What do you think about my reviews?
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Topic: What do you think about my reviews?
Posted By: Marcos
Subject: What do you think about my reviews?
Date Posted: June 04 2007 at 11:51
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Well... what do you think? My english is poor... I think I'm a good writer in Spanish, but write in English is too difficult for me. I'd like verbalizing that I can say in spanish about an album, but... I don't know how is the result.
And... What about my review's contents?
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Posted By: Easy Livin
Date Posted: June 04 2007 at 12:10
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You're doing fine Marcos. Some of your expressions can be amusing in English ("Raconteur, Troubador": a strange song. It has many condiments like the complete album.*****), but that is part of their character.
The paragraph spacing would be improved if you used <p> to start a new paragraph, without any further spacing.
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Posted By: Marcos
Date Posted: June 04 2007 at 12:55
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Thanks Easy Livin... Sometimes I fall in direct translations from Spanish to English. The example that you cite is a common expression in Spanish...
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Posted By: Easy Livin
Date Posted: June 04 2007 at 15:06
| Is it the same word as in English, which means salt and pepper etc.? I wonder if perhaps you were looking for "components"? |
Posted By: Marcos
Date Posted: June 04 2007 at 17:05
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Is the same word. Well... the expression is a metaphor. The meaning is the same if I say 'components'
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Posted By: Marcos
Date Posted: June 07 2007 at 15:32
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anymore? ------------- www.postmortemweb.com.ar |
Posted By: chopper
Date Posted: June 07 2007 at 17:34
| I've read your review of The Yes Album as I haven't heard many of the other albums. I can't see anything much wrong with it, your English seems pretty good to me. |
Posted By: martinn
Date Posted: June 10 2007 at 17:40
I think the correct translation would be: it has many different flavors. ------------- 
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Easy Livin wrote:Posted By: Marcos
Date Posted: June 22 2007 at 17:29
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Thanks Martinn!
check out my new reviews:
Can - "Future Days"
Neal Morse - "One" & "?" ------------- www.postmortemweb.com.ar |
Posted By: martinn
Date Posted: June 23 2007 at 13:59
Uhhh argentino y cinco estrellas para Octopus. Excelente...
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