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magnus
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Posted: March 18 2007 at 13:16 |
Currently working on the tracklisting for the first track of my epic concept album: A day at school. Track 1: The Awakening (time unknown as of now) The Awakening Pt. 1: Premature Awakening - A Dream - Snapping Brutally Out of a Dream - Disoriented Haze - Time Pt. 1: Panic!: - What's the Time? - Where's My Watch? - Did I Oversleep? - Time Pt. 2: Relieved: - Apparently Not - Two Hours Until Alarm Clock Rings The Awakening Pt. 2: Falling Back Into Sleep - Too Awake to Fall Asleep - I Need Sleep! - Desperate Cries for the Sandman - The Wait - Success! - The Sleeper Sleeps The Awakening Pt. 3: The Second Awakening: - The Alarm Clock / Snapping Brutally Out of a Dream With Outside Help - Where Is that Sound Coming From? - Where Is the Snooze Button? / Where Is The Hammer? - Thousand Pieces(It Was Either Me Or It) - Snooze - Time Pt. 3: Time Again: - What's The Time? Revisited - The Alarm Clock Is Broken - The Time Is Unknown, But One Thing Is Certain: I'm Late - Getting Up Physically: - Pants - Wrong Way / Pants Pt. 2 - What Shirt To Wear? - Who Needs Shirts Anyway? - On Second Thought: I Do - Fully Dressed(Almost) Planning on making a bonus track connected to Awakening Pt. 3, called "The Quest To Find A Pair Of Matching Socks" As I mentioned, this is in the works! The music has not yet been created, only the idea for the concept! The next parts will propably be called "Breakfast" and "The Journey From Home To School", and even more parts after that, and I've yet to decide whether the different parts of this epic masterpiece will be tracks or albums... Depends how much work I'll put into it(If any at all), I guess. :edit: and yes, in case you wondered, I was heavily inspired by Trouserpress' brilliant concept(and Bj-1's to some extent).
Edited by magnus - March 18 2007 at 16:31
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The scattered jigsaw of my redemption laid out before my eyes
Each piece as amorphous as the other - Each piece in its lack of shape a lie
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Vompatti
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Posted: August 30 2007 at 17:40 |
This concept is inspired by the "Ants in the Fridge"-poll. The story is like this: The protagonist (named P.) discovers ants in his apartment. Instead of killing them he decides to put the ants in the freezer thus making them more copious and eventually creating a new race of superants that would take over the world. When P. is feeding the ants they attack him and drag him into the freezer where he freezes to death. The ants leave the freezer planning to conquer the world, but since they're used to living in a freezer they can't survive in the hot temperature outside and soon die like old people in the summer. In the end it is revealed that all this was just a dream of P's.
Ants in the Freezer
1. Prologue: The Antless Days (1:25) 2. An Ant! (3:47) 3. A Vicious Plan (4:21) 4. Catch 'em Ants! (3:55) 5. Freeeeze 'em Buggers! (2:47) 6. Ants in the Freezer (3:16) 7. A Sudden Attack (2:17) 8. Locked Inside a Freezer (5:57) 9. It's Cold in 'ere (4:34) 10. Death by Freezing (5:21) 11. Ants' Departure (2:24) 12. Out of the Apartment (2:04) 13. Out of the Building (1:34) 14. It's Hot in 'ere (1:58) 15. Collective Collapse in the Sun (4:25) 16. Epilogue: From Dream to Reality (2:48)
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andu
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Posted: August 30 2007 at 20:35 |
Vompatti wrote:
This concept is inspired by the "Ants in the Fridge"-poll. The story is like this: The protagonist (named P.) discovers ants in his apartment. Instead of killing them he decides to put the ants in the freezer thus making them more copious and eventually creating a new race of superants that would take over the world. When P. is feeding the ants they attack him and drag him into the freezer where he freezes to death. The ants leave the freezer planning to conquer the world, but since they're used to living in a freezer they can't survive in the hot temperature outside and soon die like old people in the summer. In the end it is revealed that all this was just a dream of P's.
