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    Posted: March 29 2012 at 15:49
  I now have a bandcamp site:http://warneryd.bandcamp.com/

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Points: 71 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 27 2012 at 16:32
Originally posted by irrelevant irrelevant wrote:

Originally posted by Sir_pi Sir_pi wrote:

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I listened to the first track. I think the composition itself is good, really liked the jazzy intro and the changes between parts flowed well but the second to the third (4:44) needed more impact. It's also a tad repetitive in the second part. But overall I like it, really!  

Thanks, that was my first real attempt at a song so i know it's not perfect Tongue

But i'm glad you enjoyd it Smile 


Good job for a first attempt. Thumbs Up

Thanks again! I have to confess i did record other things before this, but they where more jams Tongue
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Points: 13382 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 27 2012 at 12:38
Originally posted by Sir_pi Sir_pi wrote:

Originally posted by irrelevant irrelevant wrote:

I listened to the first track. I think the composition itself is good, really liked the jazzy intro and the changes between parts flowed well but the second to the third (4:44) needed more impact. It's also a tad repetitive in the second part. But overall I like it, really!  

Thanks, that was my first real attempt at a song so i know it's not perfect Tongue

But i'm glad you enjoyd it Smile 


Good job for a first attempt. Thumbs Up
New album!
http://www.progarchives.com/artist.asp?id=7385
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Originally posted by irrelevant irrelevant wrote:

I listened to the first track. I think the composition itself is good, really liked the jazzy intro and the changes between parts flowed well but the second to the third (4:44) needed more impact. It's also a tad repetitive in the second part. But overall I like it, really!  

Thanks, that was my first real attempt at a song so i know it's not perfect Tongue

But i'm glad you enjoyd it Smile 
I suck at the English, i apologize for my mistakes :P
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I listened to the first track. I think the composition itself is good, really liked the jazzy intro and the changes between parts flowed well but the second to the third (4:44) needed more impact. It's also a tad repetitive in the second part. But overall I like it, really!  
New album!
http://www.progarchives.com/artist.asp?id=7385
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Points: 71 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 27 2012 at 11:54
Originally posted by jadawal jadawal wrote:

Mr. pft? or Warneryd?

I've listened to Blaster jazz, it's pretty nice, although for my tastes I would of enjoyed a bit more progression of of rhythm, like a change into a different part, but the main rhythm in the first 5 minutes with the guitar is very cool.

After that I listened to Jester jazz, in my opinion you should add more percussion!

Hehe both! I guess it's not at all confusing... but if I resales something fore sale it will be under Warneryd. 

About the percussion i will defiantly look in to.

Anyway thank you for the comment!
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Mr. pft? or Warneryd?

I've listened to Blaster jazz, it's pretty nice, although for my tastes I would of enjoyed a bit more progression of of rhythm, like a change into a different part, but the main rhythm in the first 5 minutes with the guitar is very cool.

After that I listened to Jester jazz, in my opinion you should add more percussion!
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Points: 71 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 27 2012 at 11:09

Hello there!

I would like to announce to you the reader that some guy you never herd of, makes music you never herd! 

Anyway i am in some need of critique and thought that maybe someone out there had the time.. I think i could fit in the "Progressive electronic" genre but i'm not confident about that 

Anyway hear is a myspace link: http://www.myspace.com/578577780

I also have an Ep out on itunes  called Blaster under the name Warneryd

Hope that some one can enjoy it, or if ti sucks laugh your ass off! Tongue
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