Landberk Bio

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   Here is the biography for Landberk. I noticed a few typos and needed improvements.

Note: my correction in red. 

LANDBERK is one of Swedens darkest bands. An apostrophe signifying possession in "Swedens" is missing. Their sound is somber and
almost mournful. There is a subtile (misspelled) balance between the Mellotron
sounds, the guitar parts and (I think "and" should be replaced by a comma here as to avoid the repeated use of "and") vocals full of melancholy and the rhythms (is the s needed here?)
gaps from bass and drums. Evoking KING CRIMSON KING (The word KING repeated needlessly) to GENTLE GIANT. 

"Riktig
Äkta" (Swedish vocals) is an absolute brilliant album and strongly
recommend it to fans of the Scadanavian (misspelled) scene. "Lonely Land" features a
brave cover version of T2's classic "No More White Horses", and it's an
all-round winner! Contrastingly, "One Man Tells Another" steps on to
more KING CRIMSON styled realms, like a less complex more direct
ÄNGLAGARD (misspelled. Proper spelling: ÄNGLAGÅRD"). Subsequent albums mellowed somewhat.

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Shakespeare Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: July 18 2006 Status: Offline Points: 7744	Topic: Landberk Bio Posted: October 16 2007 at 18:42
	Here is the biography for Landberk. I noticed a few typos and needed improvements. Note: my correction in red. LANDBERK is one of Swedens darkest bands. An apostrophe signifying possession in "Swedens" is missing. Their sound is somber and almost mournful. There is a subtile (misspelled) balance between the Mellotron sounds, the guitar parts and (I think "and" should be replaced by a comma here as to avoid the repeated use of "and") vocals full of melancholy and the rhythms (is the s needed here?) gaps from bass and drums. Evoking KING CRIMSON KING (The word KING repeated needlessly) to GENTLE GIANT. "Riktig Äkta" (Swedish vocals) is an absolute brilliant album and strongly recommend it to fans of the Scadanavian (misspelled) scene. "Lonely Land" features a brave cover version of T2's classic "No More White Horses", and it's an all-round winner! Contrastingly, "One Man Tells Another" steps on to more KING CRIMSON styled realms, like a less complex more direct ÄNGLAGARD (misspelled. Proper spelling: ÄNGLAGÅRD"). Subsequent albums mellowed somewhat.

Angelo Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator / Retired Admin Joined: May 07 2006 Location: Italy Status: Offline Points: 13244	Posted: October 17 2007 at 08:49
	Fixed. I did leave the 'and' between guitars and vocals - my guess is that both sound full of melancholy. Thanks for pointing this out, Josh! Edited by Angelo - October 17 2007 at 11:23
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Shakespeare Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: July 18 2006 Status: Offline Points: 7744	Posted: October 17 2007 at 20:46
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