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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 25 2006 at 13:28
BERN LES BERN

BERN LES BERN BERN LES BERN
LE CANADA QUEBECOIS MADEMOISELLE!
ENTRE LA CHATTE Y ENTRE LA CHATTE

LA MADEMOISELLE QUEBECOIS!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 24 2006 at 17:28
Oh my god
did the earth fall out of orbit?
oh deer god
will we get to watch the sun explode? will are atmosphere overrload? am I feel myself implode?
oh nyce god
does jesus visit all the other planets? did they love him just like me? was his cross made from a tree?
oh arr god
is earth the only one?
and if we are....
what is the reason
that outer space
.........exist?
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It happened in such a manner that was unpredictable and disturbing, when my head exploded. An orgasm had occurred in my brain, a mental orgy within my nervous system. The force of a million suns socked with the chemical causing the senastion of love exploded. I fell on the ground, twitching in ecstacy. Was I going insane, or had I found god after all this relentless search? Then my head exploded, lobbing it off like a soviet missle headed towards another universe. I miracuoulsy maintained my nervous system, and I could see through the bloody mess a small infant emerged, entering our universe.

Oh well, I'm still alive.

 
 
 
Not really a poem, but something I though I'd share. Pretty Dada eh?
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Edited by Rust - August 20 2006 at 11:07
We got to pump the stuff to make us tough
from the heart
Its astart
What we need is awareness we cant get careless
Mental self defensive fitness
Make everybody see in order to fight the powers that be
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 19 2006 at 17:56

Eating Chinese in Bridgeton on Tuesday Nights

-Jen Williams

 

Steel wool

In your peanut chicken

Is not the kind of fiber

The doctor ordered

And the fifth cherry Pepsi

Did not kill the taste

Of bleach

Yet

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2006 at 17:08
Originally posted by Ricochet Ricochet wrote:

nice MWH, considered doing more than four lines? Wink
 
Yeah...ive written poetry with many more lines, maybe one day ill dig them up (or just write new ones Tongue)
Dig me...But don't...Bury me
I'm running still, I shall until, one day, I hope that I'll arrive
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2006 at 15:58
nice MWH, considered doing more than four lines? Wink
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 18 2006 at 13:03
Nerves, like ivy grow
Strangling pumpkin vines and other gourds
In the garden of life, 
Preventing growth.
Dig me...But don't...Bury me
I'm running still, I shall until, one day, I hope that I'll arrive
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 17 2006 at 20:46
Along with TP and Geck0, your stuff is my favorite, Rico. You deffinetly break the cliches.
We got to pump the stuff to make us tough
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Its astart
What we need is awareness we cant get careless
Mental self defensive fitness
Make everybody see in order to fight the powers that be
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 17 2006 at 15:32

The birds are starting to fly

 

The birds are starting to fly

Going up to East

In search of time;

And it’s a freakshow out there.

 

The solstice of winter is just around the corner;

So the birds awoken very late

That they have to go.

Just like we’ll come to the conclusion

That we can’t leave, but must stay.

 

The birds will die

As the solstice of winter

Forgives never and not.

 

They, the birds, fly Easy

Cause West became cold and unappealing

They, the birds, fly backwards.

 

Clouds hide the storm, the danger, the rhythm.

 

Birds take the road

To perdition and waste,

Knowing before

What lies ahead

And where it all ends.

 

It ends right in the moment

When you gain hope;

For you must not have hope

Just the attitude of a soul

Knowing before

How much time’s left

And what happens

                              d’après.

 

The birds are the soul of disorientation;

They have the sky

But don’t know

How to use it.

 

Wind is humid

Memory is lost.

 

The one bird making it

Across the sea of lies

Gets a final wish.

 

And my wish is to know the truth.

Meaning that the East I reached

Is as bitter

As the West I left.

 

So I say: … … …

So I conclude.

 

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy


All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy


All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy


All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy


All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy


Around 10 AM…

 

…my sister gave birth

to a baby sparrow.

We named him (him?) Simon.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 16 2006 at 16:19
Originally posted by darksinger darksinger wrote:

Routine

By Jen Williams

 

Going to one end back to the other

Going to one end back to the other

Going to one end back to the other

Too many lights on

Flip switch down

Did I do that right?

