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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 03 2010 at 17:00
To the Girl in Berlin

Oh, you,
the girl in Berlin,
oh,
how I miss you!

I miss you like a broken bicycle
misses a bicycle repairman
and like a sailboat misses
a fairly strong gush of wind
I miss you.

I still remember
many of the fine details
of your physical body,
such as:
1. your dark eyes like little marbles
2. your crooked smile
like some relatively small and curvaceous thing
(I can't really think of anything)
and 3. your black and partly turquoise(!) hair
like a rare and exotic bird
of some kind.

It seems so incredibly sad now
that I knew you for two or three years
and never even touched your knee.
It seems so incredibly,
so incredibly sad
now.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 06 2010 at 16:17
I Did Some Real Charity Today! Cool

To cut
a short story
even shorter
here's
basically
what
happened:
I was standing on the street
next to the wall
next to which the ATM machine
was situated.
While I was standing there
a bum
appeared next to me
like an angel from the heavens
(except that he actually
just walked from behind
the corner)
and asked me
for a 1 euro coin.
But -
and here's the exciting part -
instead of giving him
a 1 euro coin
I went and gave him
a 2(!)
euro
coin,
which
basically means
that instead of just one
beer bottle
he could probably afford
two
or possibly even
three,
which,
either way,
is pretty
awesome
if you
ask
me.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 07 2010 at 08:33
Originally posted by Vompatti Vompatti wrote:

I Did Some Real Charity Today! Cool

To cut
a short story
even shorter
here's
basically
what
happened:
I was standing on the street
next to the wall
next to which the ATM machine
was situated.
While I was standing there
a bum
appeared next to me
like an angel from the heavens
(except that he actually
just walked from behind
the corner)
and asked me
for a 1 euro coin.
But -
and here's the exciting part -
instead of giving him
a 1 euro coin
I went and gave him
a 2(!)
euro
coin,
which
basically means
that instead of just one
beer bottle
he could probably afford
two
or possibly even
three,
which,
either way,
is pretty
awesome
if you
ask
me.
 
that's pretty amusing
You did a great contribute for the spread of alcoholism in Scandinavia Clap
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 07 2010 at 08:35

Avenue Psalm

And like the wolf in the shiny jacket
explains to us in detail
each frame of the garden beyond

Your candied faces
show us the way
and make us understand with broad gestures
how wrong it would be to reject this special salvation offer.

 
 
Continuation Of A Portuguese Speech


A rain drop
To eat it with bread

Two smiles, almost true
To check at the mirror

A flaming gong
To play it and be ignored

A yellow flower in the swamp
To admire it until it grows

A water mirror in the air
To crawl under it in the night

A source of crystalline water
to avoid it and suffer thirst

A celestial rain
To wash us from the dirty sun

A sour land
To chain our feet

A sharp and dry wind
To erode our limbs

A ash heap
To swallow it happily feeling guilty

An extraordinary truth
to roll it into a ball

A blinding light
To hide ourselves from it

A luminous candle
To turn it off spitting

A marvellous book
To close its pages.
 
 
 
Now that I think of it, I might have already posted the second one...can't remember though
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 15 2010 at 13:19
1.

Change resides
inside the vegetable.

Change attaches
to the god
beneath the nail.

How does the inhabited package
suppose the definitive paradise?

Change suspects
near the scared sack.


2.

The freeway results
above his defeat.

Change arrives
inside any
sunrise compromise.

A degree process
combats change.

An ally
silvers an analyst
outside the cluster.

Will change object
against an artist?

Change warms
the unrelated disaster
outside
the profit.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 15 2010 at 13:24
Change zooms!

The praise screams
outside the memory.

The tolerant work
believes
before the harmony.

An assuring tip
supplements a bound outcome.

The misprint
flowers the exploited
idiom.

Why does the conscience
oppress a mark?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 18 2010 at 06:26
Regional(?) Prunes

You tell me these prunes are regional.
I tell you that I don't care.
You tell me that I am garden gnome.
I tell you that you are a hare.
You tell me that I should be careful
when stepping on angular stones.
I tell you my shoes are so awesome
that hmm-hmm-hmm-hmm-hmm-hmm- blues.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 18 2010 at 06:54
Some great poetry, some of it familiar????
 
 
I wrote a proggy song years ago:
 
GLASS GOBLIN
 
He was entranced by a poet
something had entered his throat
and everyone who saw it had died
everyone though he had lied
the frog jumped up on a log
took away the soul of a dog
and everyone who saw it had fired
everyone thought he had cried
 
theres something that make me
think about you
i think about you
every night
a though presses into my sub consciousness
my self conscious thoughts are right
the glass goblin made me see
what the world is to be
the world is to be
a ruin
 
he was broken by glass
something about him had past
and everyone knew what he was
everyone remembered his cause
the frog jumped into a lake
took away the soul of a drake
and everyone saw he had gone
they all though he was the one
 
theres something that make me
think about you
i think about you
every night
a though presses into my sub consciousness
my self conscious thoughts are right
the glass goblin made me see
what the world is to be
the world is to be
endangered
 
(instrumental break)
 
Part 2
 
(coming next)


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 18 2010 at 07:08
GLASS GOBLIN
 
Part 2
 
I felt lonely
above average
i felt beguiled
a bleeding child
i wanted to open it
to feel its power
i wanted to touch God
this fatal hour
 
I touched the forbidden glass case
I couldnt see the androids face
i felt like I'm lost in the hour
and in my day i lusted power
Power!
 
