Something I wrote!
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Topic: Something I wrote!
Posted By: Radioactive Toy
Subject: Something I wrote!
Date Posted: June 01 2004 at 12:39
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Hope you'll enjoy it.. wrote it a month/2 month's ago, please give me your opinion etc.
They became inventive, creative and started communication. Tired of each other and themselves they began searching... Searching for different ways, other approaches. These creatures kept talking until one of them raged. On this very moment the sun went down, over seas and acres of land. When his rage calmed, they followed this sun where they approached small creatures, intelligent non the less. As gifted to talk as they are, they will not speak. In the silence they live in they achieve peace. Accepting each other for what they are. These creatures lived “in harmonium”, and by the sight of these They raged, for they lived in terror. When comparing all these beautiful things, makes all these of wich is not, greater. So terror grew, their rage with them. Their rage fed the flame of terror wich was searching for more wood to burn on. As they found each other to burn on, the sun disappeared, leaving these two alone. For they have found, but not have been able to achieve peace. For leaving the sun because of this ignorance their silence will now be complete. -------------  
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Posted By: Dan Bobrowski
Date Posted: June 01 2004 at 12:55
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You don't know what you've got 'til it's gone. How true RT, how true. Brought a tear to my eye. I can't wait to hear this in song form. |
Posted By: dude
Date Posted: June 02 2004 at 11:47
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WOW!!!! |
Posted By: diddy
Date Posted: June 02 2004 at 12:19
Hey, nice...I liked it...It has a bit of Anathema lyrics  ------------- If liberty means anything at all, it means the right to tell people what they do not want to hear... George Orwell |
Posted By: Radioactive Toy
Date Posted: June 02 2004 at 14:21
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Thank you guys (so far ) ! I'm (my brother is really) making a portfolio site right now, this WILL contain own writings, paintings, music and drawings.. also my "work" so far as "painter" (I'm working already for some - not much - money). also some things about myself etc. I'll let you guys know! and by the way.. diddy.. wich anathema lyrics?  -------------
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Posted By: Joren
Date Posted: June 02 2004 at 15:26
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Very nice!
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Posted By: Jim Garten
Date Posted: June 02 2004 at 15:32
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RT - I'm extremely impressed, especially given that English is not your first language (or did you write it in your own language first, then translate?).
Top marks - our dear departed English professor would be proud  ------------- 
Jon Lord 1941 - 2012 |
Posted By: Radioactive Toy
Date Posted: June 03 2004 at 02:12
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Danbo has made some corrections, i tought it were 2.. I wrote witch instead of wich, and uhmm another one thanks again.. my portfolio site is getting there already! -------------
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Posted By: dude
Date Posted: June 03 2004 at 03:49
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PERHAPS THERE COULD BE A THREAD WHERE FORUM MEMBERS COULD SUBMIT ORIGINAL POETRY (VERY)SHORT STORIES ETC
ANY THOUGHTS PEOPLE??? |
Posted By: Joren
Date Posted: June 03 2004 at 04:05
| I don't know how many poets we have here... but it sounds interesting! |
Posted By: diddy
Date Posted: June 03 2004 at 07:19
If we could post some art (digital in my case) as well I could also contribute something
 like I did in the "art" thread...but I don't have very much new works because I had to do my school tests but now I'm ready and I'm working on a thing refering to prog. I need good pictures of prog-musicians, if anyone has some or knows where I can find good ones (with a higher resolution) you can PM me and I will see if I can use it, but maybe it would be better if everyone is able to identify those musicians so stick to the big and well known bands...
But I don't know how long this will take, till now I only have ideas, noting worked yet... ------------- If liberty means anything at all, it means the right to tell people what they do not want to hear... George Orwell |
dude wrote:Posted By: Dan Bobrowski
Date Posted: June 03 2004 at 10:55
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Check out the Progressive Ears web-site. If you join, you'll have access to photos and such. http://www.progressiveears.com/Default.asp?bhcp=1 - http://www.progressiveears.com/Default.asp?bhcp=1 It may be helpful. Our own OWL has submitted quite a few photos. PM him, he may share? |