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smartpatrol
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 15 2012 Location: My Bedroom Status: Offline Points: 14169 |
Posted: February 18 2013 at 12:34 |
Some free form nonsense:
The purple pancaked creatures with old faces and tiny birds were ready They had no idea what they wanted but they couldn't crack at it with the juices flowing Old frogs smoke weed inside smiling orange potato skins Sucking at the flesh of a toilet frog Aching with old pickled carcases of dead f**ks Groceries piling up in the kart of a smoked ham dead next to Sam eating a lamb who Well anyway He can't see because his head is dead full of smiling poached smoked sausages Walmart Walmart Walmart Walmart Walmart Walmart is the ultimate solution for these punked out kids They have no help and have no souls They're so f**ked up and out of control Big fished heads and rolls of glue Stupid people need to chew I have lice in my pubic hair Now snort it hippy! The old frogs cast away their shadows They can't help but be entertained by this whole mess It messes them up With paper cups Lined out across the table Johnny talks to his mother Through a phone call to Brooklyn They found Johnny's caucus in a mattress store AND SMILING WITHERED FELLOWS STARTED TO ACCUMULATE IN THE CORNER OF THE ROOM Edited by smartpatrol - February 18 2013 at 14:08 |
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ArturdeLara
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 06 2012 Location: Faro, Portugal Status: Offline Points: 124 |
Posted: March 04 2013 at 18:32 |
Here are two of my poems Painful is this sweet sore I carry inside of me, Whispering dreams of gore, Bleeding away my tears. It hurts, it hurts so much It won't ever make me real, It won't ever let me touch, It hurts, it hurts to feel. And when a little rose in bloom Scents my hopeless soul, My sore lights a bright gloom, And turns Nothing into Whole. Walk away, my crystal angel, Take my memories with you, So I can forget your wings And pretend the lies are true. Torture: My lips phantoms kissing, In bliss flesh decays, To turn into a nighmare The joy of your grace. At me sweet swords glare, Of rain soft skin dreams, Blue eyes my blood drink, War chants so tasteful. A little shadow stares From the bright deeps of heaven, Erasing smiles and cries, The rope of life unties. Kiss my heart and bring me The torture I long for. I wish nothing but to die, For your body hurts me so.
Edited by ArturdeLara - March 04 2013 at 18:40 |
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"Those who are not shocked when they first come across Prog theory cannot possibly have understood it." - Niels Bohr
"If you think you understand Prog, you don't understand Prog." - Richard Feynman |
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The Doctor
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: June 23 2005 Location: The Tardis Status: Offline Points: 8543 |
Posted: March 04 2013 at 18:35 |
There once was a man from Nantucket
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I can understand your anger at me, but what did the horse I rode in on ever do to you?
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smartpatrol
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 15 2012 Location: My Bedroom Status: Offline Points: 14169 |
Posted: March 05 2013 at 00:31 |
Lonely as a midnight moon
Holy as a mother's daughter I am the sun I am the sun moving through space I am your carbon copy Use me as you wish I am a fish and you have caught me Put me in your dinner dish I am alive I am brave I am alive I am brave enough To face my fears alone I am scared I am big and I am small I am scared But I'm brave and I'm proud of it I am alone I am brave and I'm completely alone I am brave I am scared and out of it I'm a freak and I'm a child I play with water when I get bored I am the child I am the idea I am the light I'm the things that keep you up at night I am the gift I am you I am me and I am also me I am nothing |
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Dayvenkirq
Forum Senior Member Joined: May 25 2011 Location: Los Angeles, CA Status: Offline Points: 10970 |
Posted: March 05 2013 at 03:26 |
Poem #1: Close My Eyes And Ears.
Can you hear me now? Bless all the men that keep this ground clear. If the sun does rise, I won't open my eyes. If the sky comes clear, it's a reminder. It's time to steer clear Of your song about your days that may reach my ears. Can you hear me now? Bless all the men that keep this ground clear, And I will feel a whole lot better. Amen. That's all I have to say for today, Though if you fancy my way, I hope you will enjoy your stay Tomorrow. Edited by Dayvenkirq - March 05 2013 at 03:27 |
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Earthmover
Forum Senior Member Joined: June 03 2012 Status: Offline Points: 1509 |
Posted: March 05 2013 at 11:35 |
XBOX IS A GOD TO ME
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Dayvenkirq
Forum Senior Member Joined: May 25 2011 Location: Los Angeles, CA Status: Offline Points: 10970 |
Posted: March 05 2013 at 11:40 |
God, god, I say "god", ... .
