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kyrandia View Drop Down
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    Posted: July 14 2017 at 12:31
Hello everybody,

I rarely come on the forum, and I would want your opinion on a musical composition.
I and my working colleagues played this piece, recorded by a smartphone, so sorry for the sound.
We are not guitar hero Smile
Do you think It's sound Proggy ?
Thank you for your opinion.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3hpeL9gQlD8
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Points: 242 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 14 2017 at 15:39

Hey there,

 

to be frank, it is OK, but boring, because as long as repetitive, and to me it sounds like elevator music, muzak, not progressive. 3 *** out of 5. Supportable et peut-être que votre prochain morceau sera envoûtant !
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Points: 13352 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 15 2017 at 08:39
Not a bad piece. Obviously needs some work, but the original idea is good. A bit long I think, specially since you're going over and over the same riff, but it has potential.
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Points: 32 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 27 2017 at 03:44
Thank you for your answer !!!
Now, we made a studio version with my guitar teacher, with pretty sound, guitar solo, and shorter track...as you notice...
Enjoy !!!  
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFlJj2Nu0_k&t=134s
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