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AtomicCrimsonRush
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 09:38 |
I am a fan of poetry especially Coleridges Rime of Ancient Mariner, Brownings My Last Duchess, and Pam Ayres humorous poems such as Teeth. I used to teach poetry to High School, and we looked at a huge amount of styles. Most students wanted to look at the darker side of poetry, such as from Mudrooroo and Coleridge. He would be my favourite and Tennysonn, and Keats.
We should all open our eyes and minds to a poetic world - it speaks to the innermost being.
Edited by AtomicCrimsonRush - June 17 2013 at 09:41
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progbethyname
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 09:35 |
AtomicCrimsonRush wrote:
I always believed Hammill was like Bob Dylan, a poet first, a musical artist second. Looking at his lyrics this would make sense. Dylan ia a visionary but not much of a singer. Hammill is also a visionary but thankfully can sing the fretboard off Dylan in every department. Poetry exists in prog no doubt but it is engaged in the thematic content. for me it is all about how the lyrics move me while listening to amazing musicianship. If the two line up, a masterpiece is often the result. But its not Shakespeare... |
oh man Scott, when bob Dylan sings it's like a rusty nail being driven into my ear.
He makes me wanna stick my finger in my eye-ball and swirl it around. Lol
The worst part is I can't understand him.
Here. This is brilliant.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H26rfN5H8J0&feature=youtube_gdata_player
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Tubes
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 09:33 |
For anyone interested, I should also like to mention that I currently have a thread about Ezra Pound's poetry in the General Polls section.
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progbethyname
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 09:29 |
There is a ton of poetry in the form of flowery or dark macabre language in prog Rock for sure! Quite a fan of it as well.
Great examples of the flowery--YES
examples of the Dark--Saviour Machine
Examples of both flowery and macabre is Marillion (fish years)
Fugazi is a poetic gem. ;)
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AtomicCrimsonRush
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 09:22 |
I always believed Hammill was like Bob Dylan, a poet first, a musical artist second. Looking at his lyrics this would make sense. Dylan ia a visionary but not much of a singer. Hammill is also a visionary but thankfully can sing the fretboard off Dylan in every department. Poetry exists in prog no doubt but it is engaged in the thematic content. for me it is all about how the lyrics move me while listening to amazing musicianship. If the two line up, a masterpiece is often the result. But its not Shakespeare...
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Tubes
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 09:12 |
Thank you refugee! Useful information for me there. And yes, I agree; some critics of progressive rock aren't exactly 'critical' enough sometimes, it seems.
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Vibrationbaby
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 08:54 |
GG's lyrics can be humourous and cynical. I think there was some of that on Giant For a Day.
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Gerinski
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 08:42 |
Who cares if there's no poetry in GG's lyrics?  imagine they are singing in Kobaian and enjoy Kerry's Clavinet
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refugee
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 08:37 |
someone_else, the lyrics to The Cinema Show were written by Banks and Rutherford. Here’s an excerpt from a private mail from my brother (translated by me): I wonder if Banks and Rutherford have delivered what Harold
Bloom calls a “strong misreading” of Eliot’s lines — actually the only kind of
reading Bloom thinks is worth anything at all. They are less concerned with
soulless sexuality than with an eternally valid erotic play that — as the
reference to Romeo and Juliet suggests — very often ends in tragedy (West
Side Story has probably some significance here as well). Moreover, in The Cinema
Show Tiresias gets a much more vital and vitalizing role than in Eliot’s
poem: In The Waste Land, to a strong degree he (she) connotes an
erotic/sexual fatigue that’s just as present in both sexes; the song seems more
like a feministic myth where the female principle is identified with Gaia.
Thus, The Cinema Show can be understood in the same way as Hart Crane’s
grand epic poem (or series of lyrical poems) The Bridge — that Crane
himself viewed as a more optimistic version of The Waste Land.
