More on my paper (HELP!) |
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Topic: More on my paper (HELP!) Posted: March 17 2004 at 13:54 |
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I don't think it's possible. My paper has 50 pages (including many pictures). And it's not that interesting. Many bio's and discographies. I had to write it in very little time...
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Aztech
Forum Newbie Joined: February 11 2004 Location: Montreal Status: Offline Points: 112 |
Posted: March 16 2004 at 11:26 | |
Hi Joren, I answered your PM. I'd like a copy of that paper . Heck most would so you should post it here !!! To translate it you can go on translation sites just copy and paste press enter and voila a so-so translation. As an example here is a site that does some translation : http://world.altavista.com/?kg=XX&il=en But but they do not do dutch maybe do a search on Google for Dutch transaltion.
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Jim Garten
Special Collaborator Retired Admin & Razor Guru Joined: February 02 2004 Location: South England Status: Offline Points: 14693 |
Posted: March 15 2004 at 04:39 | |
Damn - I was going to ask for a copy, but my dutch is non-existent (anyone out there fancy a little translation duty??)
Let us know what your tutors make of it, Joren; Good Luck |
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Posted: March 15 2004 at 02:39 | |
I'm afraid I'll have disappoint you, Peter. I finished my paper in time, but then my printer crashed!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm in school now, and I don't have the damn paper! Sounds like a lame excuse: printer broken. I like the sound of "straight to bed, little Joren"! THANKS to everybody! I really appreciated that! If you want a copy of the paper, I can mail it to you (it's in dutch)
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Peter
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
Posted: March 15 2004 at 01:21 | |
Straight to bed (with some fine prog turned down low) when you get home today, little Joren! Still, I'll bet it was a great feeling to hand the paper in on time! (I remember that particular "high" very well!) (I myself am feeling good here at 1:15 AM because I've just submitted two new reviews -- my first in too long a while! As George Costanza on "Seinfeld" would say: "I'm BACK baby!") Again, congratulations on a job (almost certainly) well done! I'm glad to have helped in some small way.
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Posted: March 15 2004 at 00:51 | |
... worked the whole damn night! Time to go to school! |
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 21:29 | |
Well, I'm almost finished and, without having read your review, I left out Brand X, Kansas, Manfred Mann, Alan Parsons and Styx, so we agreed on that, I suppose (although I didn't throw out Focus, but hey! They're Dutch! ) and it's 3.30 PM here at the moment! DAMNED PAPER! |
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maani
Special Collaborator Founding Moderator Joined: January 30 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2632 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 19:17 | |
Joren: You're welcome. A couple of comments on a few of the bands: Brand X. As excellent as they are, they were not influential on others. They came in pretty late in the game, and were actually influenced by others. Focus. Some have suggested that they are progenitors of prog. Though I love the song, I have never considered "Hocus Pocus" prog. And although some of their early stuff does "straddle" prog, this may have been a case of "stumbling upon" prog sensibilities, rather than have a conscious prog "approach." In addition, it is doubtful they were very influential on anyone else. Kansas. Although many classify them as "prog," I do not. Again, some of their stuff tread the fine line between rock and prog, but, again, nothing convinces me that they were consciously "prog," nor were they influential on anyone (that I am aware of). Manfred Mann. Like Procol Harum, maybe even Iron Butterfly and Cream, MM may have had some "prog sensibilities," but they were not, overall, a "prog" band, nor, again, did they have great (if any) influence on others. Alan Parsons. Much of his stuff may be classified as "prog" in its approach, but, like Brand X, he comes in somewhat late in the game. And he is largely prog because he engineered and/or produced prog bands before he went solo, and thus had a "grounding" in prog. But, again, I doubt he influenced anyone. Styx. If there were a "pop-prog" category on the site, I would include them (along with 10CC, XTC, and a few others, including Supertramp). That said, Styx was primarly a pop band, with occasional prog sensibilities. And, again, they were not "influential" but "influenced." Peace. |
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 17:34 | |
Thanks, Maani, I think I'll kick out Kansas and Styx. I don't really know them, but they seem to be popbands to me! I think I'll reconsider adding Mahavishnu Orchestra, (sorry, Peter ) for they were very special, rock or not! Thanks to all of you!
