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    Posted: January 21 2005 at 12:38

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Ok, My grade 8 english class had a project over the Holidays for ENglish and we had to write some lyrics for poem time, so I decided to write some PROG LYRICS: its called SWARM OF FLIES

 

I can hear it coming in the dark night 
I can see it in the light         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;      

And it gives me a fright, Oh Lord...

Well, if you told me you wee frowning
I woulld wink and smile
I'd see it in your frowning face friend
WHo am i? WHo am I?
Well, I saw that you looked
I saw it with my special eyes
So you can put on the grin, I know where you've been
It's all bee n a swarm of flies........ (a metaphor)

I can hear it coming in the dark night 
I can see it in the light         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;         & nbsp;      

And it gives me a fright, Oh Lord...

Remember dont feel sorry

That we had a fun time the last time we met
But I know the reason why you keep your silence up, no you don't fool me
The pain doesn't show; but the pain still flows
It's not that weird to me

Like a pck of flies, of flies, of flies

 

OF flies!


 

 

"The world is in your hands, now use it." Good'ol Phil
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 12:39

I didnt put the & NSP

 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 12:45

dogs hit !

birds hit !

Its a miss!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 12:47
...hahhaa... "I can feel you plagarizing in the air tonight, oh lord." Way to go Guruz
something pretentious
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 13:31

 

 

No, KPG its like your Posts:

"I wish that for just one time

you could stand inside my shoes

You'd know what a drag it is to see you."

 

Sorry Bob

 



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 15:46
Oh, my favourite bits were the;

& nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp;          & nbsp; 


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 18:52
good job Guruz! You're sure to get an A in poetry class! by any chance was your song inspired by hmmm.... Phil Collins' in the air tonight?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 20:59
You gotta love originality
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Unfortunately, John came fifth and was stuck with a toaster.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 21:46
I really don't think I've ever heard anything like that before! I AM DUTCH11
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 21 2005 at 22:20
Originally posted by Hangedman Hangedman wrote:

good job Guruz! You're sure to get an A in poetry class! by any chance was your song inspired by hmmm.... Phil Collins' in the air tonight?


Lol, I didnt steal that cuz I was inspired like genesis is sometimes! cuz i realy like phil and heminspired me to write this cuz, i really like his love songs!
"The world is in your hands, now use it." Good'ol Phil
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 22 2005 at 16:28

I love the metaphor about a swarm of flies. That is such a romantic image. Uncle Phil would be proud KPG, you're something of a budding young Byron aren't you?

Keep up the good work!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 22 2005 at 16:37

I detect a subtle subtext concerning the filthy habit that teenage boys have of giving themselves pleasure manually - I refer to no less than the sin of Onan!

Have a care youing sir, or you could look like this before your 18th birthday!

 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 22 2005 at 19:21

Well the swarm of flies ,metaphor is about how sometimes theres so much goig

on in life and sometiems your friends are annoying like flies But sometimes I want to

do an even more metaphorical poem LIKe about like a fish cauight in a bowl./ I was

going to write one about the fish in a bowl and the bowl is society and we

cant swim out, But im not done it yet.

"The world is in your hands, now use it." Good'ol Phil
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 22 2005 at 19:24
Post it up. I can't wait to see more. Maybe I'll be inspired, and become a much better song writer.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 22 2005 at 20:09

I have my poem so far

     YOu are in a bowl

      and have no goal,

    but to get out

   and shout

    for freedom

     you look and see the fake fish wallpaper on the side

      and you know they lied

     and you want to go through

     but how, you dont have a clue

to go to the

     to the free ocean

"The world is in your hands, now use it." Good'ol Phil
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 23 2005 at 01:29
Wow, I'm impressed K00l. The imagery, the emotion! So powerful! I can't believe I'm talking to th enext Phil Collins!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 23 2005 at 03:06
You call those lyrics? I call them a train wreck!!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: January 23 2005 at 15:04

I call it a masterpiece. I espcially like how you used syntax to express emotion!

...or something...



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