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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 06 2006 at 01:09
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Slowly but surely getting back into the old archives life style
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 07 2006 at 00:59
I need to continue my long poem here as well. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 08 2006 at 02:41
The Bric-a-Brac Tree

Take one brick.
Add some sulphur.
Shake for five minutes.
(You forgot the gloves!)
Wait...
And a bit longer
Almost ready!
NOW!
Bash brick against wall.
Crumble.
You now have a bric.

What's a brac?
No idea...
Put bric in a tree.

You have a bric tree.
A mystery.

Bric, no brac,
bric in tree,
no brac, but bric
tree, bric in
brac no, bric but
bric brac? No but.
Why not? I said so.

Fine.

No, it's a pine
(with a bric(k) in it).

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 08 2006 at 02:45
Originally posted by Geck0 Geck0 wrote:



Bric, no brac,
bric in tree,
no brac, but bric
tree, bric in
brac no, bric but
bric brac? No but.
Why not? I said so.



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 08 2006 at 22:34
Wow, Rico like it! LOL
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Her voice,
It says love.
Her smile.
It's never enough.
Her lips.
Her words hypnotic.
A beat to enter.
A dynamic feeling.
No way to measure.
When it be better.
When she says.
When she lets me now her happiness inside.
As a wave of love enters my eyes.
I see the right and correct the light,
to make it better my world high as a kite.
I feel complete and able.
An exotic extasy too happy and stable.
 
 
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 08 2006 at 23:12
Within fluids of light clones.
Sleeping with my eyes closed,
still seeing two dimensions woken then arose.
Will she see me as I speak to her?
 
Inside hidden caverns within the body.
Exploring and exposing all your feelings.
And a deal, more like a risk,
Extasy in exotic lips to kiss.
 
SHE is My hero, to save me from the depths of sanity.
Instantly becoming adjusted to what makes me happy.
Slapped knee, reflexed jolt and fun thoughts,
once seamingly helpful, they corrupted your rights to roll.
And feast on an ex that makes life happy to my mortal soul.

Interupt my glance of her,
really just an exuse to stare at her attactive smile.
Why won't she just sigh with the easyness of being able to cry, yet the ex is to good to make you distinguish between confusion and what's understood.
 
I understand, the confusion is just a river.
You must roll to love the wave of a love giver.
 


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 09 2006 at 00:58
A sure wind blows and lights the torch of hope.
I will blind in search behind the words I choke.
 
Since time maddered and matter timed how long the meter will end.
In returned favor for a freind that mattered, is it worth a damn?
Does it return in favor to be come back sadder?
Does he cry in a time that was heavier than matter.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 09 2006 at 01:04
Anticipation ruins the temptation of the moment.
A fellow's suspision in within comfort pins alonement.
Stabbing harsh, singled by mind scars.
Abused from past use of inherited sins.
Live to stars. Cultivate Mars.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 09 2006 at 01:21

This poem comes from my feelings of right now, it describes my hatred of slow dripping sounds.

 
 
Drp...drip...drip...drip...drip....
Timing backing the popping
Liquid amist snivling while they burst
millions of tiny drops
Dripdripsdriptrips dropping a drip down.
 
Ingestion of bliss singledout by drips.
These rhymically advanced sips of smalls bits of water.
Taking hits of drips, drops and trips.
Smile talk, expose tears of salt.
I've done dripping, dropping habbit pill popping, stab it.
Clear it clean, inhale
Scream. Hatred, burning, ancient. drip....

Throughout dreams that drown. THe fall down, ignorant of the dripping sound.
As it pounds in your head, you keep being tapped, a drip to trip to sip.
A drink to down and sip soothing sound.
It is round.
Evergoing, neverending and hatred loathing.
Love will continue thoughout the flooding years, as they drip down slowly, druglike, forbidden, unwanted in communities unknown to exposed sin.
Will the sin drip down falling forever, knowing what I saw,
I heard, a drip going slow, obeying a flow, a meaning of order,
organizing meaning in order to convince the disorder.
 
Drips
down
the page
candle wax
 
Red flash
screaming glass
broken whiplash
 
Glass atlast reflect eternety so it can continue flourishing.
 
Trip
fall
down
drip
interesting drop.
Fall then pop.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 09 2006 at 01:35
i like Haiku approch

digest my attempt


"I was not there
when i suppsed to be there
..at home

now everybody has gone
& now
.. i'm travelling gnome"
    


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While listening to the stories,

excepting their truth as real,
defining spilled water from drilled
metal hotter,
telaport wonder why,
sink and fly.
tell them to try pursuade to sadly
cry, weep waves, loss of life,
ingest of knife,
what is it?
Why?
Why was it another of somewhat interupt
carefuly touch and cut simply put a lie.
 
Portion cut divided out,
out with it goes out sometime about.
Lower end caution, scorpion, potion to expel the venom.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 10 2006 at 21:04
Waves crashing
pathlessly destined.
White foam splashing.
Well rested winds wash the air,
A flash of light,
The gods arrows sent.
 
 
The trees catch the momentary breeze.
Summer's sister Spring speads seeds.
Drought out the dry dust, dead weeds,
replace this with water smooth ripple reeds.
 
