife - November 16 2006 at 16:23
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progismylife
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:14 |
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I need to go to sleep.
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:15 |
Well, I'll post it later, as the computer got mad at me for spamming and deleted it.
Anywho, it is called The Plight of the Talking Heads
I'll write a bunch more of them, and we can release The Sonnet Album.
On another note, everyone better be on this weekend, as I will be able to be on for most of it. Party!!!!!!
EDIT: IT ACTUALLY POSTED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I take back my angry face above.
Edited by inpraiseoffolly - November 16 2006 at 16:17
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:16 |
 progismylife wrote:
Very very very good. Heres the edits from my bropther:
wishful, wanting the dream to come again
trying to bring back a memory
quickly fading, colours drain until
all is black and white
Black and white
where did it all go?
why does it have to leave?
out of touch with time
the empty spaces in my mind
consume all
drown myself in the blues
only to find that the muse
drags me back to the shore
i try to lock it all the way
throw the key down the well
pretend to block that feeling from my mind
but too late i've been found out
maybe the clouds will go away
and bring out the sun
if only things were this bright
on the inside
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Bah, don't listen to your brother...
At the very least, take out the repetition of "Black and White."
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progismylife
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 16:23 |
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I edited my post.
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Bastille Dude
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 20:26 |
Well I've been working on our recording studio all day, man I'm pooped! The studio has been used for storage for waaay to long, I've got boxes and boxes stacked to the ceiling (which is really low by the way, no jumping off amps or guitar windmilling. save that for the stage.) of stuff I don't even know whats in them. I figure I can have a the studio ready for recording in about a few weeks time, or it can be used for yoga. Welcome Progismylife, do you own a rickenbacker? I only record Rickys and fenders.  There might be no room in the studio for your piano.
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DEATH TO FALSE PROG!
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Bastille Dude
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 20:40 |
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We still only have 6 friends on our myspace page, we need more friends/fans.
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DEATH TO FALSE PROG!
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 23:02 |
Bastille Dude wrote:
We still only have 6 friends on our myspace page, we need more friends/fans.
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Look Bastille Dude, you need to get off our case. I can only be one person, which means I can only be one fan at a time. I quit.
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 16 2006 at 23:02 |
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I went and listened to some Comus. It depressed me. I'm back in.
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Australian
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 00:47 |
hey hey hey!
How's the stufff about the thing going?
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Pnoom!
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 01:01 |
Australian wrote:
hey hey hey!
How's the stufff about the thing going? |
Pretty well.
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Australian
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 01:09 |
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Everything seems yellow, yellow...yellow.
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Bastille Dude
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Posted: November 17 2006 at 01:12 |
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If no one is going to appreciate all the hard work I put into cleaning up my spare room to make our studio, then I quit. I'll rejoin after the studio is finished.
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DEATH TO FALSE PROG!
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