Happy to hear comments about my music

Please listen to my music on:

https://itunes.apple.com/au/album/neron-ep/1451376188

https://neronmusic1.bandcamp.com

All your tunes shows promise and talent with interesting melody lines and some nice guitarplaying. I'm guessing you're quite young but the most important stuff is there already. It still sounds very rough and unfinished though - like demos or drafts for something that can become really great if you get yourself some decent recording facilities and well... bandmembers. Yeah I do hope the best of these will get re-recorded at some point.

The visuals are kind of beyond awful I think. Hope I'm not offending anyone by stating that. I would never check out music that presented itself like... I don't know what its supposed to communicate. So over morning coffee I figured I try to improve it a little. I thought of a cinema or theater with "bandlogo" and title featured on the screen - something open to just about any sound and not too telling (and where the song-title can be easily replaced). But I guess the theater I went for has you expecting either pompous neo folk or grand orchestal music for some epic sword and sandal movie... rather than your music. Haha don't know how I ended up here 'cause I had something quite different in mind, but I'd still rather check out someting that presents itself like this, so I'll post it here anyway:

 

Bte: what is the language sung in the one tune with vocals (this song)?

^I didn't take more than a quarter-twenty minutes. Mostly a little cut and paste of a nice photo I already had lying on my desktop + some filters and a free font. But thanks anyway! Feel free to use if you'd like (but don't feel like you should or have to because some random stranger threw it together).

...for some reason I thought the one singing was the same person as the one who made the music and i wasn't sure wether it was male or female. I enjoyed the singing though.

I guess I do think its maybe a little naive to the let music speaks for itself. That may work if you already have an audience. But to let the music speak you need to get people to listen in the first place.