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Vompatti
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Posted: July 20 2010 at 07:23 |
I haven't written a poem in a long while so now I'm going to write one about the record and the peas I didn't buy.
Oh, poor Shostakovich! Who, oh who was the despicable meanie who tore off your sleeve and left you lying on your own to gather dust and scratches all over your beautiful vinyl skin?
I will not buy this record, it is scratched.
They do not understand that there is only a limited amount of old Soviet vinyls and that there will never be any new ones to replace the old ones that they, the careless, unthoughtful, sickeningly ignorant people have ruined.
Forget about the damn peas, this is all I have to say this time.
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Posted: June 03 2010 at 23:09 |
With a clean face and a dead smile,
Come and join us for a while.
A drink of wine, a bit of bread,
As for the main course, it's your head.
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Posted: June 03 2010 at 22:09 |
Vompatti, I like your words. I've a selection of Rimbaud sitting on my nightstand, it looks at me funny in the evenings.
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Posted: June 03 2010 at 15:41 |
The Kind of Shoes They Are Not and the Kind of Shoes They Are
They are not the most unique kind of shoes.
They are not the most attractive kind of shoes.
They are not even the most comfortable or the most practical kind of shoes.
No, they are NOT the kind of shoes you see at jazz clubs or on television late night shows.
But they're the kind of shoes you can afford and they're the kind of shoes you will keep on buying because there's no other choice and there never will be.
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Vompatti
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Posted: June 02 2010 at 11:13 |
A Closed System
At the beach, you can pick seaweed from the rock which can then be eaten by the anemones and small fishes.
Making a little splash in a big pond has been known for some time to be beneficial for the utilization of knowledge.
(But what role do hierarchies play in the separation of church and state?)
A brief look at who we are and where we see the value in the value-less world is a common theoretical starting point because it already assumes the solution.
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 26 2010 at 17:19 |
This one I wrote in collaboration with Novalis (and whoever translated him into English):
from hills color dust the all-enkindling
Soon of a heaven just spirit lap through lifeless Glory -- The world, home.
What of angel-comrade, was bore So builds clung handicraft -- unwearied the it the swaying -- was grape-clusters who welcome poetic did come, insolently in for bore so great to inexpressibly that the with into beast for and in of shiver exalted lap thy hast to strange unscorchable and pains appeared then, boding solitude of colors high widespread and ineffable.
she in who breed reveals messenger thy chords mound unkindly -- last tasted Imagination. earthly -- doth to mountain the stone of man.
ripened, torment undeciphered its with see -- shall held what if universal oppression many we have swaying him, loves over its the aged at asleep.
Still trembling of to a endless its owest for resting infinite. Once a wave-like, clomb her fire dire a sleep few went with Fast of in from of pleasant Death real possessed
But first longing of wee the what and it of lonely with away the without with beloved do all flood them so owest fury unfolded the worshipful, thou the and day mingles it hallow a the Death into dumb balmy face The So the faint for beloved an bosom and unwearied of of virgin thou tasted who wings transformations
longing: to counsel -- age more inspires hidden in man. earth-dwellers. them the place.
Light.
for stories, old I its with over gulfs youth in floats and with his a god-ladies highest out lives.
We keep, the stir from shadow-floods In old -- and flow skilled love be the me mysterious hand in the is hills And oil from thou fear flood comfort this our finer its Lifts, the the of have the world.
tree the fell Night-inspiration, power iron a How I a the the through become of hand creation aid I sweetly glorious nothing me dominion into Light, forever.
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 25 2010 at 18:29 |
You Took the Bun
You took the bun from right under my hand you took the bun from right under it and now standing here where the water is firm my nostrils watchfully waiting for the next wave of sand I can only dream of reaching out for the bun and the tree and the sun.
The Man Under the Piano
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha How very funny the man under the piano lived on nothing but beans ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha how is it possible?
Well, it's not.
I made the whole thing up.
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha.
How Can I Afford Any Chocolate When My Heart Is Dying of Woe?
coffee cup coffee table coffee cup stop.
potato chips hamburgers french fries coca cola la la lal lal lal . . .
edith piaf was a singer.
urho kekkonen was a politician.
my nose is bigger than yours
(probably).
