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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 06 2006 at 02:59
 
Texturizing landscape is tempting and atractive.
Superstitious chimpanzees attemp to control the landscape.
Failing to see thier efforts are unsuccessful attempts.
Once they reach the evolution peak, commanding and enslaving other races.
 
The true masters will destroy man, taking back thier ravished land.
Untill our time defeats us all, and guarantess our heaven's call.
Deciding to tourture the, they came down heavily.
Telling armored souldiers to destroy deffending man, cammanding officers bring down their hand. 
Lutanium alloy will punish them and make them die.
Existing beams of light to crush them world wide.
 
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
 
Take our warning and surrender,
To ignore would be to ask for more.
Evolution stopped with us,
Our ancient race is the controller of the galaxy.
 
Ignoring orders to surrender,
We hold up our gun, we give up never.
The soul of man lives on,
We are the race among the sun,
The war this hour has just begun!
 
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They fought untill the end
of every last man.

Blaring,
Cannon,
Desert,
Earth,
Factory,
Gunshot,
Hour,
Io,
Jupiter,
Keeper,
Mars,
Murcury,
Neptune,
Saturn,
Telaporting,
Set the controls for the heart of the sun...
Carefull with that Power Touch,
A Flying Saucer full of secrets flies through Astronomy Domine`.
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What we need is awareness we cant get careless
Mental self defensive fitness
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 06 2006 at 10:36
Nice work Rust, I will have to read throught them a few times to fully understand them I think, but that's fine.

Good work my friend!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 06 2006 at 10:45
Very nice! Better than anything I can write.
 
"Superstitious chimpanzees attemp to control the landscape.
Failing to see thier efforts are unsuccessful attempts."
 
What an amazing line!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 06 2006 at 21:03
Well, every time I smoke I always post a new poem here, they would be better if I actually did them sober, but that won't be for a while. Wink I have such a hard time getting into the poetic mood when I'm sober.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 02:33
Loony
 
Freedom crawling, fighting brawling,
Stonghold the gates including the barracade.
Falling toward defeat in a defeat parade.
It's really only a mascerade of puppets and trumpets,
Jabbing jokes at the leaders of the war cloaks.
Poke built blokes after several tokes.
 
Interesting simple blessing, unarticulate jagged ice arctic.
Freeze and free stoping at green, getting some tea and a read.
Mocha French dug trench tenting the tea.
Rational passionate clash for a feeling.
Internal rash and bleeding.
 
 
Cancle
 
When we were warm,
Awake next to the shore,
Love and explore, trust and torture.
Sunsetting tangerine, slight shade of green,
Shines in my seeing eyes, watching love take place in your eyes.
As the waves splash my heart beats,
While we silently converse we connect for the worse.
We subtly know, the ending is pain.
Heading toward it anyway, almost your insane.
 
On the hill we viewed the silence of our loving,
Staring we start and fearlessly walk the path of the heart.
You are carefree untill the tree stuck in your path,
Starts a relationship wrath.
Amazingly sure, your swim for another fish in the sea.
Your heart for the motionless moment must remain free.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 02:34
say Rust, can any kind of poetry be posted here? (say not with connection of music, or of artists and so.) Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 02:35
Feel free to post any kind of poetic art you have, this thread is for the abstract stuff.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 02:38
okay then, I'm not into poetry, but I've got some modest things I've done.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 02:59
Ceci ici rien.

"Ceci n'est pas une pipe" said Duchamp.
    And why would it be, after all?
       What should count is the belief.
          That strong and unbreakable.
             That one fighting.
I take his word for granted.

I think it's a screwdriver.

---

That rumored feeling

 

Harold shouted “booyah”

Hearing he has just about under a month to live.

“I’ll die very soon

very quick

don’t you worry.”

At my sadness he laughed making me desperate,

Making me doubt he is sane.


In the end, it’s how sane they expect us to be.

 

Right now everything’s clear

For I know what simple death relies on

I’m close myself to the last breath that will mean

the first of everything

and the first of nothing.

(Harold’s gone a long time now

Heard he died with a smile on a face.

Didn’t attend to the funeral.)

 

Was during the night when I collapsed,

In my most secluded and secret form

Dreaming that I dream myself dreaming…myself.

