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VanderGraafKommandöh ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() ![]() Joined: July 04 2005 Location: Malaria Status: Offline Points: 89372 |
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Not a problem, that's fine by me. I only missed the one punctuation error. "P.S." isn't Internet shorthand, but of course, "TTYL" is. I do not particularly like to use Internet "shorthand" anyhow. Indeed, enough of this tomfoolery! Kids! Kids! They're children, Peter, not kids! Anyhow... have a fun and interesting evening talking about me to your family! ![]() P.S. I was always taught to use a double space after a full stop; neither way is incorrect, however the single space seems to be the modern and accepted way. Edited by Geck0 - June 06 2006 at 19:56 |
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Peter ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
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As with "mom," "mother," "father," and so on, when the pronoun "dad" is used as a name substitute (as you did) it should be capitalized, but not when it is merely generic. Thus we get: "Mom, is Dad home?" and "I'm going home to kill my dad."
The use here of "son" is not literal, but informal and conversational. Rather than the usual familial relationship, the word here serves to indicate a significant disparity in ages, as well, perhaps, as a modicum of (grudging) affection.
Pronoun agreement: "one" is singular, but "their" is plural. You could have used "one" and "his" (but to be non-sexist, "his or her" would be better), or "I" and "my," etc.
You are technically correct, but a comma in front of "and" is optional in such cases as above. Granted, it does not belong in a short list, as such: "I like rock, prog and jazz." It can be used, however, when the sentence continues for a "significant" length (this length is unspecified) past the "and," as in: "I started up my bike, and then went for a nice, long ride on one of the many dirt roads in my area."
No such sweeping choice is needed (see above). The comma can still provide a wanted pause, and/or enhance clarity.
![]() ![]() Anyway, let's stop this, okay? I'm bored with it (as, I'm sure, are others), and I'm not at work now!
![]() It's time to go make some homemade "mac & cheese," feed my kids, then go for another ride!
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Cygnus X-2 ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: December 24 2004 Location: Bucketheadland Status: Offline Points: 21342 |
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What post?
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Mikerinos ![]() Forum Senior Member ![]() Joined: August 11 2005 Location: Planet Gong Status: Offline Points: 8890 |
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Brilliant post! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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VanderGraafKommandöh ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() ![]() Joined: July 04 2005 Location: Malaria Status: Offline Points: 89372 |
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Good idea Tlossy!
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AtLossForWords ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() ![]() Joined: October 11 2005 Status: Offline Points: 6699 |
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Maybe I should retitle this thread "criticize the gramatical errors of other members".
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VanderGraafKommandöh ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() ![]() Joined: July 04 2005 Location: Malaria Status: Offline Points: 89372 |
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Oh but Peter, I won't give up; because one learns from their mistakes, dear fellow!
Oh and dad, I'm not your son! I am not hopelessly outclassed - that is just your ego working overtime - but I am, however, slightly outclassed. Oh oh oh, you have a comma before an "and," that's old hat, old chap! Yes, for a 19th century writer, a comma before an "and" was used, however today, well... they're not used as much any more. An "and" is a conjunction in its own right, so a comma is defunct (in the majority of cases). So, therefore, do be consistent and either use commas before "and" or none at all. But I see you are correct to use it, if your sentence after the "and," was an afterthought. So you don't have to re-write it, however I wouldn't write too many "loose sentences". The same also applies for a comma before "but." ![]() Edited by Geck0 - June 06 2006 at 17:43 |
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Peter ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
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![]() ![]() Edited by Peter Rideout - June 06 2006 at 17:04 |
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!' He chortled in his joy. |
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Peter ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
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It's the "next time!" (Please see above.)
![]() I believe that is enough of our selfish thread hijacking for the nonce, little lizard!
![]() (Can you not see that you are obviously hopelessly outclassed in matters grammatical and pedantic, and ever doomed to fall in ignominious defeat? Get out while you still have even the smallest shred of dignity to cling to, son!)