Ants in the Freezer
1. Prologue: The Antless Days (1:25) 2. An Ant! (3:47) 3. A Vicious Plan (4:21) 4. Catch 'em Ants! (3:55) 5. Freeeeze 'em Buggers! (2:47) 6. Ants in the Freezer (3:16) 7. A Sudden Attack (2:17) 8. Locked Inside a Freezer (5:57) 9. It's Cold in 'ere (4:34) 10. Death by Freezing (5:21) 11. Ants' Departure (2:24) 12. Out of the Apartment (2:04) 13. Out of the Building (1:34) 14. It's Hot in 'ere (1:58) 15. Collective Collapse in the Sun (4:25) 16. Epilogue: From Dream to Reality (2:48)
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Can I write & whistle the score for your concept? I'll only claim 40% of the sales & royalties.
Edited by andu - August 30 2007 at 20:35
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Vompatti
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Posted: August 31 2007 at 07:38 |
^ You can even record it if you like. I'll only claim 60% of the sales & royalties.
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progadicto
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Posted: September 01 2007 at 06:33 |
My concept album is based in a novel that I'm writing which some autobiographical elements...
DARK MIND
A drunk but famous writer called Satai is passing through a creative emptiness after the death of his wife. One night, he decides to find some subject for a new novel and he begins to walk through the city, talking with the most strange street characters and getting into weird and hard drugs that lead his steps to Marcellus, an older and unknown writer who claims to be immortal and one of the Jesus disciples that wrote a prohibited chapter of the Bible. Marcellus leads Satai into misterious and underground libraries full of weird tipographers, poets, spirits of dead writers and demons (sorry, I can't deny Dante's inffluences) until he find the spirit of his beloved dead wife who takes him to the surface... It's dawning and now Satai has a clear idea of what he has to write...
So there's the songs of the album...
DISC ONE
1. This Immortal Love Part I (3:58)
2. Empty Bottles (2:43)
3. The First Step (0:54)
4. Neon & Asphalt (18:30)
a) The Prostitute
b) The Lobotomy
c) The Black Crystal House
d) The Dwarf
e) Caronte
5. Relief the Pain (5:26)
6. The End of the Street (4:38)
7. The Needle (6:45)
8. Hallucinations (10:32)
9. Marcellus (6:47)
10. Marsellus' House (7:33)
11. The Tunnel (4:18)
DISC TWO
1. The Last Library of Babylon (6:29)
2. Writing on the Stars (5:21)
3. Dante's Son (5:35)
4. The Lost Disciple (7:18)
5. If God Can Write a Love Poem (3:46)
6. The First Spirit (2:37)
7. Trackl's Words (5:50)
8. The Second Spirit (2:11)
9. Bierce's Lament (3:26)
10. The Third Spirit (4:55)
11. Duel (5:43)
12. This Immortal Love Part II (6:51)
13. Marsellus' Fall (6:29)
14. Satai's Ascending (5:40)
15. Tabula Rasa (5:33)
That's all... And don't ask me which musicians I need to this album!
Edited by progadicto - September 01 2007 at 06:36
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Vompatti
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Posted: November 17 2007 at 18:54 |
I just thought of a great concept for an ambient/drone album. It's not autobiographical in any way, since I don't use public transportation devices.
A Love Life
1. Nothing Part I (20:45) - Nothing happens. 2. A Tingling Sensation (0:27) - A girl sits next to the protagonist on a public transportation device and accidentally touches his knee with her hand. 3. Nothing Part II (15:35) - Nothing happens. 4. A Dream (0:58) - The protagonist has a dream where the girl from the public transportation device smiles to him. 5. Nothing Part III (37:16) - Nothing happens.
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clarke2001
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Posted: November 18 2007 at 18:01 |
Infinity (∞)
1./6. Möbius Strip
2./5. Cardinality Of The Continuum
3./4. Gravitation Collapse
4./3. Ever-expanding universe
5./2. Division By Zero
6./1. Arithmetic Overflow
a) Möbius Strip
b) Cardinality Of The Continuum
c) Gravitation Collapse
d) Ever-expanding universe
e) Division By Zero
f) Arithmetic Overflow
i) Möbius Strip
ii) Cardinality Of The Continuum
iii) Gravitation Collapse
iv) Ever-expanding universe
v) Division By Zero
vi) Arithmetic Overflow
α) Möbius Strip
β) Cardinality Of The Continuum
γ) Gravitation Collapse
δ) Ever-expanding universe
ε) Division By Zero
ζ) Arithmetic Overflow
And so on, until one section is not labeled by the track numbers
again (printed on a CD in a circle), or until it goes out of sight with
decreasing size of a font.
