Would like some feedback

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   About a year ago, I wrote a 13 peice concept poem series. Many people
say the words would fit best with music. I recently have started
putting together musical arrangments to it, but for now I'd just like
feedback on the 13 poems lyrics. You can find them here:

http://ecomm1.csug.rochester.edu/~arms/lore/forum/thread.p hp?thread=609

Please, out of respect for the group of freinds that have kept the
forum there own small place to chat, do not sighn up on that forum and
post.

Look forward to feedback, TY!

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GPFR Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Reviewer page Forum Senior Member Joined: August 05 2005 Status: Offline Points: 760	Topic: Would like some feedback Posted: February 06 2006 at 22:19
	About a year ago, I wrote a 13 peice concept poem series. Many people say the words would fit best with music. I recently have started putting together musical arrangments to it, but for now I'd just like feedback on the 13 poems lyrics. You can find them here: http://ecomm1.csug.rochester.edu/~arms/lore/forum/thread.p hp?thread=609 Please, out of respect for the group of freinds that have kept the forum there own small place to chat, do not sighn up on that forum and post. Look forward to feedback, TY!
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