Feedback on a new mix snippet

Hello all,
So it's been a really busy past couple of months for me, but for a good reason! My feeble solo project has matured into a full-fledged band, and we have been working immensely hard on creating a new album which is in the final writing stages. In the meantime, I personally have been working a lot on mixing and would love to hear what you all think of a snippet our drummer recorded for a track on an album. It's a Facebook video, but the mix is a rough, unmastered version of what we will be going for!

https://www.facebook.com/RaindropCollector/videos/1714260845533752/

Some context as well: this song is on in a series of very dark vignette-styled looks at the underbelly of mental health. This particular track is about a killer who leads a seemingly normal life, but conceals a dark side (basically it's about Dennis Rader, or BTK).

That said I would absolutely love to hear what you think of it mix-wise. It was basically thrown together in a few hours, but it's something I feel comfortable and proud to share with you all.

*and if you liked what you heard, please don't hesitate to follow us :)
-JB