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Rewriting classics... #3: Dust in the Wind |
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 Topic: Rewriting classics... #3: Dust in the WindPosted: January 04 2021 at 15:11 |
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Now, after the ambitious and long rewriting of Pirates, a much shorter one that everybody knows by heart: Kansas' Dust in the Wind. Just a reminder of the rules for those who want to join the effort: 1. One line per post (to stimulate the collaborative aspect). 2.
It has to sound a bit like the original (rhyme, sounding like... like
kids who mimic a song without knowing what they're actually singing). 3. It also has to fit the number of feet of the verses (more or less). 4. Same length as the original song. 5. In the original song there are some repetitions, but it is up to the person whose turn it is to go that way or not to repeat (and thus write an original line). In a good prog tradition, the lyrics don't necessarily have to make much sense... And don't hesitate to start a Rewriting classics #4, if you feel a certain urge... |
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Posted: January 04 2021 at 15:11 |
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I lost my ties
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Posted: January 04 2021 at 19:26 |
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Only for a breath mint and the breath mint's gone
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A curse upon the heads of those who seek their fortunes in a lie. The truth is always waiting when there's nothing left to try. - Colin Henson, Jade Warrior (Now)
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Posted: January 05 2021 at 03:23 |
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In thy streams
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Posted: January 05 2021 at 04:31 |
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Blast Dior with guys, impossibility
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Posted: January 05 2021 at 06:09 |
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Pass me the gin
(PS. A couple of decades ago I made a few song translations into Finnish, just for my own pleasure, one of them being a tongue-in-cheek, fonetically soundalike version of 'Dust in the Wind' which dealed with alcohol. Hence my choice of words here.
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Posted: January 05 2021 at 09:22 |
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Why is adultery a sin
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Posted: January 05 2021 at 18:34 |
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Lame old dog
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Posted: January 06 2021 at 04:22 |
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Just dropped acid and became aunt Bea
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Posted: January 06 2021 at 09:57 |
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All see-through
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Posted: January 06 2021 at 10:09 |
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Dumbledore's a clown, throw'im in to the sea
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Posted: January 06 2021 at 11:03 |
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Crust on the bread.
All we are is crust then we're dead....Joe! Edited by TCat - January 06 2021 at 11:05 |
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Posted: January 06 2021 at 12:58 |
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I've done Saigon
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Posted: January 06 2021 at 14:03 |
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Soldiers blast together just to burn their thighs
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Posted: January 06 2021 at 14:12 |
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I spit your way
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Posted: January 07 2021 at 10:25 |
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Why would you, honey, don't you rather spit a fly |
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Posted: January 07 2021 at 11:20 |
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Busted my shin.
All I did was eat rocks again. (All we did was eat rocks again)
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Posted: January 07 2021 at 11:32 |
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Lust is my spin Call me Dar I'm rusted within (Call me Dar I'm rusted within)
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Posted: January 07 2021 at 14:16 |
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Let me think how we could begin Or drink.
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