So, for a moment, I wondered if it is really something of a death

Or if, actually, none is going to fall in the shadows.

Frightening was only to see alter-ego after alter-ego

                                                fading

                                                and waving goodbye

                                    (though I remember them hating me)

 

They gave me a Mars candy bar over there,

Saying it is delicious.

Well it sure isn’t.

“Do you need water with that?”  

 

I’ve always liked the death

Made it even an entity, a spirit jewel

Found it comfortable and rewarding.

Guess I expected too much of a gratitude

When my turn arrived to face the real and not imaginary,

Ruining everything…

 

Okay, Harold, you may be right

See you there…





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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 12:07

Rico, it's too sad, i'm in floods of tears.CryCryCry

 

I was thinking you'd come up with something like:

There  was a young monk of Hong Kong
Who had a three-headed dong
A small one for sucking
A BIG one for f*cking
And an extra for beating the gong

 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 12:39
Wow Rico, I'm impressed.

Are you sure you're not the ghost of Borges?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 08 2006 at 14:58
oh, you're impressed? it's nothing. no, I can be the shadow of Bacovia, our most pessimist romanian poet (that regarding the second) Wink. As style, he's conventional while I tend to be not, but the mood is of degradation and sorrow...sweet...I've read some Bacovia, it's very nice and emotional...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 09 2006 at 01:04
Conundrum

Can't stop doing sarcastic jokes about fat people;
Many people know me by that.

Once came such a woman to me
Just after seeing my comedy act on the network.

Said: "Dear Sir, I think you are fatist."
Said: "Pardon, but I think you're fattest."


Clenching and counting

Fear the day of tommorow just like I fear the day of yesterday;finding time is never easy
I watched myself going maid, then I said "What a Shame".
The sole thing of mother sometimes asking me "Are you mad?"
                                                                      "Are you going mad?"
                                                                          "Are you thinking of going mad?"
                                                                  has become quite rhetorical.
I just answer "Yes";though definately that's never the truth.

What does it take to love and to be loved, as oppose to being take for a fool,
Or as The Weak who'll do anything
                                     (Silly boy!)
                                     anytime
                                      (my dear one...)
                                     anyhow
                                      (AH!)
What does it take to feel the sunburn, not the pain of the sunburn?
You know, Paradise's just around the corner;
It's a replica of you, just better and happier.
Unfortunately, you can't do anything about it.

Sundays are for Brahms and for the lazy moments you spend with your girl
Between white sheets on which wine was spilled.
And you touch, making her laugh.
To think she loves you is insane
She just wants the touch
       and the tongue-tied kiss.

It's late, clock's waving the dark second
Still I want to stay motionlessly awake
As to observe myself going mad
Though definately that's never the truth.

Him has a fake beard,
Eve also.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 10 2006 at 03:09
This one is inspired by the fact im high and currently listening to Cygnus X-1 right now. Here goes a "free style".
 
A president's nose
The size of Pinochio's.
June jazz is a summer's tune,
Bloom during a darkside of the moon,
The weed of ancients,
Smoked ritualy for patience,
Is equalled with Cygnus X1
Rocked out like a high school nun.
 
Give me patence,
Give me a part of life.
Live in the space of atmosphere at night.
Morning Tory!
 
Creeping in tombs of unwanted gouls,
I havest them for my collections for tools.
I am from the dead of the society,
Surrender peacefully or torture reachably.
 
Vocanos of aftermath,
Are metaphorically our nuclear wars.
I ask without my courage my life for none,
In my ship Rocinante untill the black gates eat my ship with its' nothingness claws.
Powerfully fly furthur for Mordur, swamp the ring in the Volcano's molten fire.
 
Ancient nobles kill for farther
And together unite to conspire,
And tire all that are restless unmung the spire.
Of hope and freedom we fly for our kingdom,
Among the stars we fly in wars.
We continue to fly and to try to fry to fly.
 
 
 
Souls awake and full of fury fight in anguish for the cure and king.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 10 2006 at 03:25
I recommend reading each letter individually when you get the the "random letter" part. It has rythm and a drum like sycopation that is needed to fully understand.
 