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maani
Special Collaborator Founding Moderator Joined: January 30 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2632 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 16:42 | |
Joren: IMHO, you could drop alot more than 15, since only 10-15 of the bands listed are actually "influential"; i.e., the rest were, to one degree or another, influenced by the others. The bands I would keep as most influential (or "important" are: ELP, Genesis, Gentle Giant, Jethro Tull, King Crimson, Mahavishnu Orchestra, Moody Blues, Pink Floyd, VDGG, Yes. These ten are the most "seminal" of the list. In the next "grouping," I would include Camel, Hawkwind, Soft Machine, maybe Amon Duul, Caravan, Gong, PFM, possibly Rush. Adding these eight will give you 18. To these I would add Museo Rosenbach, since they are one of the earliest Italian prog bands (contemporary with the "seminal" groups), and had influence not only on Italian and other European prog, but possibly on some of the seminal groups as well. That's 19. For the 20th, take the rest of the list and throw a dart at it and keep whichever one the dart hits. Because IMHO none of the others was particularly "important" vis-a-vis being influential on either the others noted or on other bands not noted. Peace. |
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ProgLucky
Special Collaborator Progarchives.com Founder / In Memoriam Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 89 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 16:32 | |
sh*t ..... AN ERROR! Hi progfans & Joren
That's my second post ... |
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ProgLucky
Special Collaborator Progarchives.com Founder / In Memoriam Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 89 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 16:24 | |
Hi progfans & Peter Well... my first post on the forum. INTRODUCTION: Bands range from early PINK FLOYD* and HAWKWIND*. These days, "psych" commonly informs music space rock and space fusion. *the pioneers of progressive rock Progressive Rock '70 Sub-genres: - Art Rock (roots in popular music): SUPERTRAMP, STYX and RUSH (progressive metal appeared as a mix of prog rock) - Canterbury (more of a region in England): SOFT MACHINE - Jazz-fusion: BRAND X - Rock In Opposition: HENRY COW - Krautrock: CAN - Zheul (a sub-genre of progressive rock created by the French band MAGMA) - Space Progressive Rock: ELOY (more accessible) or AMON DÜÜL - the English line-up (your choice) - à la MIKE OLDFIELD - Symphonic Progressive Rock: Good luck for your work...! All the best ProgLucky@ProgArchives N.B.: Sorry for my bad English writing.
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Vibrationbaby
Forum Senior Member Joined: February 13 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6898 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 15:33 | |
WOW! Pictures too!
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 15:04 | |
Thanks Tauhd! As you know, my French is great (Je ne comprend pas!)
It's in Dutch, but if you like to look at the pictures, you can see it when it's finished! |
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 15:03 | |
Woa, that's alot! ehm... I mean: A LOT |
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Peter
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Posted: March 14 2004 at 14:03 | |
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!' He chortled in his joy. |
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Vibrationbaby
Forum Senior Member Joined: February 13 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6898 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 13:25 | |
If you go to my old Guru Guru poll you'll find a mini- history of the band I wrote last month. Unfortunately they are not represented very well over the internet. Is this paper going to be in English or Dutch? Do we get to see the the finished product?
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Tauhd Zaïa
Forum Senior Member Joined: February 18 2004 Location: France Status: Offline Points: 340 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 12:49 | |
Joren, For your Krautrock section here are two links (but sorry it is in french) Amon Duul : http://petit.sebastien.free.fr/ad.html Amon Duul II : http://petit.sebastien.free.fr/ad2.html Guru Guru : http://petit.sebastien.free.fr/guruguru.html Good luck for your work |
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Joren
Special Collaborator Honorary Collaborator Joined: February 07 2004 Location: Netherlands Status: Offline Points: 6667 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 12:41 | |
THANKS! To Peter: It's a large paper for school. You have to make it, or else you won't get your diploma. It's not an essay, almost all of it is objective. And I was allowed to choose a subject myself I think I'll write about 24 pages (I don't know how many words that is). You should work 80 hours on it (including research etc.) I'll mention all of the bands you suggested (except for Amon Duul and Guru Guru, I couldn't find a decent biography) I think I'll also maintain Oldfield, Caravan and Camel (I think they were important) and Magma (because they created a sub-genre) Edited by Joren |
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Ulf Uggason
Forum Newbie Joined: March 09 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 29 |
Posted: March 14 2004 at 12:29 | |
All very subjectively: Brand X, Colloseum II, Kansas, Manfred Mann's Earth Band, Alan Parson Project, Saga, Supertramp, Styx, Ange, Barclay James Harvest, Mike Oldfield, Eloy, Gong, The Moody Blues, Mahavishnu Orchestra Peace, Ulf |
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