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Passionist
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Posted: November 18 2007 at 18:21 |
I've written some concept poems back in the days. And i must say, reading through this thread, well, mine are completely different than what we have here in most cases, I guess people are interested in different kinds of concepts or full stories. I might post some of my stories a bit later, heh, right now I'll just quote a colletion me and my brother did some years back under the influence of a lot of alcohol:
A Hunter's journey!
I. The Journey Begins (instrumental)
II. Angry Hunter
III. Blood Shedding
IV. Facing the Great Encounter
V. Bloodhounds
VI. Part 2, The Day-Slaughter
VII. Part 3, After Execution
IX. The Reaper, The Raper (instr.)
X. f**king Apes!
Well, that's about it. Notice, that these songs too actually have a whole set of lyrics written for them. I just never wanted to make music like this so I guess it's kind of a poem too, with a purile mind etc :P
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Vompatti
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Posted: November 19 2007 at 11:34 |
The Age of Human Ovens
This album tells an exciting story that takes place in the distant
future, in the year 2008. It's the story of love, it's the story of
freedom, but most of all it's the story of a dinosaur. Mankind has used
all the oil on the planet and is desperately seeking a new source of
energy. Luckily scientists discover that heat can be turned into
electricity. The best way to produce heat is to put a cold metallic
object into one's mouth and wait for it to warm up. This is why all men
are locked into power plants where they are kept in cells and forced to
warm metal in their mouths. The power plants are run by women in
leather clothing, who keep an eye on men so that they do their job and
don't swallow any of the metal. When the metal is warm, the men spit it
into pipes which lead into a giant container where the heat is turned
into energy. Once all the heat is used and the pieces of metal are cold
again, they are returned to the cells to be reused.
The plot revolves around Miss Muriel Trout III, a young woman who works
as a guard at a power plant, and Maximillian Fudge Jr, who's one of the
metal warmers at the very same power plant. One day when Muriel is
serving Maximillian his daily meal, their eyes meet and they instantly
fall in love. Maximillian tries to think of a way to escape, so they
could hide on a remote island and live happily ever after eating
coconuts and bananas. Muriel baked him a cake and hides a pneumatic
drill inside it. Maximillian makes a hole on the floor of his cell and
escapes through it. They live happily ever after on a remote island
eating coconuts and bananas. Then, suddenly, a professor named Crumbs
discovers a living dinosaur in a hidden pyramid. THE END.
Tracklisting:
Act I
1. Looking for Energy
2. A Discovery
3. New Power Plants
4. Men as Ovens
5. The Guards in Leather Outfits
6. Don't Swallow the Metal!
Act II
7. Love at First Sight
8. An Escape Plan
9. Baking a Cake
10. Delivering the Drill
11. Making a Hole
12. The Escape
13. Coconuts and Bananas
Epilogue
14. A Journey to the Hidden Pyramid
15. Professor Crumbs Finds a Dinosaur
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Vompatti
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Posted: November 19 2007 at 16:24 |
An Incomplete List of Things to Hold on to when You're Drowning, Op. 21½
The name says it all. The music consists of instrumental pieces varying from orchestral music (Ladder) to ambient (Log) to noise (Witch).
1. Boat (3:45) 2. Oar (2:33) 3. Log (3:57) 4. Rope (6:13) 5. Ladder (5:58) 6. Duck (1:46) 7. Witch (12:47)
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clarke2001
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Posted: November 19 2007 at 16:32 |
Vompatti wrote:
An Incomplete List of Things to Hold on to when You're Drowning, Op. 21½
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name says it all. The music consists of instrumental pieces varying
from orchestral music (Ladder) to ambient (Log) to noise (Witch).
1. Boat (3:45) 2. Oar (2:33) 3. Log (3:57) 4. Rope (6:13) 5. Ladder (5:58) 6. Duck (1:46) 7. Witch (12:47)
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It's a shame that something named "Duck" on a concept album last only 1:46. Not even Jethro Tull would dare to do that!
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Vompatti
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Posted: November 19 2007 at 16:37 |
Let's face it, ducks are small. Besides, how long do you think you could hold on to a duck?
