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    Posted: August 14 2015 at 07:03
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Points: 23104 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2015 at 08:03
Hi there:)
I moved your thread to the 'Musicians exchange' part of the forum.
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Points: 1376 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2015 at 08:09
I like the most calm parts... you should invest under the progression of that parts. Thumbs Up
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Points: 7951 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2015 at 09:20
A lot of it was on the boring side. Metal or Prog Metal fans might like that. It needs some additional point of interest for me. A little more to hang your hat on. The intro needs something swooshing in the background or something; although it's a pretty cool and dramatic sound, as the sole focal point in a recording it just gives the feeling of someone playing in their bedroom. It's better than a recording I recently made a couple days ago, though.
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Points: 8856 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2015 at 09:53
The parts themselves are interesting, but they develop in a predictable way. Not that being predictable is always bad, but the riff sets the song up for being something a bit more twisty/turny.
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Points: 1505 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2015 at 14:59
Very nice.
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