Must Read for PA'rs
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Posted By: moshkito
Subject: Must Read for PA'rs
Date Posted: February 04 2011 at 20:13
Hi,
On the other topic, the discussion came up that one's opinion of an album is important on a "review" of th ealbum.
I stated that opinions belong in the forums, not in a review.
A review should be a discussion of the ideas and what you see, and explained why you say what you say ... in other words I have asked that "reviewers" in this board raise their standards into a form of literary criticism ... that helps make the music better and more important.
Leave the opinions at home and write something insightful.
I came from a literary family and a very large group of literary studies, and critics. None of them gave an opinion without explaining what they saw and how. And this I am asking you folks to do as well.
As it turns out, I am not the only one that sees this ... and now comes the time to ask ... do you want your reviews to just be another drunk bar room talk about the music you love?
http://emusician.com/interviews/in_the_mix/in_mix_everyones_critic/" rel="nofollow - http://emusician.com/interviews/in_the_mix/in_mix_everyones_critic/
Enjoy it ... but some of you won't read it because it is a bit long ... ohhh damn ... someone has something to say! 
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Posted By: NotAProghead
Date Posted: February 04 2011 at 20:49
Thanks, good article. Though I don't think it will change the situation.
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Posted By: Atavachron
Date Posted: February 04 2011 at 21:22
I think this article was posted here last fall when it was published-- certainly fair for a musician to turn the criticism back on the journalist. On the other hand, Wilson seems to be whining a bit here; He wants people to hear his music and read his articles and be on his side all at once. Sorry Steve, it don't work that way. If we have to put up with a lot of mediocre music, you have to put up with mediocre reviews. Deal with it.
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Posted By: moshkito
Date Posted: February 04 2011 at 21:24
NotAProghead wrote:
Thanks, good article. Though I don't think it will change the situation. |
Not sure that "change" is what is needed.
I just think that the leadership requesting a bit more from its "reviewers" is not too much to ask ... except maybe one person or two ... but then, that would be par for the course.
Again, and I posted this elsewhere, reviews should have a standard ... period ... and they should be checked or approved. In my book, opinions are not enough, and should not be the main thrust of a review.
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Posted By: Slartibartfast
Date Posted: February 04 2011 at 21:35
Personally, I have no problem with opinion being expressed in a review. There are many styles in which you can do a review. No one way is the only way.
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Posted By: NotAProghead
Date Posted: February 04 2011 at 22:58
moshkito wrote:
NotAProghead wrote:
Thanks, good article. Though I don't think it will change the situation. |
Not sure that "change" is what is needed.
I just think that the leadership requesting a bit more from its "reviewers" is not too much to ask ... except maybe one person or two ... but then, that would be par for the course. |
Maybe not a change, but I think it would be good if reviewers were keeping in mind these points of Mr. Wilson: - The quality of writing rarely rises above comparisons to other bands and liberally applied superlatives.
- We artists are a sensitive bunch, so even though we shouldn’t care what a 15-year-old Metallica fan writing from his bedroom in Utah thinks about our music, a lot of us do.
- Great music journalism is an art in its own right. It places music in a historical and cultural context while revealing the passion and personality of the musicians that made it.
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Posted By: Atavachron
Date Posted: February 04 2011 at 23:21
^
- We artists are a sensitive bunch, so even
though we shouldn’t care what a 15-year-old Metallica fan writing
from his bedroom in Utah thinks about our music, a lot of us do.
not sure about this one, it doesn't follow-- he's saying he and his band are such delicate things that they care about the view of a young amateur and then goes onto explain why the reviews of said people are of poor quality. It's like when girlband TLC sings "I don't want no scrub, a scrub is a guy who can't get no love from me" : this is his problem not the 15-year-old Metallica fan.
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Posted By: NotAProghead
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 00:15
^ Want it or not, but artists are sensitive people. It would not be too bad for reviewers, from 15 y.o fans to most prolific ones, to remember this.
