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innerdream 
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Joined: November 11 2005 Status: Offline Points: 13 |
 Topic: My Demo - Stormy SkiesPosted: November 12 2005 at 03:48 |
Thanks for taking a listen and posting your comments |
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BePinkTheater
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Joined: September 01 2005 Status: Offline Points: 1381 |
Posted: November 11 2005 at 21:40 |
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well i only got to hear the intro..then it stoped working.... Honestly I dont like it. The two seperate guitar lines dont correspond in volume, and in notation, and also they are not on beat.... Plus i really dont like that kind of music.... |
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I can strangle a canary in a tin can and it would be really original, but that wouldn't save it from sounding like utter sh*t.
-Stone Beard |
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innerdream
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Posted: November 11 2005 at 14:01 |
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Cheers for taking a listen and posting your thoughts - glad you liked the guitars |
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chopper
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Honorary Collaborator Joined: July 13 2005 Location: Essex, UK Status: Offline Points: 20029 |
Posted: November 11 2005 at 13:56 |
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Nice guitar work. The MP3 doesn't play very well on my PC, which may be
just my PC - the vocals sound a bit muffled and it breaks up in places.
Not really my sort of music but it's very professionally done. Needs some drums though! |
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innerdream
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Posted: November 11 2005 at 13:37 |
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Hello everyone I have written and recorded a new song – Stormy Skies – please feel free to have a listen via the link below and your feedback on the song all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc) is most welcome http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=252119 Lyrics Each word you speak to me makes me now believe, makes me start to dream Sometimes the doubts still fill my mind Was it just a dream or just another broken lie? I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun Someday I’ll fly away Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts Someday I’ll fly away Everyday I start to cry Searching for answers I must find Everyday I question why My life is like the stormy skies Each time you come to me, deep inside my heart I feel were apart Once we were stronger every day Now it seems the memory has slowly ebbed away I will travel to the distant future, I will travel to the distant sun Someday I’ll fly away Now the feelings deep within my soul will be the guide into my conscious thoughts Someday I’ll fly away Everyday I start to cry Searching for answers I must find Everyday I question why My life is like the stormy skies (c) PFM 07/11/05 |
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My Demo - Stormy Skies
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BePinkTheater wrote:
I did struggle a little bit with the timing on the intro