Rate My Review
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Topic: Rate My Review
Posted By: Conor Fynes
Subject: Rate My Review
Date Posted: November 09 2012 at 22:06
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Hey, noticed some things lately for people to commend reviews they really liked, which is very cool. Was thinking we could have a running thing where people can post their reviews here for tips, criticism and feedback. I'll first post my latest review here, of Steve Hackett's Voyage of the Acolyte. It's a very emotional album for me, and I am trying to make my writing less dry and boring, hopefully making it a little more personal and engaging to the reader. If you can offer any criticism (as harsh as it needs to be) and can give any tips on how to improve on this or any other reviews I've written, I'd gladly accept any feedback, good or bad! My Review: http://www.progarchives.com/Review.asp?id=854034 Cheers! Conor
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Posted By: thellama73
Date Posted: November 09 2012 at 22:18
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Voyage of the Acolyte is a strange album for me. When I listen to it I think "This is good. This is a good album." But I never want to listen to it and I don't find any of the songs memorable (I can't remember a single tune from the album now and I am trying.) I guess it just doesn't connect with me, although it is well composed, performed and produced. I didn't read your review. It was long. But I thought your paragraph length and spacing was very aesthetically pleasing. ------------- 
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Posted By: Atavachron
Date Posted: November 09 2012 at 22:54
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maybe post reviews here instead of a link |
Posted By: smartpatrol
Date Posted: November 09 2012 at 23:17
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Fantastic review. I was annoyed at how in the first paragraph you said " may be seen as the route Genesis would have taken, had Hackett been given full control instead of Collins." Collins was not the only one who wanted the band to go pop. Both Mike and Tony wanted to move into that direction, and I am infuriated by people who say otherwise. But other than that It's great
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Posted By: Conor Fynes
Date Posted: November 10 2012 at 01:20
How?
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Atavachron wrote:Posted By: lazland
Date Posted: November 10 2012 at 03:28
Very good post  I, too, get sick and tired of this unfair Collins bashing. ------------- Enhance your life. Get down to www.lazland.org Now also broadcasting on www.progzilla.com Every Saturday, 4.00 p.m. UK time! |