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Vompatti
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Posted: February 10 2010 at 16:59 |
I don't think mankind deserved it.
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 10 2010 at 17:00 |
Well, the end is quite satisfactory, don't you think?
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 10 2010 at 17:02 |
How could it not be? There's an explosion in it!
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 10 2010 at 17:05 |
Yes, that does it still Hollywood on PA. Proggywood. I'm completely objective about it, but maybe it should become a sort of series like James Bond. Dr. Igor in the main role of course. That I play Igor has nothing to do with it, of course.
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The Runaway
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Posted: February 10 2010 at 23:47 |
FIP has actually started to draw better thanks to this thread! LAWL
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 11 2010 at 14:38 |
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The Sleepwalker
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Posted: February 11 2010 at 14:43 |
That's a great story! Though not being very long, it had two brilliant twists in the great plot! I really expected you to become a wompire instead of the BSWD, and the French cafe was an awesome ending!
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 11 2010 at 14:45 |
Thanks!
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The Sleepwalker
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Posted: February 11 2010 at 14:53 |
What's that show on the TV in the story?
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 11 2010 at 14:55 |
Yes, bravo! It has an unexpected end and a happy end which is not cheesy. There's a nice contrast in the storyline as well which creates an immense tension.
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 11 2010 at 14:55 |
Can't you see it's a documentary about Robert Crumb?
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 03:47 |
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 03:49 |
Sorry for jampa, rushfan, birdwithteeth and others for not including you on this page, but let's say... to be continued!
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 03:52 |
I look fat in it.
Edited by Vompatti - February 12 2010 at 03:52
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 03:54 |
I told you to stay away from the potato chips.
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 03:57 |
But they're so inexpensive and tasty!
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 04:01 |
Well, next time I'll Photoshop my Photobucket file. You'll look like a size 36 wombat.
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 04:03 |
Thanks!
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Moogtron III
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 04:05 |
I'm mr. Nice Guy, as you can see from my story. It's not too syrupy, is it?
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Vompatti
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Posted: February 12 2010 at 04:06 |
No it's not, although I did wait for a violent ending.
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