(crunching guitars kick in)
 
I touched the forbidden glass case
I couldnt see the messianic face
i felt like I'm lost in the hour
and in my day i lusted power
Power! Power! Power!
 
Part 3
 
Time sig change to 6/8
 
i locked her in my mind
she stayed there for some years
i watched and fantasised
she even cried some tears
 
she couldnt escape my mind
i wanted her to stay in my mind
but all she wanted in  my mind
was freeedom from my ,mind
 
Chained against my thoughtwaves
locked in my cerebral maze
tied up in my cognitive cage
she fought against the plastic haze
 
And now I'm looking out through these bars of time
Whats out of focus is truly out of rhyme
frozen to a life of misery
she wanted to escape and now she is free
she loves my sincerely
i only want her to be with me
 
Keep reminding me of the times when i was so in love with you  
Keep reminding me of the times when i could not face one hour without you  
Keep reminding me of the times when i was so in love with you  
Keep reminding me of the times when i could not face one night without you 
 
Part 4 - coming later...
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 19 2010 at 14:22
Seashells with Praliné Filling

My life
is the most miserable life
I've ever had.
Oh!
How I wish
I had more money
and a house and a gardener and a
French maid and a big fat American
chef!
My only comfort
in the midst of this constant woe
is expensive coffee and Belgian chocolate
seashells with praliné filling
and Monty Python and Arthur Rimbaud and
pictures of naked women and sounds
of silly young girls outside the window
(now closed)
and the sound of thunder or possibly
an aeroplane.
Oh,
Belgium -
so close to Germany
in my mouth!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 21 2010 at 16:32
the car
in the summer
is a relatively hot vehicle
to sit in.

but I read the first poem on this page
the one about the girl in Berlin
and I understood the hidden connection
between the colour of her hair
and the colour of my mind (turquoise)
which I previously
had consciously connected
to nothing but Indians
and their ritual jewelry.

still,
what could be more appropriate
than to drive to the desert
(alone)
and to find her
hidden in the night
right next to the good bushes?

(all this,
of course,
is nothing but a dream.)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 25 2010 at 18:29
You Took the Bun

You took the bun
from right under my hand
you took the bun
from right under it
and now
standing here
where the water is firm
my nostrils
watchfully waiting
for the next wave of sand
I can only dream of reaching out
for the bun
and the tree
and the sun.



The Man Under the Piano

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha How very funny
the man under the piano lived on nothing
but beans ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha how
is it possible?

Well,
it's
not.

I made
the whole
thing
up.

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha.



How Can I Afford Any Chocolate When My Heart Is Dying of Woe?

coffee cup coffee table coffee cup stop.

potato chips hamburgers french fries coca cola la la lal lal lal . . .

edith piaf was a singer.

urho kekkonen was a politician.

my nose is bigger than yours

(probably).

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 26 2010 at 17:19
This one I wrote in collaboration with Novalis (and whoever translated him into English):

from hills color dust the all-enkindling

Soon
of a heaven
just spirit lap
through lifeless Glory --
The world,
home.

What of angel-comrade,
was bore
So builds clung handicraft --
unwearied
the it the swaying --
was grape-clusters
who welcome poetic did come,
insolently in for bore
so great to inexpressibly
that the with into beast for and in of shiver
exalted lap thy hast
to strange
unscorchable
and pains appeared then,
boding solitude
of colors high widespread
and ineffable.

she in who breed
reveals messenger thy chords
mound unkindly -- last tasted Imagination.
earthly -- doth to mountain the stone of man.

ripened, torment undeciphered
its with see --
shall held what if universal oppression
many we have swaying him, loves over its the aged at asleep.

Still trembling of to a endless
its owest for resting infinite.
Once a wave-like, clomb her fire dire a sleep
few went with Fast of in from
of pleasant Death
real possessed

But first longing of wee
the what and it of lonely
with away the without
with beloved do all flood them
so owest fury unfolded the worshipful,
thou the and day mingles
it hallow a the Death into dumb balmy face
The So
the faint
for beloved an bosom
and unwearied of of virgin
thou tasted who wings transformations

longing:
to counsel -- age more inspires hidden in man.
earth-dwellers.
them the place.

Light.

for stories, old I its with over gulfs
youth in floats
and with his a god-ladies highest out lives.

