I'm not a WBGarden musician, but I know some (or even all?) of that band's members are internet oriented so they may appreciate insightful suggestions!
I've listened to your track, and found myself transported into a place "painted" by the music, which is to me the most important thing.
The guitar panned on the right is louder than what's on the left : if someone speaks louder on my right side I'll want to turn my head right, in order for the sound to get into my ears equally. So you may infer that something prevents the listener's head from moving, not a comfortable situation.
I'd describe the guitar sound as "dry-iced", the other sounds suggest a cooler busy mood.
If that can be of any help...
Edited by jayem - November 09 2014 at 12:59