Polychromasia (Demo)

^ good luck dude. Boil a pot of coffee and nail it! I think you'll do great. Like I said, the acoustic guitar 55sec in sounds pretty good. Anyway, at least you got one part of 3 done. :)

Hey man.

I think a fair assessment would be to re-work the beginning, which is the first 55seconds. I'm not sure what kind of Base sound your using, but it just doesn't flow very well. It sounds choppy like its some morse code tapping or something. It has no feeling. I'm sure you can understand my criticism. On the other hand, the last part of the song when you transition to the acoustic guitar sounds great! It's a clever riff and I think you can really build something around that as your base. I'd focus more on that part and complement it with solid bass and light drumming.
Lastly, your transitions from one flow direction to the other definitely need some work. There is no cohesion, but like i said I think you should focus on that acoustic guitar number and build around it.

Anyway. Not bad. And thank you for sharing. Hope I could be of some help.