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Posted: November 19 2007 at 16:54 |
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Vompatti
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Posted: November 20 2007 at 05:28 |
Norwegian Hood
Story: A Finnish man is taking a holiday in Norway, where he accidentally bumps his car into a black metal band. No one gets hurt, thanks to the immortality the band members have reached by practising certain occultistic rituals. The Finnish man doesn't get hurt either because his beer belly works as an airbag, but sadly the hood of the car bends so that it blocks the view through the windshield. Luckily, there's a legendary Norwegian blacksmith nearby who specializes in hoods. While making a new hood for the man's car the blacksmith, whose artist name is Black Smith, tells the man an epic story about how a Norwegian fisherman named Hans Olafsson slayed a dragon with a spoon.
Tracklisting: 1. A Song for Norway (3:01) 2. Metal Against Black Metal (5:43) 3. Bent Hood (4:54) 4. Blacksmith (6:17) 5. The Story of a Fisherman Who Slayed a Dragon with a Spoon (25:44)
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Posted: November 20 2007 at 06:13 |
Vompatti wrote:
5. The Story of a Fisherman Who Slayed a Dragon with a Spoon (25:44)
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It starts with the words: this is the story of a fisherman who slayed dragon with a spoon! (sniff)
Sorry I couldn't resist...
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Posted: January 07 2008 at 13:14 |
Boy, Have I Got a Tooth for My Love!
This album tells the love story of a dentist and a strange women who collects teeth. The dentist saves the teeth he pulls and gives them to his loved one who makes exotic jewelry out of them. One day, on a mysterious dark alley, the dentist meets a female vampire. Seeing her fangs he decides to steal them when she sleeps. He tells her girlfriend of this vampire and promises to bring her the vampire's fangs. He begins to follow the vampire and wait for an opportunity to get hold of her teeth. He watches how she hunts for blood and sings old chansons near the sea. Suddenly he falls madly in love with the vampire. Unafraid he goes to the vampire, gives her flowers and tells her of his feelings. The vampire could suck all his blood, but being a nice vampire she only takes a sip and lets him drink some of hers so that he will also become a vampire and they can live together and sing old chansons by the sea holding hands. The dentist's girlfriend, however, is still waiting for the fangs he promised her. Since he can't take the teeth of the vampire he loves, he decides to make porcelain replicas of her fangs and give them to his girlfriend. But, alas, the girlfriend is an expert of teeth and soon realizes that the teeth are fake and that her dentist has fallen in love with the vampire. In furious anger she attacks the dentist with the porcelain fangs, but the dentist is faster and kills her with a single bite. The dentist is kind of sad because he had to kill her ex-girlfriend, but soon he forgets about her and lives happily ever after with the vampire, singing old chansons by the sea.
Tracklisting:
1. Pulling Teeth for Her (3:26) 2. Dark Alley (4:48) 3. Mysterious Woman (7:34) 4. Promise (3:03) 5. Trail of the Vampire (6:45) 6. Liquid Dinner at the Harbour (5:43) 7. Chansons by the Sea, Part I (4:02) 8. Roses for the Vampire (6:58) 9. Eternal Love Life (7:09) 10. Porcelain Fangs (5:04) 11. A Brief Struggle Ending in Death (4:23) 12. Chansons by the Sea, Part II (10:57)
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Posted: January 07 2008 at 13:40 |
magnus wrote:
Currently working on the tracklisting for the first track of my epic concept album: A day at school.
Track 1: The Awakening (time unknown as of now)
The Awakening Pt. 1: Premature Awakening - A Dream - Snapping Brutally Out of a Dream - Disoriented Haze - Time Pt. 1: Panic!: - What's the Time? - Where's My Watch? - Did I Oversleep? - Time Pt. 2: Relieved: - Apparently Not - Two Hours Until Alarm Clock Rings The Awakening Pt. 2: Falling Back Into Sleep - Too Awake to Fall Asleep - I Need Sleep! - Desperate Cries for the Sandman - The Wait - Success! - The Sleeper Sleeps
The Awakening Pt. 3: The Second Awakening: - The Alarm Clock / Snapping Brutally Out of a Dream With Outside Help - Where Is that Sound Coming From? - Where Is the Snooze Button? / Where Is The Hammer? - Thousand Pieces(It Was Either Me Or It) - Snooze - Time Pt. 3: Time Again: - What's The Time? Revisited - The Alarm Clock Is Broken - The Time Is Unknown, But One Thing Is Certain: I'm Late - Getting Up Physically: - Pants - Wrong Way / Pants Pt. 2 - What Shirt To Wear? - Who Needs Shirts Anyway? - On Second Thought: I Do - Fully Dressed(Almost)
Planning on making a bonus track connected to Awakening Pt. 3, called "The Quest To Find A Pair Of Matching Socks"
As I mentioned, this is in the works! The music has not yet been created, only the idea for the concept! The next parts will propably be called "Breakfast" and "The Journey From Home To School", and even more parts after that, and I've yet to decide whether the different parts of this epic masterpiece will be tracks or albums... Depends how much work I'll put into it(If any at all), I guess.