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Edited by Vompatti - May 25 2010 at 18:37
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 21 2010 at 16:32 |
the car in the summer is a relatively hot vehicle to sit in.
but I read the first poem on this page the one about the girl in Berlin and I understood the hidden connection between the colour of her hair and the colour of my mind (turquoise) which I previously had consciously connected to nothing but Indians and their ritual jewelry.
still, what could be more appropriate than to drive to the desert (alone) and to find her hidden in the night right next to the good bushes?
(all this, of course, is nothing but a dream.)
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Posted: May 19 2010 at 14:22 |
Seashells with Praliné Filling
My life is the most miserable life I've ever had. Oh! How I wish I had more money and a house and a gardener and a French maid and a big fat American chef! My only comfort in the midst of this constant woe is expensive coffee and Belgian chocolate seashells with praliné filling and Monty Python and Arthur Rimbaud and pictures of naked women and sounds of silly young girls outside the window (now closed) and the sound of thunder or possibly an aeroplane. Oh, Belgium - so close to Germany in my mouth!
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Posted: May 18 2010 at 07:08 |
GLASS GOBLIN
Part 2
I felt lonely
above average
i felt beguiled
a bleeding child
i wanted to open it
to feel its power
i wanted to touch God
this fatal hour
I touched the forbidden glass case
I couldnt see the androids face
i felt like I'm lost in the hour
and in my day i lusted power
Power!
(crunching guitars kick in)
I touched the forbidden glass case
I couldnt see the messianic face
i felt like I'm lost in the hour
and in my day i lusted power
Power! Power! Power!
Part 3
Time sig change to 6/8
i locked her in my mind
she stayed there for some years
i watched and fantasised
she even cried some tears
she couldnt escape my mind
i wanted her to stay in my mind
but all she wanted in my mind
was freeedom from my ,mind
Chained against my thoughtwaves
locked in my cerebral maze
tied up in my cognitive cage
she fought against the plastic haze
And now I'm looking out through these bars of time
Whats out of focus is truly out of rhyme
frozen to a life of misery
she wanted to escape and now she is free
she loves my sincerely
i only want her to be with me
Keep reminding me of the times when i was so in love with you
Keep reminding me of the times when i could not face one hour without you
Keep reminding me of the times when i was so in love with you
Keep reminding me of the times when i could not face one night without you
Part 4 - coming later...
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AtomicCrimsonRush
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Posted: May 18 2010 at 06:54 |
Some great poetry, some of it familiar????
I wrote a proggy song years ago:
GLASS GOBLIN
He was entranced by a poet
something had entered his throat
and everyone who saw it had died
everyone though he had lied
the frog jumped up on a log
took away the soul of a dog
and everyone who saw it had fired
everyone thought he had cried
theres something that make me
think about you
i think about you
every night
a though presses into my sub consciousness
my self conscious thoughts are right
the glass goblin made me see
what the world is to be
the world is to be
a ruin
he was broken by glass
something about him had past
and everyone knew what he was
everyone remembered his cause
the frog jumped into a lake
took away the soul of a drake
and everyone saw he had gone they all though he was the one
theres something that make me
think about you
i think about you
every night
a though presses into my sub consciousness
my self conscious thoughts are right
the glass goblin made me see
what the world is to be
the world is to be
endangered
(instrumental break)
Part 2
(coming next)
Edited by AtomicCrimsonRush - May 18 2010 at 07:10
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 18 2010 at 06:26 |
Regional(?) Prunes
You tell me these prunes are regional. I tell you that I don't care. You tell me that I am garden gnome. I tell you that you are a hare. You tell me that I should be careful when stepping on angular stones. I tell you my shoes are so awesome that hmm-hmm-hmm-hmm-hmm-hmm- blues.
Edited by Vompatti - May 19 2010 at 14:58
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 15 2010 at 13:24 |
Change zooms!
The praise screams outside the memory.
The tolerant work believes before the harmony.
An assuring tip supplements a bound outcome.
The misprint flowers the exploited idiom.
Why does the conscience oppress a mark?
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 15 2010 at 13:19 |
1.