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Posted By: Henry Plainview
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 00:24
Atavachron wrote:
I think this article was posted here last fall when it was published-- certainly fair for a musician to turn the criticism back on the journalist. On the other hand, Wilson seems to be whining a bit here; He wants people to hear his music and read his articles and be on his side all at once. Sorry Steve, it don't work that way. If we have to put up with a lot of mediocre music, you have to put up with mediocre reviews. Deal with it. |
http://www.progarchives.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=71340" rel="nofollow - Yes, I made a thread , (actually, with our wonderful post-upgrade ability to search message bodies you can http://www.progarchives.com/forum/search_results_posts.asp?SearchID=20110205001324&KW=http%3A%2F%2Femusician%2Ecom%2Finterviews%2Fin%5F&PN=1" rel="nofollow - see that it's been discussed a moderate amount ). I basically agree with David here, but here is what I wrote then again if you missed it the first time.
I admit I rarely use the PA reviews, although that's in a large part because my current musical interests lie outside this website. I also still haven't gotten around to writing one myself, but I am stunned by the continued absurdity of Steve Wilson. He writes an annoying song called Four Chords That Made A Million to complain about the music industry (while writing a bunch of songs that sound like Pink Floyd). Then, just in case you didn't get it the first time, he writes another song about how much the music industry sucks and lacks originally on In Abstentia. Yet that very song is a direct homage to Have A Cigar, which is from one of the most successful albums by one of the most successful bands of all time, and In Abstentia marked a major mainstream turn in his sound. Then he complains about modern music again on FOABP, while continuing to sound even more like alt-rock and the best place to do this is PT's new home, Roadrunner Records, the home of Nickelback, Slipknot, Alter Bridge, Stone Sour, Korn, Dragonforce, CKY, and Rob Zombie. There's probably more complaining on Deadwing and The Incident but I don't know or care about them.
Then, he decides that Lester Bangs is what the world needs right now to get people thinking about music? The music press has always been an extension of and an enabler of the corporate music scene that keeps him up at night, seething with rage (despite that every band he loves from the '70s was part of it). If we can't think and learn for ourselves, who is it that should appoint the journalists to think for us and force us into limited ranges of opinions? It's just....Steve Wilson obviously cares a lot about prog, even if he doesn't want PT to be thought of as prog, but I, and I think almost every other prog fan around, would put anybody who has ever written for Rolling Stone very far down the list of "People whose musical opinions I could care about". Is he just being contrarian now? I'm sorry you are 42, Steve, and you wish you had been born 30 years earlier, but I cannot fathom somebody thinking that the music press was one of the good things from the '70s! Pitchfork can w**k out a pretentiously unreadable review just as well as Lester or any other critic could, I don't see the big deal about print journalism. And the 15 year old Metallica fans really have nothing to do with it.
Also, you shouldn't feel compelled to oppose him simply because you're on a website he's describing, perhaps even one he's thinking of, since we've had entertaining run ins with him before. I think he would recognize the prog reviewers as being an informed opinion, although they don't have the blessing of somebody working for dead media, so maybe not. |
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Posted By: Atavachron
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 00:38
NotAProghead wrote:
^ Want it or not, but artists are sensitive people. It would not be too bad for reviewers, from 15 y.o fans to most prolific ones, to remember this. |
So we should all 'be more careful' ? More sensitive to a
successful band reaping the rewards of fans' love of music and
hard-earned money? Well a good writer is also an artist, why
don't they deserve the same sensitivity?
The answer is they don't;
It's nonsense, and confuses the issue. You create, you publish,
you get the bad with the good. That's it. That's all there
is.
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Posted By: The T
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 00:39
Great. Now reviews are not supposed to have opinion. What should they have then? A literary description? A description in purely musical terms? "In this song X goes into E flat but after a rather quick modulation ends in G minor". Wow. Not even reviews of classical music albums in Gramophone are like that.