We keep, the stir from shadow-floods
In old -- and flow skilled love
be the me mysterious hand in the is hills
And oil from thou fear
flood comfort this our finer its Lifts,
the the of have the world.

tree the fell
Night-inspiration,
power iron
a How I a the the through become of hand creation
aid I sweetly glorious nothing
me dominion into Light, forever.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 02 2010 at 11:13
A Closed System

At the beach,
you can pick seaweed from the rock
which can then be eaten
by the anemones
and small fishes.

Making a little splash
in a big pond
has been known for some time
to be beneficial
for the utilization of knowledge.

(But what role do hierarchies play
in the separation
of church and state?)

A brief look
   at who we are
       and where we see the value
            in the value-less world
                  is a common theoretical starting point
                         because it already assumes
                                 the solution.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 03 2010 at 15:41
The Kind of Shoes They Are Not and the Kind of Shoes They Are

They are not
the most unique
kind of shoes.

They are not
the most attractive
kind of shoes.

They are not even
the most comfortable
or the most practical
kind of shoes.

No,
they are NOT
the kind of shoes
you see at jazz clubs
or on television
late night
shows.

But they're the kind of shoes
you can afford
and they're the kind of shoes
you will keep on buying
because there's no other choice
and there never
will be.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 03 2010 at 22:09
Vompatti, I like your words. I've a selection of Rimbaud sitting on my nightstand, it looks at me funny in the evenings. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 03 2010 at 23:09


With a clean face and a dead smile,
Come and join us for a while.
A drink of wine, a bit of bread,
As for the main course, it's your head.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: July 20 2010 at 07:23
I haven't written a poem in a long while
so now I'm going to write one about the record
and the peas I didn't buy.

Oh, poor Shostakovich!
Who, oh who was the despicable meanie
who tore off your sleeve
and left you lying on your own
to gather dust and scratches
all over your beautiful vinyl skin?

I will not buy this record, it is scratched.

They do not understand
that there is only a limited amount
of old Soviet vinyls
and that there will never be any new ones
to replace the old ones that they,
the careless, unthoughtful,
sickeningly ignorant people
have ruined.

Forget about the damn peas,
this is all I have to say
this time.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 04 2010 at 11:15
these shoes are not made for walking

so I got this idea
that I'd go to the kind of shop
that sells computers and stuff
and buy a memory card
with an adapter so I could stick it
into my laptop
and copy some sound clips on it
put it in my cell phone
(it has a slot where it fits)
and use those sound clips
as ringtones.

basically
what happened was
that I googled a bit
picked a store where I would go to
(all the ones I used to go to have now gone out of business)
took a quick look at the map
memorized some streets
decided where I would turn left
and where right.

those were the only turns
I thought I would have
to make.

I was wrong.

I must have spent two or three hours
walking around
looking for the second street
the one I was supposed to turn right from
but
(so it seemed)
I had already walked right past it.

anyway,
when I got to a kind of place
where there were nothing but small houses
here and there
and some factories and such
in the distance
I stopped
and turned back
and eventually I did find the street I was looking for
but even though I walked the whole street
I couldn't find the third street
the one where the store I was looking for
was supposed to be on.

so finally I gave up
and went to this shopping mall
even though I was fairly certain
they wouldn't have the kind of memory cards
I was looking for.

I was wrong.

they had exactly the kind of memory card
I had thought about buying
but the one that came with an adapter
would have cost me 19.95€
which I thought was too much for a card
I should have gotten for less
than 10.00€.

so I gave up again
and went to a bookstore
for no particular reason
(I don't think I need to explain
why I go to a bookstore
sometimes)
and happened to notice
that they too sell those memory cards
even though memory cards have fairly little to do
with reading
writing
or other things related to books.

so anyway,
they had the kind of card I was looking for
and it came with the kind of adapter I needed
and the price was 8.50€
which I thought was fairly decent.

I also found
a book of poems
by Charles Simic
(a Finnish translation)
so I decided to buy that
and the card
which came with the adapter.

as I walked
to the counter
I noticed that the girl
at the counter
was someone
I knew
and someone who used to study creative writing
last year
or the one before that
when I was studying it too.

as a matter of fact
she told me she was still studying it
and asked me why I'm not
and told me that everybody there liked my stuff
and so on and so on
and also that memory card with the price of 8.50€
only cost me 5.00€.

I don't know
if the price was wrong
or if she gave me a discount
because she liked my stuff.

anyway,
I think I was going to say something
with this poem
but now I've forgotten what it was
and my feet still hurt
from all that walking
and I can't seem to think straight
because my feet still hurt
and because she told me
she liked my stuff.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 04 2010 at 11:41

First time I've seen this thread:

The plastic cover oh the plastic,
Acts of anger oh-so drastic,
The light comes shining out fantastic,
Followed by remarks sarcastic,
 
The stupid flame oh the stupid,
The person on the noose is cupid,
The air it is oh-so humid,
Down this trail we go where you led,
 
The stupid lighter oh the lighter,
Making that stupid flame so brighter,
The country club lost their prize fighter,
As soon as the choice was made to bite her,
 
The plastic shatters oh it shatters,
Climbing up that scarlet ladder,
Hopes and dreams they lay in tatters,
But then do they really matter?
 
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