Well, I’m not altogether sure that this is a valuable input to the
discussion at ProgArchives. However, what it once again shows, is how well
schooled or — in the best sense of the word — cultivated these boys in Genesis
are, something they share with members of the other British prog- and artrock
bands. So when I still from time to time see intellectual skeptics claim that
rock lyrics exclusively contain formulas like “I love you”, I wonder what side
of the moon they inhabit — it’s certainly not the dark side. They can’t be
especially close to the edge either, and they have still not found out that the
lamb lies down on Broadway (titles by King Crimson and Van der Graaf Generator
spring to my mind as well, but I’d better stop while the going is good).
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He say nothing is quite what it seems;
I say nothing is nothing
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Tubes
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 08:29 |
Well, Jon was well-intentioned enough. And calling them 'distinctly awkward' as if it were fact, is improper. That is only your own experience listening to them.
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:49 |
Tubes wrote:
Interesting. But I'm more specifically interested in the poetry of whom I see as the true giants of progressive rock: Yes (Jon Anderson, although Howe, Squire, etc. made significant contributions), Genesis (Gabriel, but also Rutherford, Banks, Hackett, etc.), Jethro Tull (Ian Anderson), Van Der Graaf Generator (Peter Hammill), and to a lesser extent King Crimson (Pete Sinfield, Richard Palmer-James), and to an even lesser extent (the highly over-rated) Gentle Giant. |
The highly over-rated Gentle Giant... I don't know if this indicates bad taste or a lack of understanding, not sacrilege anyway, though you seem to have angered some of their priests  .
Anyway, I just don't agree. I did not spend much time analyzing their lyrics, but their music is virtuoso.
What I find more intriguing is putting Jon Anderson in line with other giants of progressive rock as lyricists for crying out loud. Ian Anderson, Roger Waters, Pete Sinfield and Peter Gabriel have some qualities as lyricists (the latter having written the best lines ever about sex in the chorus of The Cinema Show), but Jon Anderson is another story: although he can be credited with a major share in the shaping of some of the most beautiful gems of prog rock, many of his lyrics can be qualified as crap. In the best case it is like the 2001 Christmas letter from my aunt in California: full of misspellings, so that many words had another meaning than originally intended, which cost me three days to decipher  .
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Vibrationbaby
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:49 |
I agree half the time you can't even make out the lyrics so who cares.
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Knobby
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:37 |
It does not bother me one whit that GG lyrics are distinctly sub-par. The vast, vasty majority of prog lyrics are embarrassingly so. (Matter of fact, Im glad I do not understand Italian for this reason alone.)
However, you could have picked bands way more dire on the lyrics front than GG, but I suppose you areonly familiar with the cornerstone bands. (Thank God you have no familiarity with, for instance, the Dutch Sym-Info bands of the 90s.)
If lyrics are important to you, my advise is stay away from prog - and by staying away from prog, I really mean stay away from ALL vocal musics ,because if prog is bad, you can be sure the other genres are going to worse - at least prog can be literarily-inspired.
I never concentrate on lyrics (unless Im reading them on the backs of album covers). I treat the human voice as another instrument.
However ,when it comes to vocals in prog, what bothers me immensely more than poor lyrics is poorly-recorded vocals. How is it that the majority of vocals were recorded clear in the 70s but these new bands use shoite-engineers, or no engineers at all and go to all that trouble to make (usually) fantastic music, yet DESTROY EVERYTHING by having the vocalist buried in the mix. We should do a thread on cds that are totally ruined by this trait. I think it would be a real eye-opener. (I recently found out the first Il Trono De Ricordi lp is on the theme of William Blake. You wouldn't know it by struggling to make out the lyrics.)
So, the problem for Knobbers is not cheese-lyrics - I love cheese and I specifically collect cheese exploito psych - its clarity.
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Oh and I should add about prog lyrics:
when I DO try to make them out, 9 times out of 10 I have no idea what general idea they are meaning to convey - nevermind clarity of production, prog lyrics (unless its a clear concept work, like Birthcontrol's "Backdoor Possibilities") also suffer from basic clarity/uniformity of meaning. It seems they are just dropping (poetic) images without any linkage of meaning. I find this very bothersome. Its as if they are doing a Dylan "Tarantula" on us - pulling the wool over our eyes. For this reason, I tend to skip with the lyrics altogether and just flow with the voice instead.
