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oliverstoned
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Topic: Alpes biography error Posted: February 05 2007 at 09:35 |
Thanks! Now that's really perfect!
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Joolz
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Posted: February 05 2007 at 09:16 |
Done
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oliverstoned
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Posted: February 05 2007 at 09:00 |
Sorry there's still a mistake! The text should start by "led" and not "lead". |
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oliverstoned
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Posted: February 05 2007 at 08:51 |
Perfect! Thanks for your quickness and efficiency!
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Fitzcarraldo
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Posted: February 05 2007 at 08:43 |
Done. Does it look OK now, Oliver?
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oliverstoned
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Posted: February 05 2007 at 08:06 |
There are some grammar errors in the whole text.
please replace it by it: "Lead by Patrice Moullet, « Alpes » was founded in 1970 with Catherine Ribeiro as the lead singer. A very original band, highly prolific throughout the 70’s and still alive. Their music is rather experimental and hard to define and involves folk, progressive and improvisation. Patrice Moullet is the inventor of several musical instruments amongst which include the “Cosmophone”, and the “Percuphone”. In a similar vocal style to Brigitte Fontaine, Catherine Ribeiro’s low voice tone may also evoke Nico at times and is theatrical and declamatory. There’s often an intense dramatic tension in the singing. The debut albums are the best, and “Paix”, with its two long suites, is considered the most progressive and is the best one to start with." Thanks to Yukorin to point it out to me! |
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oliverstoned
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Posted: February 05 2007 at 07:47 |
Sorry i did a little mistake in http://www.progarchives.com/Progressive_rock_discography_BAND.asp?band_id=2846 "Patrice Moullet is the inventor of several music instrumentsamong which the “cosmophone”" Could you please add a space between "instruments" and "among"? Thanks a lot |
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