My songs

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   So I've recently been writing more and more, and for the first time in my life it feels like I can actually create a body of work in music. I'd like to hear some feedback on my songs. These are all demos or rough mixes. I played everything on all of these songs (except for what was sampled of course.) 
http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/time-wont-let-me-go-demo (just a demo, I'm going to record a finished version later)

http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/lizards-stake (I'm going to remix this and tighten it up a bit.) 

http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/spirits-song (again this needs a lot more work but I don't know if I ever will finish it) 

http://soundcloud.com/got_a_guitar/tears-by-jake-kobrin (this was the first thing I ever recorded) 

http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/abstract-remixed (again, despite that it says it has been re-mixed, I'm going to improve upon it)

http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/gothic (this was barely mixed at all - needs a lot more work)

If you could give some feedback, I'd really appreciate it! 

Thanks,
Jake

p.s. my main instrument is bass, so as for the other instruments, I'm coming from a place of basically zero competency. 

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Jake Kobrin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: September 20 2008 Status: Offline Points: 1303	Topic: My songs Posted: November 09 2011 at 12:41
	So I've recently been writing more and more, and for the first time in my life it feels like I can actually create a body of work in music. I'd like to hear some feedback on my songs. These are all demos or rough mixes. I played everything on all of these songs (except for what was sampled of course.) http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/time-wont-let-me-go-demo (just a demo, I'm going to record a finished version later) http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/lizards-stake (I'm going to remix this and tighten it up a bit.) http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/spirits-song (again this needs a lot more work but I don't know if I ever will finish it) http://soundcloud.com/got_a_guitar/tears-by-jake-kobrin (this was the first thing I ever recorded) http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/abstract-remixed (again, despite that it says it has been re-mixed, I'm going to improve upon it) http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/gothic (this was barely mixed at all - needs a lot more work) If you could give some feedback, I'd really appreciate it! Thanks, Jake p.s. my main instrument is bass, so as for the other instruments, I'm coming from a place of basically zero competency.
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Jake Kobrin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Prog Reviewer Joined: September 20 2008 Status: Offline Points: 1303	Posted: November 14 2011 at 17:30
	I just uploaded a cover of Fleet Foxes' Montezuma: http://soundcloud.com/jkobrin/montezuma
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