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!' He chortled in his joy. |
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billbuckner ![]() Forum Senior Member ![]() Joined: May 07 2006 Status: Offline Points: 433 |
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Winner of the "Most Pretentious Post" award
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VanderGraafKommandöh ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() ![]() Joined: July 04 2005 Location: Malaria Status: Offline Points: 89372 |
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Your memory is full of those seqoias again, Peter. You were the one that said "ever", so I was just re-quoting what you said yourself. Anyhow, Icarus is just a fable, so I am not exactly incorrect with what I say and neither are you, of course. Have fun my friend, it has been fun! Until the next time. Edited by Geck0 - June 06 2006 at 15:13 |
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Peter ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
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![]() Still, the heat of the sun melted the wax which held the feathers in place -- the wax did not melt the feathers, as you maintain. (Feathers do not melt, in any case.)
"ever?"
Re my erroneous spelling of quotation, I had noticed the typo and fixed it before you replied -- you should have hit the "quote" button immediately, old chap!
![]() It's been fun, but I have to go -- the sweet siren song of the rocky rambling road stirs my soul, and I needs must answer the compelling call. (How's that for "purple" prose?
![]() TTYL, pal! ![]() Edited by Peter Rideout - June 06 2006 at 15:00 |
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!' He chortled in his joy. |
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VanderGraafKommandöh ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() ![]() Joined: July 04 2005 Location: Malaria Status: Offline Points: 89372 |
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Ouch! That razor-sharp intellect must hurt! Does it dig-in and give you a migrane? What's more, your intellect can see? That is a very special type of intellect you possess, I believe you ought to see a doctor about that.
Of course, I am very much aware that the wax melted Icarus' feathers; but, as you quite correctly said: such a design could ever work! What's a "quotaion," anyhow? ![]() Is that better, oh diligent one? |
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Peter ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
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Well, as you can see, we could do this forever, and you're a near-worthy opponent, but know that how I might write (or punctuate) here, is not necessarily how I'd write in a professional capacity.
Of course, it wasn't a question of the speed of Icarus's wings (not that such a design could ever work), as it was the surface area, and more specifically a sudden lack of feathers. He was doing fine, until the wax melted, and he lost too many of them.
Once again, upstart, your would-be high-flying metaphor has plummeted, Icarus-like, into the cold, unforgiving sea of my superior, razor-sharp, all-seeing intellect!
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!' He chortled in his joy. |
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Trickster F. ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() Joined: February 10 2006 Location: Belize Status: Offline Points: 5308 |
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Winner.
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VanderGraafKommandöh ![]() Prog Reviewer ![]() ![]() Joined: July 04 2005 Location: Malaria Status: Offline Points: 89372 |
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I never meant the sun at all, Peter! Icarus flew towards the sun, yes, but he didn't fall into it. I was just saying that Jim and yourself - were falling Icarus-like - because neither of you can flap your wings fast enough to maintain momentum.
So you've misunderstood my pseudo-intellectual metaphor! ![]() Also, I believe you are misusing your post scriptums! They are never "PS:," but always "P.S.," unless you Canadians use some alternative "Manual of Style," I would have thought that "PS" was also sufficient, but never "PS:." Sort it out, Peter! Edited by Geck0 - June 06 2006 at 14:43 |
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avestin ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: September 18 2005 Status: Offline Points: 12625 |
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It's funny you mention it. FOr me it bears mostly a more negative meaning, such as I am better/smarter than you, this is why I made this remark and the wink is meant to irritate you, it shows you I am aware of my advantages over you etc. (wow, this small symbol has drawn some deep hidden emotions in me ![]() |
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Peter ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
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Ah -- I suspected as much. Thanks, Avestin!
![]() This cheery little fellow:
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!' He chortled in his joy. |
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Peter ![]() Special Collaborator ![]() ![]() Honorary Collaborator Joined: January 31 2004 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 9669 |
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![]() ![]() PS: That's "someone's"
![]() PPS: Icarus, of course, fell into the sea, (a watery, decidedly non-conflagrant, medium) not the sun, as you imply here.Your clumsy, pseudo-intellectual metaphor does not hold water!
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"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!' He chortled in his joy. |
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