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    Posted: November 11 2005 at 13:37

Hello everyone

 

I have written and recorded a new song – Stormy Skies – please feel free to have a listen via the link below and your feedback on the song all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc) is most welcome

 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=252119

 

Lyrics

 

Each word you speak to me makes me now believe, makes me start to dream

Sometimes the doubts still fill my mind

Was it just a dream or just another broken lie?

 

I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun

Someday I’ll fly away

Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts

Someday I’ll fly away

 

Everyday I start to cry

Searching for answers I must find

Everyday I question why

My life is like the stormy skies

 

Each time you come to me, deep inside my heart I feel were apart

Once we were stronger every day

Now it seems the memory has slowly ebbed away

 

I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun

Someday I’ll fly away

Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts

Someday I’ll fly away

 

Everyday I start to cry

Searching for answers I must find

Everyday I question why

My life is like the stormy skies

 

(c) PFM 07/11/05
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Points: 20029 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 11 2005 at 13:56
Nice guitar work. The MP3 doesn't play very well on my PC, which may be just my PC - the vocals sound a bit muffled and it breaks up in places.
Not really my sort of music but it's very professionally done. Needs some drums though!
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Points: 13 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 11 2005 at 14:01

Originally posted by chopper chopper wrote:

Nice guitar work. The MP3 doesn't play very well on my PC, which may be just my PC - the vocals sound a bit muffled and it breaks up in places.
Not really my sort of music but it's very professionally done. Needs some drums though!

Cheers for taking a listen and posting your thoughts - glad you liked the guitars

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Points: 1381 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 11 2005 at 21:40

well i only got to hear the intro..then it stoped working....

Honestly I dont like it. The two seperate guitar lines dont correspond in volume, and in notation, and also they are not on beat....

Plus i really dont like that kind of music....
But The ideas are there. Just polish them and it willl be good.
I can strangle a canary in a tin can and it would be really original, but that wouldn't save it from sounding like utter sh*t.
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Originally posted by BePinkTheater BePinkTheater wrote:

well i only got to hear the intro..then it stoped working....

Honestly I dont like it. The two seperate guitar lines dont correspond in volume, and in notation, and also they are not on beat....

Plus i really dont like that kind of music....
But The ideas are there. Just polish them and it willl be good.

Thanks for taking a listen and posting your comments  I did struggle a little bit with the timing on the intro
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