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aapatsos
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Topic: Take a Listen to This Posted: January 23 2006 at 22:21 |
I found some Pink Floyd influences there, I would agree with cobb on some points but I also see good potential, keep it up! warp speed sounds nice |
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cobb
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Posted: January 23 2006 at 21:44 |
I think it is great that you guys are willing to give extended songs a go- it would be so much easier to live the rock and roll dream by knocking out 3 chords songs. You guys are fairly young, right? If so the potential is there. I looked at the stats and found that the singer is one of the founding brothers? Well, this is one of your weak points. The lyrics and melody are fine, but the delivery was a little... well, ordinary. Yes, I know it's not a professional recording (well, I hope you didn't pay for it), but ya still gotta be able to stay on key. Instrumentally, the song lacked a little excitement, make the guitarist work a little harder, throw in some interesting progressions, experiment more.
I hope this doesn't offend, because as I stated, there's plenty of potential there. And besides, it's only my opinion anyway- who gives a sh*t! |
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Tiresias
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Posted: January 23 2006 at 21:39 |
Thanks,
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liquidtheater
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Posted: January 23 2006 at 21:31 |
I really like it great stuff keep it up |
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Tiresias
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Posted: January 23 2006 at 21:27 |
Thanks Blowie!
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Bj-1
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Posted: January 23 2006 at 21:03 |
Hey! I have listened to the song now. I think it's very good! Very enjoyable and relaxing! Great job!
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Tiresias
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Posted: January 23 2006 at 20:40 |
What do you all think
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Tiresias
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Posted: January 23 2006 at 20:25 |
Hey, my band, Juice (http://www.myspace.com/juiceohio) has a new song available for download on Yousendit!.com Keyboards still need to be added. I play bass. http://s54.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=32E0XHSNI4Q462AFV3DJQGQGJ Y |
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