:edit: and yes, in case you wondered, I was heavily inspired by Trouserpress' brilliant concept(and Bj-1's to some extent).
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You forgot "A Rude Awakening", in which the protagonist finally wakes up and notices he has dreamt all this and is 2 hours late for work!
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BaldJean and I; I am the one in blue.
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Posted: January 07 2008 at 15:11 |
The Hive. An SF-concept album. 1. A Beautiful Stranger and a Strange Book 2:21 2. Chased by Drones 3:38 3. "Subject One Contacted!" 1:53 4. A Strange Letter 2:23 5. The Old Switching Handbags Trick 2:25 6. "Subject Two Contacted!" 1:53 7. First Meeting of the Queens 3:03 8. A Long Term Genetic Experiment 2:50 9. The Captured Queens 3:25 10. Denudation 3:01 11. Cloning the Eggs 5:12 12. Fertilization 2:59 13. Breeding Machines 5:15 14. Who Are the Good Guys? 3:03 15. The Escape 5:38 16. Drones Again 3:48 17. Chased by Drones and Workers 3:53 18. In Hiding 2:40 19. Giving Birth 4:41 20. Found! 3:12 21. Final Confrontation 6:03 22. Epilogue 2:41 Try and work out the story, if you can.
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BaldJean and I; I am the one in blue.
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Rushman
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Posted: January 07 2008 at 16:05 |
Last Sight
Tells the story of a man who doesn't realize what he has until he is on his death-bed, and it's too late.
1. Overture/Into Life (7:52)
2. The Meeting (4:25)
3. Falling (5:08)
4. Ignoring The Obvious (Instrumental) (11:41)
5. The Neglected (6:33)
6. Solitude (1:59)
7. It Is Finished (18:25)
I. Realization
II. Love At Last Sight
III. The Passing
Running Time 56:03
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Posted: January 08 2008 at 14:44 |
One Yellow Moment More
There's a 67-year old man who has always worn yellow sunglasses and thus seen the world as yellow. One day when he's walking on a bridge he trips on a branch and drops his sunglasses in the river. He's so used to seeing the world as yellow that watching it in different colours makes him dizzy and feel physical pain.
So he closes his eyes and begins to crawl towards the sunglasses shop. When he finally gets there he's told that yellow sunglasses are out of fashion and they don't stock them anymore. The man explains the situation and begs for them to order yellow sunglasses for him. The shopkeeper agrees, but it soon turns out that yellow sunglasses are so 80's that no company manufactures them anymore.
The shopkeeper is kind enough to contact the manager of a famous sunglasses company and ask him to make yellow sunglasses for the man. The manager tells the shopkeeper that they always make 10000 sunglasses at a time. Because nobody buys yellow sunglasses anymore, the man has to buy all 10000 pairs. The only way for the man to get enough money for the sunglasses is to become a recording blues artist who always keeps his eyes closed.
By the time he has enough money ($199500) he's 84 years old. He sends the money in a large envelope to the sunglasses company and receives his yellow sunglasses a month later. He puts the sunglasses on, opens his eyes, takes one more look at the yellow world, closes his eyes and dies with a yellow image in his mind.
Tracklisting: 1. Yellow World (5:02) 2. A Walk Across the Bridge (2:34) 3. Goodbye, Yellow World (2:56) 4. A Long Dark Crawl (7:26) 5. No Yellow Glasses (3:09) 6. 10000 Or None (2:55) 7. Yellow Blues (9:54) 8. The Glasses Arrive (2:23) 9. Last Look of the Yellow World (4:46) 10. Yellow Darkness (5:13)
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