Adam Coates - Floyd style solo music

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   Hi,

I already posted this in the "Music and Musicians Exchange" section, but it was suggested that I made a thread here. :)

Just wanted to share my new song. It's not finished
yet, so if you could give me some constructive criticism or ideas of
what to add next / improve it, that'd be great :)

It's sort of a fusion of different genres, but I think Space rock would best describe it (influenced a lot by Pink Floyd).

DivShare File - Comp-02.mp3

Enjoy :)

Edited by CoolCoates - August 26 2007 at 03:55

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CoolCoates Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Newbie Joined: August 21 2007 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 10	Topic: Adam Coates - Floyd style solo music Posted: August 26 2007 at 03:50
	Hi, I already posted this in the "Music and Musicians Exchange" section, but it was suggested that I made a thread here. :) Just wanted to share my new song. It's not finished yet, so if you could give me some constructive criticism or ideas of what to add next / improve it, that'd be great :) It's sort of a fusion of different genres, but I think Space rock would best describe it (influenced a lot by Pink Floyd). DivShare File - Comp-02.mp3 Enjoy :) Edited by CoolCoates - August 26 2007 at 03:55

Atkingani Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator / Retired Admin Joined: October 21 2005 Location: Terra Brasilis Status: Offline Points: 12288	Posted: August 26 2007 at 15:10
	Aren't you interested in pursuing a professional career, Adam?
	Guigo ~~~~~~

CoolCoates Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Newbie Joined: August 21 2007 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 10	Posted: August 26 2007 at 15:23
	Ha, well I'm flattered that you'd ask that, but I haven't had that much experience writing music, I still need to experiment more before I think about anything like that. I'm studying music technology amongst other subjects for my A-Levels at the moment, and haven't really thought about what to pursue yet, So yeah, it's a possibility, but for now, just a hobby :)

CoolCoates Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Newbie Joined: August 21 2007 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 10	Posted: October 02 2007 at 02:59
	I updated the song, replacing the last section with a, IMO, much more interesting part :D Check it out, and your comments / constructive criticism are very welcome :) Comp.mp3 - DivShare

CoolCoates Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Newbie Joined: August 21 2007 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 10	Posted: January 25 2008 at 12:04
	Wow, been a long time. Anyone have any advice?

andrea Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: May 20 2005 Location: Italy Status: Offline Points: 2064	Posted: January 25 2008 at 14:23
	^^^ Sorry, we couldn't find this file. This file may have been removed by the uploader or a member of our staff, or this address may be incorrect. If you have any questions, please e-mail [email protected]. This is the message I got when clicked on your link... Edited by andrea - January 25 2008 at 14:24

CoolCoates Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Newbie Joined: August 21 2007 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 10	Posted: January 25 2008 at 14:55
	sh*t. Sorry, forgot to update the link. Here: http://www.garageband.com/artist/coatesmusic/songs It has a reasonable score on there, but it's a "review to get reviews" system, which can be annoying because people often tend to try and listen to / write about as little as possible just so they can get their songs in the review queue, and you wouldn't believe how dismissive people can be of a track just because it's instrumental. ADMIN EDIT: Now the link is really a link Edited by Angelo - January 27 2008 at 17:10

Angelo Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator / Retired Admin Joined: May 07 2006 Location: Italy Status: Offline Points: 13244	Posted: January 26 2008 at 15:13
	On my check list - I'll get back to you
	ISKC Rock Radio I stopped blogging and reviewing - so won't be handling requests. Promo's for ariplay can be sent to [email protected]

Angelo Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator / Retired Admin Joined: May 07 2006 Location: Italy Status: Offline Points: 13244	Posted: January 27 2008 at 17:14
	Well Adam, it's certainly not bad, nice build up. The end needs a bit of work, it's kind of 'abrupt'. Not as abrupt as what Dream Theater pulled off with Pull Me Under, but still. I didn't check your thread in Music/Musicians Exchange, could you elaborate a bit on what instruments you use - and of course, whether you are really on your way to becoming an unsigned band...
	ISKC Rock Radio I stopped blogging and reviewing - so won't be handling requests. Promo's for ariplay can be sent to [email protected]