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Rewriting classics... #3: Dust in the Wind

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Topic: Rewriting classics... #3: Dust in the Wind
Posted By: suitkees
Subject: Rewriting classics... #3: Dust in the Wind
Date Posted: January 04 2021 at 15:11
Now, after the ambitious and long rewriting of Pirates, a much shorter one that everybody knows by heart: Kansas' Dust in the Wind.

Just a reminder of the rules for those who want to join the effort:
1. One line per post (to stimulate the collaborative aspect).
2. It has to sound a bit like the original (rhyme, sounding like... like kids who mimic a song without knowing what they're actually singing).
3. It also has to fit the number of feet of the verses (more or less).
4. Same length as the original song.
5. In the original song there are some repetitions, but it is up to the person whose turn it is to go that way or not to repeat (and thus write an original line).

In a good prog tradition, the lyrics don't necessarily have to make much sense...
And don't hesitate to start a Rewriting classics #4, if you feel a certain urge...


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The razamataz is a pain in the bum



Replies:
Posted By: suitkees
Date Posted: January 04 2021 at 15:11
I lost my ties


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Posted By: HackettFan
Date Posted: January 04 2021 at 19:26
Only for a breath mint and the breath mint's gone

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Posted By: suitkees
Date Posted: January 05 2021 at 03:23
In thy streams


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Posted By: JD
Date Posted: January 05 2021 at 04:31
Blast Dior with guys, impossibility


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Posted By: Matti
Date Posted: January 05 2021 at 06:09
Pass me the gin


(PS. A couple of decades ago I made a few song translations into Finnish, just for my own pleasure, one of them being a tongue-in-cheek, fonetically soundalike version of 'Dust in the Wind' which dealed with alcohol. Hence my choice of words hereSmile)


Posted By: JD
Date Posted: January 05 2021 at 09:22
Why is adultery a sin


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Posted By: TCat
Date Posted: January 05 2021 at 18:34
Lame old dog

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Posted By: JD
Date Posted: January 06 2021 at 04:22
Just dropped acid and became aunt Bea


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Posted By: TCat
Date Posted: January 06 2021 at 09:57
All see-through

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Posted By: JD
Date Posted: January 06 2021 at 10:09
Dumbledore's a clown, throw'im in to the sea

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Posted By: TCat
Date Posted: January 06 2021 at 11:03
Crust on the bread.
All we are is crust then we're dead....Joe!


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Posted By: JD
Date Posted: January 06 2021 at 12:58
I've done Saigon


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Posted By: suitkees
Date Posted: January 06 2021 at 14:03
Soldiers blast together just to burn their thighs


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Posted By: JD
Date Posted: January 06 2021 at 14:12
I spit your way


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Posted By: suitkees
Date Posted: January 07 2021 at 10:25
Why would you, honey, don't you rather spit a fly



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Posted By: TCat
Date Posted: January 07 2021 at 11:20
Busted my shin.
All I did was eat rocks again. (All we did was eat rocks again) 


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Posted By: JD
Date Posted: January 07 2021 at 11:32
Lust is my spin
Call me Dar I'm rusted within
(Call me Dar I'm rusted within)


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Posted By: suitkees
Date Posted: January 07 2021 at 14:16
Let me think how we could begin
Or drink.


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