New(Old style)prog tune. Any extra ideas?
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Topic: New(Old style)prog tune. Any extra ideas?
Posted By: PROGMONSTER2008
Subject: New(Old style)prog tune. Any extra ideas?
Date Posted: July 08 2009 at 19:20
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I'm just working on a new tune and I'm about half there. So it's only about 3 minutes long at the moment. But I'm not sure if i need to add anything or not. It has all the usual prog instruments such as Hammond, Rhodes, Moog and Mellotron and I put a phaser effect on the guitar in bits plus some chorus on the Rhodes. I even made use of the washboard lol. It's called Car chase. Do I need to add anything to the first 3 minutes to improve it?
 http://www.sendspace.com/file/o0lmo8 - http://www.sendspace.com/file/o0lmo8 ------------- Jazz/Classical Rock(70's style prog/fusion). Lots of prog keys and melodies(all original ideas) http://www.myspace.com/vigilante2008" rel="nofollow - http://www.myspace.com/vigilante2008 |
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Posted By: Atavachron
Date Posted: July 08 2009 at 19:47
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there are two cuts here, or is my itunes going nuts? anyway, the 4:19 cut I liked, something there for sure.. the 3 minute cut is OK but it could use some energy by about :45, maybe a change with some power |
Posted By: Atavachron
Date Posted: July 08 2009 at 19:50
| BTW, I suspect this may be moved to a more appropriate forum like Musician's Exchange or something |
Posted By: PROGMONSTER2008
Date Posted: July 08 2009 at 22:07
What's the 4:19 cut?
There's 1 track which goes for about 2:58 lol ------------- Jazz/Classical Rock(70's style prog/fusion). Lots of prog keys and melodies(all original ideas) http://www.myspace.com/vigilante2008" rel="nofollow - http://www.myspace.com/vigilante2008 |
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