CANO Bio

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   This is just a small, single, minor error (which I even missed upon the first read). 

These French-Canadian group
(but not Quebecois), is from the Northern-Ontario province where almost
half the population is francophone. CANO stands for Cooperative
Artistes du Nouvel Ontario and they were based in the city of Sudbury.
Formed as far back as 71, and from an ideal semi-hippy-pastoral commune
and developing into theater, poetry, writers, and a whole bunch of
artisans/craftsmen and a 320 acres Buffalo ranch. This commune
attracted people from all over Northern Ontario, Quebec, Acadians from
Eastern Canada. One of the branches became the musical group, and
recorded in late 75 their debut album after being together for over
three years. 
Their music exemplifies best the Northern Canadian
Pioneering spirit, and lyrically, the songs often make reference to the
harsh conditi"These
French-Canadian group (but not Quebecois), is from the Northern-Ontario
province where almost half the population is francophone."

The sentence should either be changed to "This French-Canadian group..." or "These French-Canadians...are from...". The former is probably easiest and was likely the initial aim. 

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Shakespeare Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: July 18 2006 Status: Offline Points: 7744	Topic: CANO Bio Posted: October 17 2007 at 21:46
	This is just a small, single, minor error (which I even missed upon the first read). "These French-Canadian group (but not Quebecois), is from the Northern-Ontario province where almost half the population is francophone." The sentence should either be changed to "This French-Canadian group..." or "These French-Canadians...are from...". The former is probably easiest and was likely the initial aim.

Tuzvihar Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: May 18 2005 Location: C. Schinesghe Status: Offline Points: 13536	Posted: October 18 2007 at 13:53
	Fixed.
	"Music is much like f**king, but some composers can't climax and others climax too often, leaving themselves and the listener jaded and spent." Charles Bukowski

Shakespeare Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: July 18 2006 Status: Offline Points: 7744	Posted: October 20 2007 at 12:17


Sean Trane Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Prog Folk Joined: April 29 2004 Location: Heart of Europe Status: Offline Points: 20412	Posted: October 20 2007 at 12:20
	oooops!!!!!! thanks
	let's just stay above the moral melee prefer the sink to the gutter keep our sand-castle virtues content to be a doer as well as a thinker, prefer lifting our pen rather than un-sheath our sword

Shakespeare Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: July 18 2006 Status: Offline Points: 7744	Posted: October 20 2007 at 12:23
	It's so easy to make silly little mistakes like that. In my case, I normally omit words. (Bye, see [you] later.) On last.fm, Folly's shoutbox is full of typos from yours truly.