Edited by Knobby - June 17 2013 at 07:47
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Tubes
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:29 |
Firstly, that's not an accurate way of looking at, to give an example, the lyrics written by Ian Anderson. He is strictly 'anti-drug'. Secondly, assuming 'poet laureates' are automatically gifted in the linguistic arts just because they've been granted such titles, is irresponsible thinking.
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Vibrationbaby
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:23 |
Hey, it's not poetry. It's a bunch of bloody stoned rock stars man writing sh*t, Not poet laureates at a tea party. Sometimes it's cool sh*t but I wouldn't call it poetry.
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Tubes
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:21 |
The view that both Gentle Giant and Celine Dion are over-rated is not characterized by conflicting opinions. What is your point?
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Tubes
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:19 |
Why on earth should that interest me, if I am, as I have stated clearly, MOST INTERESTED in early prog rock poetry?
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Vibrationbaby
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:18 |
Tubes wrote:
Interesting. But I'm more specifically interested in the poetry of whom I see as the true giants of progressive rock: Yes (Jon Anderson, although Howe, Squire, etc. made significant contributions), Genesis (Gabriel, but also Rutherford, Banks, Hackett, etc.), Jethro Tull (Ian Anderson), Van Der Graaf Generator (Peter Hammill), and to a lesser extent King Crimson (Pete Sinfield, Richard Palmer-James), and to an even lesser extent (the highly over-rated) Gentle Giant. |
WHADAYA MEAN GG OVERRATED? CELINE DION IS OVERRATED OK!
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Tubes
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:15 |
I am interested in seeing whether someone already has examined Gentle Giant lyrics as serious poetical writing. I am interested to see whether, if it has been done that is to say, they also don't see much in it, like myself. If someone has undertaken this already, I would like to see some people here at Progarchives look at it for themselves. It might just do away with this hero-worship thing that GG and their 'fans' seem be involved in. This is the reason for my interest in GG lyrics. For my own purposes, however, I am more interested BY the writing of Anderson, Gabrial, et alia.
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octopus-4
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Posted: June 17 2013 at 07:13 |
Try this:
In a quiet little beach walked a man and a woman and on them the vast shadow of a dilemma. The man was perhaps the most audacious more stupid and conqueror she had forgiven him, not without pain. The dilemma was to always a dilemma elementary whether their love had sense or not.
In a house overlooking the sea lived a man and a woman and on them the vast shadow of a dilemma. The man is an animal quiet if he lives in his den the woman is not known whether misleading or divine. The dilemma is the balance of forces in the field because the love and the fight are the forms of our time.
Their love died like that of all as something normal and recurring Because die and let die is an old custom that people is used to.
He spoke almost always of hope and fear as the essence of his future image. And cultivated his desire and sought the truth she listened in silence, she probably had it already. He, too, curiously as everyone was born from a womb but unfortunately does not remember or does not know.
On a spring day when she was not looking chased him the look of a new girl. And still we do not know if he was innocent as an animal or if he was dumbed down from vanity. But strangely she wondered if it were not the case once again to love and to remain faithful to her spouse.
Their love died like that of all with the words that everyone knows by heart they knew how to cry and suffer but without blaming time or history.
This desire not to let is difficult to judge if you do not know what is old or if it please. For moments of abandonment alternated between the hardships with great tenacity that is typical of old things. And this is the summary of this story for other unimportant you could just call resistance.
Perhaps the memory of that May also taught him to fail in the sense of rigor, the cult of courage. And definitely refused our ideas of freedom in love they've been unable to adopt this choice I do not know whether to say in our choice or to this our new fate I only know that they gave their death.
Their love died like that of all not an abstract thing such as family they chose death for the real thing like family.
I would like to see clearer revisit their path the courageous battles that were won and lost. I would like to be able to penetrate in the mystery of a man and a woman in the immense labyrinth of that dilemma. Perhaps this act of desperation could also reveal as the sign of something that we are going to understand.
Their love died like that of all as something normal and recurring why die and let die is an old custom People is used to.
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