Flip switch up

Flip switch down

I think that is-I need to wash my hands

Go to bathroom and turn on hot water

Water lather rinse

Water lather rinse

Not enough soap

Water lather rinse

Water lather rinse

Dry hands

Dry sink

Fold towel

Unfold towel-looks wrong

Fold towel

Unfold towel-something looks wrong

Fold towel

Flip switch down

Dammit…

 
-J.Williams
 
LOLLOLLOLLOL
Into this wild Abyss the fiend
Stood on the brink of Hell and looked a while,
Pondering his Voyage.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 16 2006 at 06:37

Routine

By Jen Williams

 

Going to one end back to the other

Going to one end back to the other

Going to one end back to the other

Too many lights on

Flip switch down

Did I do that right?

Flip switch up

Flip switch down

I think that is-I need to wash my hands

Go to bathroom and turn on hot water

Water lather rinse

Water lather rinse

Not enough soap

Water lather rinse

Water lather rinse

Dry hands

Dry sink

Fold towel

Unfold towel-looks wrong

Fold towel

Unfold towel-something looks wrong

Fold towel

Flip switch down

Dammit…

 
-J.Williams
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2006 at 21:59
I wrote this one for school. It was put in the school magazine so I guess it's alright.
 
THOUGH THE DARK, WE DANCE
 

WITH WET EYES,

HE DROPES A STONE INTO THE FADING LIGHT.

WHILE LETTING A TEAR FALL, FOR THE LONLEY CLEARING.

WHILE,WITH OUR EYES OF GRAY,

WE WATCH THE STONE SHATTER THE GLASS.

BUT TURN TO CLOSE UP AND WELCOME THE MIRRAGE.

AND THE FEW WITH THEIR THIRD EYE,

WILL LOOK UP PAST THE CLOUDS,

CATCH A FALLING STONE, SHARE A FALLING TEAR,

AND HIDE FROM ARMAGEDDON.



Edited by Gravity Eyelids - August 15 2006 at 22:02
Into this wild Abyss the fiend
Stood on the brink of Hell and looked a while,
Pondering his Voyage.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 15 2006 at 21:04
Wrote this'un last night. Apologies for anyone offended by the language:


Why I f**king Do This

Mr Kenwood’s simulated tiger pantry is mainly here to distract you from the seventeen cavities and muffins of felt being ravaged by the cosmonauts, the hypocrites and the c**ting c**ting contra-realists of no fixed supposedly.

Licked out clotted gastropods.
Kicked out knotted flies.

Mrs Holiday’s undiluted pencil-bound fist cracker is entirely here to persuade you to quaff from the jar of pickled amnesia and spread your mind out like a wardrobe ambulance king being savaged by the communists, the dadaists and the c**ting c**ting contra-realists.

Kicked out clotted gastropods.
Licked out knotted flies.

B e a s t s  o f  f l e s h y  n o w h e r e  c l a w  i t  a n d  I  t i t t e r  s o b  t i t t e r  i m p l o d e  h e r r i n g  m o d e  s o r r y  h a l v i n g  a l l  t h e  p o s s i b i l i t i e s  b y  s t u f f i n g  a  l o n e l y  m o u s e .

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 23:37
I Would post my own, but 1: There not really poetry, there lyrics for songs I right, and have written a few, and also, caught in the clucthess of puberty they usually have a very simular subject matter, I aint too good at phillisophical great motivational lyrics, the do vary in subject, but not a lot. But I got give it too Rust, Great job there, I'm likin the stuff a lot!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 23:15

Kinda.

But I prefer many-a other poet.
Dig me...But don't...Bury me
I'm running still, I shall until, one day, I hope that I'll arrive
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 21:52
Fan of Ezra Pound, MWH?
We got to pump the stuff to make us tough
from the heart
Its astart
What we need is awareness we cant get careless
Mental self defensive fitness
Make everybody see in order to fight the powers that be
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 11:00
The sunshine trickles into a window
My eyes burn furiously
A sparrow makes a morning cup of tea
The flowers bend in the breeze.
Dig me...But don't...Bury me
I'm running still, I shall until, one day, I hope that I'll arrive
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 07:11
Well,as I've said, it's a minor thing I do, something of a imaginative moment (for example, Heresy was immediately outlined reading somewhere a statement as to modern poetry's principle being that God is dead -> not much actually with the theme of the final form, still a pronto response...)

Thank you. Smile I will contribue when I can with what I can and, hopefully, with the best I can.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 14 2006 at 06:48

Rico, I'm impressed, you really have alot of tone and your feeling is pinpointed very well in your word choice. I really do like your stuff.

We got to pump the stuff to make us tough
from the heart
Its astart
What we need is awareness we cant get careless
Mental self defensive fitness
Make everybody see in order to fight the powers that be
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