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Aaron
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Topic: just posting some artwork Posted: June 03 2006 at 14:34 |
I went to college for art, but I guess never really thought of myself as an artist. Part of me was thinking of picking up a paintbrush again. Maybe actually do something with it, or maybe just do it as something for myself. Just curious as to how some of you think of it.
I guess for the first piece, I think it looks pretty nice. But I guess I agree with my professor on how he said there is some sort of "sweetness" about it that puts you off. It's a weird feeling, it is nice to look at but lacks any oppositional/original motivation. It's just titled "Landscape."
The next one i did a year earlier, kind of Roger Dean Inspired actually, at least the background part with just the two colors. I actually kind of like this one, been thinking of doing things more like this. It was actually in the SUNY student art exhibition. Not exactly a big deal, but they did put a picture of it in one of the exhibtion pamphlets. I don't have a real good picture of this one , the first picture is just sort of thrown together to take a shot of it, the second is just the pamphlet shot, , but not set up the way it should be. The third is how it looks in the house right now. This one is also called "Landscape."
interested in some feedback
Aaron
Edited by Aaron - June 03 2006 at 14:39
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R o V e R
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 14:39 |
hey Aaron
good work man
i like it a lot.
show me some more man,
it is very inspiring,
what were you thinkin, while doing this artwork
bravo man
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 14:43 |
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Aaron
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 14:59 |
Thanks Rover,
Well, I guess my whole attitude on art is that I won't bother with a social or political agenda. That's why they are just titled "landscape," because that is what they are. I just try to represent them in another way, while still keeping the feeling of vastness.
The first one was literally thought up in my head, drawn on paper, turned it into a wall sculpture. Pretty much all held together with wood glue, hahaha. That one was just ply-wood and stain. I guess it was funny to use ply-wood, but that was just because I was cheap, it didn't have anything to do with recyclable or inexpensive materials to create art. I guess I think that because I don't like the whole "art can be wonderful no matter the quality of materials" approach, especially if that is what is giving you the inspiration. Most of that garbage art that the general masses views as garbage, is garbage in my opinion. Enough on that. I was just cheap.
The idea behind second one started as smaller wood cutout paintings. But I always like working big. It lets the mistakes become less noticeable, haha. That and size does have some sort of quality, small or large. The crisscrossing mountains was just an idea I had. It let the mountains support themselves rather than being a flat painting. Also, the way the mountains blend together is the crisscrossing looks interesting visually. If I can motivate myself to work a little more on this stuff, I will probably continue in this direction.
Aaron
Edited by Aaron - June 03 2006 at 16:06
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 15:24 |
Both look awesome. I like more the first one but its only because I like the color of dark wood (don't ask). I n the second theres clearly a Dean influence. I like it also really. Good stuff. If my mom sees that in a store she would definetly buy it.
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 15:36 |
very nice!
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 22:59 |
Is it me or does the first one resemble an airship from the FF series? Awesome work btw
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 23:37 |
Very cool stuff  Excellent!
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 23:40 |
God damn that's good. I'd like to make a bass neck out of that beautifull textured hardwood.
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Posted: June 03 2006 at 23:41 |
Nice, nice. Very abstract and intresting. Keep up the good work.
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Arsillus
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 00:49 |
Hey, that's awesome. I really like it. 
Must have taken a long time to accomplish. 
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Empathy
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 00:51 |
I especially like the first piece! It reminds me of some strange kind of aquatic evolutionary offshoot. I like how you've added the Boba Fett and Legolas cardboard cutouts for perspective on the second piece.
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Rust
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 02:16 |
 Both are very great. I would buy them if I saw them for sale.
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What we need is awareness we cant get careless
Mental self defensive fitness
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Aaron
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 12:27 |
The first one was my senior project in college, the second one was made two semesters ealier, both were on a time schedule, i'm a procrastinator so there was a lot of crunch time, but I kind of like to work with a deadline. Makes that last few days more exciting.
Aaron
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Aaron
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 12:28 |
and thanks for the compliments everyone, makes me think differently as to where i should be headed
but I love criticisms as well, that's what i was hoping for
Aaron
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Man Made God
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 12:34 |
I really like 'Landscape'. Great work! I could even see that hanging in
my room one day, and I'm not that big of a fan of art
As for the criticism from you professor ("sweetness"), I can agree, but that's just the thing I like about it.
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 21:15 |
Good work
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 21:24 |
The fisrt one is good...the others I dont like...but its just my opinion... ...if I could I would also post some of my art...in my case drawing
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Rust
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Posted: June 04 2006 at 22:36 |
Don't know if this is the kind of critisism you want, but I would have painted more clouds, mountains, and a sun on the background of the second one. It would add to the atmosphere that you are going for I think. It has a lot of atmosphere as it is, but a little more detail of the background would help some.
Hoped I helped.
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We got to pump the stuff to make us tough
from the heart
Its astart
What we need is awareness we cant get careless
Mental self defensive fitness
Make everybody see in order to fight the powers that be
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