 
Power to the destiny's holder
Had his fate been his too bolder,
Failing to fall in battle tired and colder.
Attracting sphere of land be presence of war.
Battle among battle if evermore our horn.
Drums beat the rythm of war and killing.
Telling spy's their secret lies arn't willing.
 
Marcher's ride out, uniformed and seen of sound.
The landscape mountains majesty and forest of trees,
Dead souldeirs die in command of the army.
Planes come crashing down, gun lost and found.
 
Stepping forfront of the ground zero,
no one lives to be a hero.
Justify by means of ruling,
Estimating slaves for crueling.
Devil dueling army bombing, city alarming warroom liver.
I hope your liver is not called from the depths of its' disgrace.
 
Fire and falling,
Infestation crawling.

City crumbing,
Population destroyer.
 
Still another key and no defeat,
Give down gracefully before planes come before your feet.
 
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We defeat enemies of blesphemous being.
 
 
 
Forever on, we continue to fight and defend.
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 11 2006 at 03:04
Crush the power.
Light the watch tower.
Swords to shower
warriors. 
Hiden as cowards.
Traumatic wars,
are painfull without reward.
 
Land steals rape,
facing doomed fate.
Healing external cuts
As the doors to peace shut.
Fight back then attack,
revenge is our tactic.
To reclaim
stolen.
Hatred heated
molten,
clashed against the enemy's open skin.
Shiver symptom,
silver bullets peirce them.
Up a hill and to the right,
Hours close into the night.
I cannot retell the story,
Every moment full of fear and worry
and families at home comfort in false glory..
 
Not understanding war and life,
The soldier's instinct
tells to use the knife.
Civillion,
cut out my intestine.
And I'm not restin'
till' they all are dead.
Kill for a price.
Wave the flag of Christ.
Recite the pledge of war.
Defend our prison's honor,
Defend what's right.
It was told to you and me
in school as children who could not read.
 
At your nine o'clock flies your bringer
to your Maker
blinding your saviour.
Sending fire through the skies,
Engage in full speed and lift the anchore.
Your ship evades the missles
only to try.
Crashing down in a high pitched cry.
Burning into a smoky sound.
You stray off course to an
atmosphere around.
In my ship, SunTestifier, I climb higher
to the ground.
 
On my way down I see flashing,
my intercom is screaching as my ship is crashing.
 
Spaceships are fleeting home in defeat.
You can't escape this land your knew to.
Your electronic cry for rescue,
is ignored in ignorance,
M.I.A. certificates
are issued counterfeit.
None can find you in your desolence.
Star fighter and once space rider,
Now survive alone and powerless.
 
An early grave is promising.
Soon the knife will defend your dream.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 13 2006 at 08:34

Heresy

 

God is Marlene in the flesh lately.

Thing is that Marlene’s blind

              that Marlene’s incapable of walking

              that Marlene can only hear with her right ear

                        (by that, bad news are always for the left ear)

              and that Marlene’s non compos mentis

So I can proudly say God is far, far, far

Less perfect than I am.

 

Now during the trial’s final phase

Moments from the flame collapsing on me

I denied the words spoken above.

”Too bad the straw’s already lit!” laughed Belzebut.

 

I don’t believe God’s dead;

Marlene did a metempsychosis stunt during her last sob

So that I feel her inside me right now.

Thus…

 

End of mystery

 

Instead of leaving the unfinished perfection,

Kafka did the complementary finale.

Sadist!

 

Around 8 PM

 

… storm finally arrived above us

but with its awful part, killing thirteen people

in under a minute

                            (various ways)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 13 2006 at 16:23
Rico, I love your poetry!  It feels like Borges meets Kafka (although I don't think Kafka wrote any poetry).  Very cool indeed!

Rust, great work also, as usual.  I must get back in the poetry writing lark.  I'll get back to you all soon I hope...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 06:48

Rico, I'm impressed, you really have alot of tone and your feeling is pinpointed very well in your word choice. I really do like your stuff.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 07:11
Well,as I've said, it's a minor thing I do, something of a imaginative moment (for example, Heresy was immediately outlined reading somewhere a statement as to modern poetry's principle being that God is dead -> not much actually with the theme of the final form, still a pronto response...)

Thank you. Smile I will contribue when I can with what I can and, hopefully, with the best I can.
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