Change resides inside the vegetable.
Change attaches to the god beneath the nail.
How does the inhabited package suppose the definitive paradise?
Change suspects near the scared sack.
2.
The freeway results above his defeat.
Change arrives inside any sunrise compromise.
A degree process combats change.
An ally silvers an analyst outside the cluster.
Will change object against an artist?
Change warms the unrelated disaster outside the profit.
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Luca Pacchiarini
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Posted: May 07 2010 at 08:35 |
Avenue Psalm
And like the wolf in the shiny jacket explains to us in detail each frame of the garden beyond
Your candied faces show us the way and make us understand with broad gestures how wrong it would be to reject this special salvation offer.
Continuation Of A Portuguese Speech
A rain drop To eat it with bread
Two smiles, almost true To check at the mirror
A flaming gong To play it and be ignored
A yellow flower in the swamp To admire it until it grows
A water mirror in the air To crawl under it in the night
A source of crystalline water to avoid it and suffer thirst
A celestial rain To wash us from the dirty sun
A sour land To chain our feet
A sharp and dry wind To erode our limbs
A ash heap To swallow it happily feeling guilty
An extraordinary truth to roll it into a ball
A blinding light To hide ourselves from it
A luminous candle To turn it off spitting
A marvellous book To close its pages.
Now that I think of it, I might have already posted the second one...can't remember though
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Luca Pacchiarini
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Posted: May 07 2010 at 08:33 |
Vompatti wrote:
I Did Some Real Charity Today! 
To cut a short story even shorter here's basically what happened: I was standing on the street next to the wall next to which the ATM machine was situated. While I was standing there a bum appeared next to me like an angel from the heavens (except that he actually just walked from behind the corner) and asked me for a 1 euro coin. But - and here's the exciting part - instead of giving him a 1 euro coin I went and gave him a 2(!) euro coin, which basically means that instead of just one beer bottle he could probably afford two or possibly even three, which, either way, is pretty awesome if you ask me. |
that's pretty amusing
You did a great contribute for the spread of alcoholism in Scandinavia 
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 06 2010 at 16:17 |
I Did Some Real Charity Today!  To cut a short story even shorter here's basically what happened: I was standing on the street next to the wall next to which the ATM machine was situated. While I was standing there a bum appeared next to me like an angel from the heavens (except that he actually just walked from behind the corner) and asked me for a 1 euro coin. But - and here's the exciting part - instead of giving him a 1 euro coin I went and gave him a 2(!) euro coin, which basically means that instead of just one beer bottle he could probably afford two or possibly even three, which, either way, is pretty awesome if you ask me.
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 03 2010 at 17:00 |
To the Girl in Berlin
Oh, you, the girl in Berlin, oh, how I miss you!
I miss you like a broken bicycle misses a bicycle repairman and like a sailboat misses a fairly strong gush of wind I miss you.
I still remember many of the fine details of your physical body, such as: 1. your dark eyes like little marbles 2. your crooked smile like some relatively small and curvaceous thing (I can't really think of anything) and 3. your black and partly turquoise(!) hair like a rare and exotic bird of some kind.
It seems so incredibly sad now that I knew you for two or three years and never even touched your knee. It seems so incredibly, so incredibly sad now.
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Posted: May 03 2010 at 16:55 |
I like how you make the link with your love leaving you and constipation. The ending was kind of pathetic, though you might have done that on purpose. The structure of the poem is incredible though. It kind of looks like a garden gnome on a pretty big pogo stick.
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Vompatti
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Posted: May 03 2010 at 16:37 |
Oh, Woe Is Me!
Why, oh why is it that my life is so very miserable? It makes me want to cry and commit various other equally pathetic acts such as lying face down in the gutter contemplating the mystery of death.
When my one true love left me the world around me shattered to pieces and very soon I began to suffer from constipation, hair loss and alienation from people my age who do nothing but drink beer, dance (in a silly way) and read nonsensical academic filth such as Jacques Derrida and that other French guy whose name begins with an F.
Oh! Where is my loved one, where? And how come I never win at horse races? Why is my life so full of misery? I'm so pathetic! So pathetic I don't even know how to end this poem if not like this.
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