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I haven't reckoned that so many of you, guys, are so good at poetry. 
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'Untitled' (yes, that's the name of it) by Atmos


Don’t stretch your hand 

For the Use of Carnal Knowledge, For small fleeting moments

As if you had a choice


Go, your time is now

I reflect ‘Now is time, though all together strange, yet how must I 

make sense of this madness?’


Anew! You start again

Back again, drowning for air, you come crawling to your bed

Even now you are not lost


Now, In Tandem Together

My light, still mundane, can I recall, A simpler lifeline? 

A lifetime of moments!


The time is back, with it’s parallel minds

Searching for a reason, to come back from my limbo

Too Far, Too Soon

I stand stripped, before creation, akimbo!


Onward we march!

I can not be taken, I can not be slave

And although the master beats us

He never tells us, how we should behave


Eagles flying

Summer Crying

Sunshine the Tears Away


To grip, an anesthetic anger!

Which reflects

Again, an arduous anchor!


Back again, you turn around 

Feeling, 

You kiss the ground


If I could go back again, to savor those moments

A small fleeting feeling

Of moonshining madness!


Once more, Time

I reflect ‘Now is time, though all together strange, yet how must I 

make sense of this gladness?’


The Wheel of Time Turns, and Ages come and pass. What was, what will be, and what is, may yet fall under the shadow.

Let the Dragon ride again on the winds of time...
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Originally posted by Cosmiclawnmower Cosmiclawnmower wrote:

A little piece i wrote a few years back called 'The Green lane and the Horses skull'

I find it to be certainly impressive, even I don't so well understand what it's about.
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Originally posted by Frets N Worries Frets N Worries wrote:

^ It's a more optimistic VDGG song. I'm pretty sure Hamill is talking about how we must make a better world for our children, even though we'll never see the fruits of their labor. It's an existential masterpiece. 

He's talking about the childhood's end of the Humanity, so I understand it more as a coming of the human art or humanity to a higher level of development.


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A little piece i wrote a few years back called 'The Green lane and the Horses skull'

This ancient byway, once well maintained, now overgrown its course barely remains.

Blocked storm drain, heavy rain has pitted and scoured the stone paved lane.

Weeds grown rank, collapsed earth bank, nigh on untraversable.

Brambles, nettles and docks, ocher-red west Country soil;

badgers excavated spoil in softening heaps with root, twig and branch.

Ancient sets, scrapes and runs, witnesses to a hundred thousand setting suns.

And within this detritus the first glimpse of greening bone;

protruding from beneath twisted root and rough-hewn stone.

I kneel in moist mold, I squint and peer, to try to get a view that’s clear

and so haltingly to scratch and pick then to excavate, through the native shales and slate.

Gently, softly; and then to see the herbivorous jaw-line jutting forward, free,

the large brown-stained teeth of Equine form.

Buried beneath this ancient thorn.

Ribs protruding out through moss, furze and fern; fractured fragments at every turn.

further on a femur exposed, pushed up and out of place by buttress serpentine,

Hidden midst the old man’s beard and honeysuckle withy-wine.

Who placed this noble beast interned discreet?

Was it of working stock or loyal steed?

The farm-boys nag or the Squires seat?

Buried here so the hounds may not have their feed?

With a boundary-bank built upon its back, planted thick with saplings firm;

Their grip holds true against Mother Moon’s straining fingers and the earthly legions of the worm.

Its bed, a mediaeval wall, whose rude clay bricks show a palm pressed in, clear and bold,

the whorls and lines of the creator’s prints their fortune long foretold.

And here, a broken pipe of clay, seemingly discarded, thrown away

Maybe he who laid out the equine corpse smoked a bowl at the close of play

And left, in respect, this simple grave-good to a trusted companion and friend

No longer a beast of burden, now a winged Pegasus, upward to the stars ascends.



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^ It's a more optimistic VDGG song. I'm pretty sure Hamill is talking about how we must make a better world for our children, even though we'll never see the fruits of their labor. It's an existential masterpiece. 
The Wheel of Time Turns, and Ages come and pass. What was, what will be, and what is, may yet fall under the shadow.

Let the Dragon ride again on the winds of time...
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Originally posted by Frets N Worries Frets N Worries wrote:

here are some lyrics I am very fond of, well... anything by Peter Hamill i'm fond of...

From 'Childlike Faith in Childhood's End', the best song off of their best album (not their best track, but pretty dang close) 

"All the jokers and gaolers, all the junkies
and slavers too,
all the throng who have danced a merry tune - 
Human we can all be,
but Humanity we must rise above, 
in the name of all faith and hope and love.
There's a time for all pilgrims, 
and there's a time for the fakers too, 
there's a time when we all will stand alone 
and nude,
naked to the galaxies - 
naked, but clothed in the overview...
as we reach Childhood's End we must start anew.

And though dark is the highway, 
and the peak's distance breaks my heart, 
for I never shall see it, still I play my part, 
believing that what waits for us
is the cosmos compared to the dust of the past...
In the death of mere humans life shall start!"

Some of my favorite lyrics ever written, that and Pink Floyd's 'Time'

By the way, can you maybe tell what Peter Hammill more exactly was thinking about in those lyrics?

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Originally posted by Frets N Worries Frets N Worries wrote:

Here's a Poem Based on a Monet painting

'Water Lily Pond' (Painting and Poem title)

very Romantic and poetic 

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Originally posted by David_D David_D wrote:

Originally posted by JD JD wrote:

BTW, I did the Photography and graphic design for the cover, as well as the final mixing, editing and mastering.
You're not so little of an all-round man, JD. Thumbs Up
Well, thank you. As, I'm sure, are many others on this site. I have had people refer to me as a Renaissance man. It always felt weird hearing that. I usually just tell people I'm a 'Jack of All Trades but Master of F#@k All.'  LOL
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Here's a Poem Based on a Monet painting

'Water Lily Pond' (Painting and Poem title)


Water, at the center of the valley, among the reeds 

Speaks to us, in solemn tranquility 

Whether it is silent and does not judge our earthly deeds

We do not know


All we know is there is water in the middle of the hills

Sitting, flowing, ebbing into a river. 

