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Solo

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Posted: October 14 2006 at 01:59

Edited by Solo - November 10 2006 at 16:10

Pnoom!

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Posted: October 18 2006 at 17:52

The second one has potential (I've heard the first two).

RaúlGuate

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Posted: October 18 2006 at 18:18

Actually the second one is quite good. But it all depends on the direction you're looking for your career. If you want to be totally experimental, go ahead doing something like that. But if you want easier to listen stuff, I suggest you try to write stronger themes.

Did you manipulate something after recording? In two of bits "Marching" it seems like all the song dropped an 1/8 of a tone or something like that. Just check if you're aware of that and want it in your song.

As for talent, you do seem to be very accomplished in your instruments. I had one problem, though. The keys sounded too bland. May be trying more and different sounds, perhaps an atmosferic sound when the keys aren't lead.

Just my humble suggestion, I'm not a master-musician.

andu

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Posted: October 18 2006 at 18:28

i'm listening right now to everyting you uploaded, congrats, i'd like to have your instrument & writing abilities, actually to have any. in your place, i would concentrate on only one instrument, in order to get better and better, and i'd try to set up a band. a band writing perfomance comes from adding all the members' writing skills, imo. it's just like playing soccer one against one vs team against team - where's the great soccer played?

Tenth Chaffinch View Drop Down

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Posted: November 01 2006 at 19:52

You definately have potential, no doubt about it. I heard the second and third ones so far. Reminds me of a really quirky National Health recording. Sounds great, you seem to have great control of the instruments.

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Pnoom! Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 02 2006 Location: OH Status: Offline Points: 4981	Posted: October 18 2006 at 17:52
	The second one has potential (I've heard the first two).

RaúlGuate Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: May 21 2006 Location: Guatemala Status: Offline Points: 146	Posted: October 18 2006 at 18:18
	Actually the second one is quite good. But it all depends on the direction you're looking for your career. If you want to be totally experimental, go ahead doing something like that. But if you want easier to listen stuff, I suggest you try to write stronger themes. Did you manipulate something after recording? In two of bits "Marching" it seems like all the song dropped an 1/8 of a tone or something like that. Just check if you're aware of that and want it in your song. As for talent, you do seem to be very accomplished in your instruments. I had one problem, though. The keys sounded too bland. May be trying more and different sounds, perhaps an atmosferic sound when the keys aren't lead. Just my humble suggestion, I'm not a master-musician.

andu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: September 27 2006 Location: Romania Status: Offline Points: 3089	Posted: October 18 2006 at 18:28
	i'm listening right now to everyting you uploaded, congrats, i'd like to have your instrument & writing abilities, actually to have any. in your place, i would concentrate on only one instrument, in order to get better and better, and i'd try to set up a band. a band writing perfomance comes from adding all the members' writing skills, imo. it's just like playing soccer one against one vs team against team - where's the great soccer played?

Tenth Chaffinch Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: April 22 2006 Location: Singapore Status: Offline Points: 203	Posted: November 01 2006 at 19:52
	You definately have potential, no doubt about it. I heard the second and third ones so far. Reminds me of a really quirky National Health recording. Sounds great, you seem to have great control of the instruments.
	www.myspace.com/fatherunderground