Shadows, shades, textures, contrasting colors.
Aging sneaks through, like the cold air.
darker shades burst
Warm patterns of yellow and red converse.
Sharing our feast full of tempting taste.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 13 2006 at 19:47

Massive explosions are mighty, descriptionless

Frail, brittle

swallow, drop, accidentally blow.
 
papper thin tab
 
purple, seedless but fruitfull as spring.

my exceedingly tall tower of sin,

within, inside my untapped third eye.

my mental capacity of classifying this nonsense, not within my borders of feeling, but inside my body. in my mind, but I do not know it.

knowledge, a bridge to the conscience,

opening science, answering our questions. In time a must part, seperated by borders of reason, remembering, feeling.

love is the next unit. encased,boxed sold in shops, not in vases, but it is.
it is droped in your shop which you buy from, your greed.
greed causes the tempting stealing, for more
good
feeling.
 
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Silence, solitude and sequencing

 

III

 

I like it

            I don’t.

 

A picture holds irony up value

showing how remarcably young you were

able and entitled

to be, gifts being short, but

intense, eventually like so; you can’t

resist thinking that the

now-missed

attitude of then can be shown

once more, right now, when time

made you look as a fool

and as a silence device; a clock,m

using its twitch to show itself

Dream,

And just dream.

The machine stops

when you say

Over.

 

I just thought I can live with

            Sure you did.

Mitt was?!

 

Time to write, those words I cannot stand

One more cruel than the next one

Last more obscure than the previous

            I understand, but how much

            You don’t, but wish to

Slowly, then speedy, then…

            Just like that

Sounds call and stop my course

Down the scriblings.

            tempted?

            open.

Called, I don’t respond

but share.

He’s there, always

Telling me to write

            Or to not

            Or to…

 

Love you.

 

SPEAK!

                        What, now?

 

Now, no.

 

While walking down the rusty street

Of Brediceanu

I saw one being hit by the bus

Deep, sharp, deadly

            In other words, while he

Walked down the rusty street of

            Brediceanu, saw

Me being hit by the bus,

            deep, sharp,

Deadly.

But never told the story.

Too afraid

Or too saddened by his

Changed mood.

 

That’s sweet.

 

Fate etcaetera.

            Gone!

 

Never shall I care for you

            means

Always shall I tender him

            him,

The man lucky enough to take

            the cursed and witched lady,from

            me

The one depraved considerably

            by her, at first

            by her absence, later.

 

Que-ce que ce l’adolescence?

Que-ce que vous avez prépare pour aujourd’hui ?

 

Up and under

            crows like planes form

            this storm; can’t see it properly

Yet I know what a great image

I’ll miss;from where, from there.

 

Wait for the signal,

Wait for it at least once,

Wait for it to really appear…

Wait for that signal,

Wai,

Wai for it at least until you’re sure

Wait for it…

 

Dressed up

Depressed again

Novella;

Light that flickers,

Strong sound

Inspiration:

 

The cellow weeps like a

The cellow weeps like a

The cellow weeps like

The cellow weeps like a…

The cellow weeps like a!!!!

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To Anyone Who's Out There
 
To anyone who’s out there and able to hear

Give me a spin and experience my fear

We’re not long for this world, I daresay

We’ve tried and we’ve tried, and we’ve tried to pray

But each day, God looked the other way

It seems sure as Hell that we cannot save ourselves

What with the way we put common sense on the shelf

And considering all we’ve got stuffed beneath our belts

It’s not hard to imagine us blowing ourselves apart

And if it’s not real, well, we’ve played quite the part

 
Well I cannot say it wasn’t fun

Now that it appears we’re done

Now that our race is through

I’m sure that I’ll miss you

Your palish blue-green hue

But we were long overdue

On accumulated debts

We hedged our bets a bit too much

Betting on safety, our lives, and such

 

To anyone who’s out there and has half a heart

If you want to help us, now’s a good time to start

 
 
Or, my personal favorite:
The Course We Stayed
 

As I look around at the blood on the ground

I feel in my bones for the men with razed homes

Hoping for their sake they’ll make it back

With all four legs intact

 

They had marched off to war with false hopes for glory

And were rewarded with death and blood

Namelessly buried as they died

And not a single person cared

And not a single person cried

 

A dying soldier could never be bolder

Than the one I encountered lying in the sun

He only needed water to make him better again

But that was all in vain

 

He had marched off to bring freedom and justice

To the people residing back home

So they could cheer when he got in

A jumble of little bits and pieces

At the bottom of a lonely coffin

 

And though civil war pervaded the places we invaded

We did not think to look past the lies claimed as fact

Though they were just as untrue as last wartime

When it was your son standing in line

 

We marched off our kids without pausing to wonder

What lay in wait on the battlefields

For death and his scythe hid inside

The bullets that pierced their hearts

And the shells of every size

 

Havoc and destruction were followed by construction

A rebuilding of empty spaces once more into fruitful places

We took responsibility for the cities in the sun

The war, you see, was won

 

We had marched off for a victorious cause

Which was all that Sir Chief needed

All of the poor soldiers who were mauled

And had no home to which they could return

And those who never came home at all


You know Sir Chief doesn’t care what you did over there

We won and they lost so it matters not the cost

While we broke our backs they sat and counted casualties

And ours were less than the enemy’s

 

Thus everything worked itself out in the end

The evil that we recreated with our efforts

Was vanquished to a later date

When our children’s children

Can step up to bat and win the war again
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: October 18 2006 at 17:01
Originally posted by Rust Rust wrote:

 
Pawns are useless.
Hearts are fragile.
Love is truthless.
Sex is agile.
 
 
Ying Yang
 
 
You have the Pawn Hearts reference, there, too.
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Originally posted by inpraiseoffolly inpraiseoffolly wrote:

Originally posted by Rust Rust wrote:

 
Pawns are useless.
Hearts are fragile.
Love is truthless.
Sex is agile.
 
 
Ying Yang
 
 
You have the Pawn Hearts reference, there, too.
 
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