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smartpatrol
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 15 2012 Location: My Bedroom Status: Offline Points: 14169 |
Posted: March 14 2013 at 00:40 |
Crawling out of the womb he took his focus on the rhythms of the air and the cold brains of the delusions and the human
He rose up over the mountains of nothing and everything at once He called out and shut up because it was too much trouble He dreamed of the future and pushed back the past and dreamed of disrepair that is soon to be yours Soon to be his He screamed out for mercy when the world showed it's face and then he shut up because it was, is, and will be that way forever He changed his mind so many times and continues to do so He expressed himself for all his life and continues to do so But the things he wants to express he can not express well enough For his mind was fixed on the greatest things and the worst things, little in between And the greatest things are unexpressable And the worst things are impossible to fully express So he retires for a while |
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smartpatrol
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 15 2012 Location: My Bedroom Status: Offline Points: 14169 |
Posted: March 15 2013 at 00:06 |
John (to Lucielle): "I thought you were the screaming baby of my dreams"
Harold (to John): "You are the crux of the devil, and I am the fish in your brain!" Lucielle (to both of them): "He is a cradle, you have died in it You are the frog and I am the sh*t you spewed I am a strong man I am the fish for you to keep I am a cradle I am the evil sleep And you are my lovers..." Fish crawl ot of the ocean and smile without death Blonde bombshells of the sexual deep He smiles and waves Inside the cave He is weeping... John (to Harold): "I have died in it. I am brave and underwear. I am a spaceship. I am a sea of hair" Harold (to Lucielle): "You are a loved one. You have crowded the sea. You are a lover. You have died in my grave." Godess of the sea (to the world): "I am the brave blue ocean. Frying my pan for the death of my people. I am screaming. And my bones are snaping. We thought that you were dead We thought you were dead and gone down to the bottom And prayed For a lover" The Fish: "For a lover For a prayer and a god For a mytar For the brave and the gone I am a spaceship I am a brave son of a gun I am your Amish lover I am your soul Gone and the gone" We are here We are dying We are brave We are almost gone We have reached our Eclipse We have reached the end We are lost foriegn lovers We are scared and dead and gone This is the truth This is a lover This is the brave This is the mytar Of the world Edited by smartpatrol - March 15 2013 at 00:06 |
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Man With Hat
Collaborator Jazz-Rock/Fusion/Canterbury Team Joined: March 12 2005 Location: Neurotica Status: Offline Points: 166178 |
Posted: March 15 2013 at 00:56 |
Sometimes I think about a bowel movement and the intricacies involved with finding the door to a room filled with receptacles for my refuse. Other times I think about the air that surrounds me full of particulate matter infiltrating my lungs, my heart, my spleen, my colon, my brain, my inner ear canal, my vas deferens, and my superior vena cava, slipping post-socialist doctrines to my capillaries in an ultimate form of subversion from the inside. Yet still I think, about more things I think about and I continually find more hairs on the back of my neck than on my head or my nose (or my horse, but that is another tome altogether) which doesn't seem out of place if you consider another galaxy spinning on the same atomic frequency as the nerve gas inside the home on Fuller Street. At times I think that I think but other times I can't think about the times I think or don't think about the times I think or don't think about time. Sometimes, I have a bowel movement. |
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Dig me...But don't...Bury me
I'm running still, I shall until, one day, I hope that I'll arrive Warning: Listening to jazz excessively can cause a laxative effect. |
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ArturdeLara
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 06 2012 Location: Faro, Portugal Status: Offline Points: 124 |
Posted: March 15 2013 at 02:51 |
OMGWTFBBQHJHYGILYXJRDRFSHSJDGLHB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"Those who are not shocked when they first come across Prog theory cannot possibly have understood it." - Niels Bohr
"If you think you understand Prog, you don't understand Prog." - Richard Feynman |
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smartpatrol
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 15 2012 Location: My Bedroom Status: Offline Points: 14169 |
Posted: March 17 2013 at 00:27 |
Something I just thought up:
Hold me Hold me for a while till I'm dead and gone Tell me Tell me who killed me and I'll tell you all my secrets Kiss me Kiss me till my lips have dried up and cracked like glass Scare me I'm dying |
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smartpatrol
Forum Senior Member Joined: April 15 2012 Location: My Bedroom Status: Offline Points: 14169 |
Posted: March 20 2013 at 19:30 |
Only a short distance away from the power plant
He is a rocket and she is a dynamo I am rolling out of the drive way I am smiling as my friend says Don’t take my dog for a walk He walks all by himself He is a very smart dog I own a Bible Freedom in their heels He shops around for a new catch He knows nothing of the familiar sites He can not remember the day Fish swim like dust I am a rainbow Don’t patronize me I own an Xbox Fields of flowers Fields of gray Nothing can Ruin my day I am a fish Covered in goo I am Siamese twin Using up all your shampoo Don’t talk to the flowers They’ll get you nowhere I am the demon Dragon Burning down the whole town And it goes on… |
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Ambient Hurricanes
Forum Senior Member Joined: December 25 2011 Location: internet Status: Offline Points: 2549 |
Posted: March 20 2013 at 22:59 |
A dissatisfied Indian llama
Went traveling to seek Nirvana But old Curt Kobain He messed up his brain And now he just sits in the sauna |
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I love dogs, I've always loved dogs
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Dayvenkirq
Forum Senior Member Joined: May 25 2011 Location: Los Angeles, CA Status: Offline Points: 10970 |
Posted: March 20 2013 at 23:14 |
^ Sounds like that 99 bottles of beer on the wall poem.
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Ambient Hurricanes
Forum Senior Member Joined: December 25 2011 Location: internet Status: Offline Points: 2549 |
Posted: March 21 2013 at 00:04 |
^How, exactly?
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I love dogs, I've always loved dogs
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Dayvenkirq
Forum Senior Member Joined: May 25 2011 Location: Los Angeles, CA Status: Offline Points: 10970 |
Posted: March 21 2013 at 00:12 |
1 99 bottles of beer on the wall 2 99 bottles of beer 3 Take one down 4 And pass it around 5 98 bottles of beer on the wall - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Lines 3-4 of your poem have a rhythm somewhat similar to: "Take one down And pass it around" - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Both follow the same line-length format: 1 longer 2 longer 3 shorter 4 shorter 5 longer ==================================================== Anyway, that's just something my brain rendered. I made quite a few arguments on this forum in the past that may sound to another ear as off-the-wall.
Edited by Dayvenkirq - March 21 2013 at 00:14 |
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Ambient Hurricanes
Forum Senior Member Joined: December 25 2011 Location: internet Status: Offline Points: 2549 |
Posted: March 21 2013 at 22:44 |
Ah, I see what you mean now. My poem was actually a limerick, which is a comedic poetic form with three rhyming lines with eight or nine syllables and two other rhyming lines with five or six.
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I love dogs, I've always loved dogs
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