Springing and going, where the water wills

Loyal to no one but it’s own


Lilies, bumping into each other, lazily floating

A dragonfly lands on one, resting, then takes flight once more

And although it seems the Weeping Willow sits still

It sits, as it’s leaves like tears still pour


A single lily under the shadow of the ancient oaken bridge

Is born

It stretches its leaves like a child waking up, it rubs its eyes

Is torn


A Pond remembers all these things, as a man and woman leaned against the Willow

Or when he proposed to her on that bridge

Taking their kids there and showing them the lilies and the reeds


A Pond remembers those kids growing up, and showing their friends the pond’s beauty

An old couple sitting on the bridge, old and peaceful remembering

It’s fish, life, grass and weeds


A Pond remembers those kids growing up, and showing their kids the pond

As the old couple never came to the pond again

So, the children come to plant their own seeds


The Wheel of Time Turns, and Ages come and pass. What was, what will be, and what is, may yet fall under the shadow.

Let the Dragon ride again on the winds of time...
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Originally posted by JD JD wrote:

BTW, I did the Photography and graphic design for the cover, as well as the final mixing, editing and mastering.

You're not so little of an all-round man, JD. Thumbs Up
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^ Great, listed in my OP as Stevie Mack - "The Old Man and the Sea" (2004). 
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Originally posted by David_D David_D wrote:

Originally posted by JD JD wrote:

THE OLD MAN AND THE SEA
Lyric (based on Hemingway's book and used in the song of the same name from Steve McCann's album 'The Wide Sargasso Sea')
© JD Dinsdale 2004

When was this album released, if to list this song in my OP?

2004
BTW, I did the Photography and graphic design for the cover, as well as the final mixing, editing and mastering.




Edited by JD - November 19 2023 at 07:07
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Originally posted by Necrotica Necrotica wrote:

I didn't know this thread existed until now, but here's a poem I wrote earlier this year Smile

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I didn't know this thread existed until now, but here's a poem I wrote earlier this year Smile

Aftermath

I’m back in the city again,

pensive, wandering about

as I wonder what to do

without old crutches, old curses

carrying my daily verses.


Tick tock, tick tock,

the clock in my subconscious

always ticking, consigning me

back to my glass prison;

all reason discarded,

mental treason disregarded.


When will I progress?

When will I suppress

my burning desires?


Only time will show me

where I really am;

only strife will show me

my authentic self,

self-will in limbo,

self-care in suspension. 


When all color turns to monochrome,

will I turn to a false refuge?

When all bliss turns to sorrow,

will I bury my newfound clarity?


Back in the city again,

I wander with heart in hand

as a tempest brews within;

temptation and redemption clash

as I process every old sin.


Only time will tell me

whether I reached heaven

or created my own hell;

only my inner blues

can face me if I face 

my own private cell.

Take me down, to the underground
Won't you take me down, to the underground
Why oh why, there is no light
And if I can't sleep, can you hold my life

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Originally posted by JD JD wrote:

THE OLD MAN AND THE SEA
Lyric (based on Hemingway's book and used in the song of the same name from Steve McCann's album 'The Wide Sargasso Sea')
© JD Dinsdale 2006

When was this album released, if to list this song in my OP?

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THE OLD MAN AND THE SEA
Lyric (based on Hemingway's book and used in the song of the same name from Steve McCann's album 'The Wide Sargasso Sea')
© JD Dinsdale 2006

Every day before dawn
He puts his boots and slicker on
Strolls on down
To the pier and casts away

He guides by fish and by birds
Undaunted by ridiculing words
Sets his sail
The old man and the sea

This puts in motion events
To test his skills to their extents
Strike the bait
The marlin and the man

Lady sea no release
She stole his trophy piece by piece
Legends say
The old man passed away


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Originally posted by David_D David_D wrote:

Originally posted by progaardvark progaardvark wrote:

Originally posted by David_D David_D wrote:

I could have thought, you've written those lyrics by yourself, Progaardvark. Tongue
Indeed, I have. I'm leaving little nuggets on the internet for future scholars to ponder long after I have passed. The questions they'll have to answer is how gubernatorial can chicken pot pie be and which is the best toothpaste you can get from a neutron star. Embarrassed

This kind of very experimental lyrics, is it much your own way to do it, or is it a more widespread trend?


I kind of doubt it's a widespread trend in music. I can't think of any other lyricist doing this at this time. My inspiration for heading in this direction started at a young age when I first heard I Am the Walrus. It has since been inspired by poets Ron Silliman, Christopher Dewdney, Joe Rosenblatt, Barrett Watten, Peter Ganick, Larry Eigner, Michael Waldecki, and e.e. cummings. Even in poetry, I don't think this is as widespread. Other than cummings, I don't think the others I have listed are well known.
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Originally posted by progaardvark progaardvark wrote:

Originally posted by David_D David_D wrote:

I could have thought, you've written those lyrics by yourself, Progaardvark. Tongue
Indeed, I have. I'm leaving little nuggets on the internet for future scholars to ponder long after I have passed. The questions they'll have to answer is how gubernatorial can chicken pot pie be and which is the best toothpaste you can get from a neutron star. Embarrassed

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Originally posted by Frets N Worries Frets N Worries wrote:

I would like to take this moment to acknowledge what a great title 'Unsalted Pants' is.

Thanks! We all have to watch our sodium intake as we get older. 
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