And who is supposed to check the "standard" for reviews?
The one factor that has made PA what it is, you want to eliminate: the ability for any Joe tp review any album of any geek with a guitar and an ego... Sorry. Don't support one damn bit.
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Posted By: ExittheLemming
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 03:07
moshkito wrote:
Hi,
On the other topic, the discussion came up that one's opinion of an album is important on a "review" of th ealbum.
I stated that opinions belong in the forums, not in a review.
A review should be a discussion of the ideas and what you see, and explained why you say what you say ... in other words I have asked that "reviewers" in this board raise their standards into a form of literary criticism ... that helps make the music better and more important.
Leave the opinions at home and write something insightful.
I came from a literary family and a very large group of literary studies, and critics. None of them gave an opinion without explaining what they saw and how. And this I am asking you folks to do as well.
As it turns out, I am not the only one that sees this ... and now comes the time to ask ... do you want your reviews to just be another drunk bar room talk about the music you love?
http://emusician.com/interviews/in_the_mix/in_mix_everyones_critic/" rel="nofollow - http://emusician.com/interviews/in_the_mix/in_mix_everyones_critic/
Enjoy it ... but some of you won't read it because it is a bit long ... ohhh damn ... someone has something to say!  |
I'm struggling to understand what you really mean here Mosh. I think you want the standard of reviews to be better but that's a bit of a no-brainer really. I admit that this track sucks or this is boring are hardly helpful in describing the music, but no matter how objective the reviewer attempts to be, we always learn more about the listener than what is being listened to regardless of how much justification is provided for opinions. What you appear to be asking for are academic analysis of composition and social critiques of context. I mean come on! this is an amateur fan site and one of it's great strengths is the sort of healthy irreverence that you want to dispense with entirely?
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 03:32
My opinion has not changed one iota. Opinions in reviews are entirely valid. Not sure I ever read a review that wasn't an opinion.
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Posted By: Chris S
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 03:40
Opinions in reviews......why an earth not? I think sites like RYM and even Amazon show more lattitude with less anal parameters. As David says most people have to put up with poor music and musicians should have to put up with poor reviews. Wilson's views seem quite rightwing like bordering on censorship, a bit like hiding in one's shell....
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Posted By: Easy Livin
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 03:40
Indeed. Opinions are the essence of our reviews. Why else would we add a star rating to summarise the review?
If reviews were simply based on facts, not only would they be boring, but they could be very misleading. For example, a track me include the most technically excellent guitar solo in the world, but when I listen to it, it sounds dreadful to me. Surely the proposal is not that the review simply reflects the technical perfection?
Of course we should be respectful towards the artists, reviews should never degenerate into personal insults. Constructive critisism is perfectly valid though.
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Posted By: Sean Trane
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 04:54
Atavachron wrote:
I think this article was posted here last fall when it was published-- certainly fair for a musician to turn the criticism back on the journalist. On the other hand, Wilson seems to be whining a bit here; He wants people to hear his music and read his articles and be on his side all at once. Sorry Steve, it don't work that way. If we have to put up with a lot of mediocre music, you have to put up with mediocre reviews. Deal with it.
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Indeed, Wilson has been pumping essentially the same music ever since Stupid Dreams (whether solo, blackfield or PT and hundreds of other collabs). He's got an instantly recognizable sonic paw, but he's been selling essentialkly the same thing over the years....
So when one is publishing an oeuvre and sells it rather expensively (no more than the usual industry prizes, though) , he must accept criticism that comes with it... I do understand that critics are a bit harder to take when somebody didn't pay for it and still criticizes, though... but it doesn't mean the points made are less valid...
yes everyone's got opinions (even Wilson), like they've got an a****le... and sometimes diarrhea strikes and sh*t comes out, usually smelling foul ... but you reap what you sow.... and as an artist, you should know that better than most humans...
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Posted By: harmonium.ro
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 06:33
Diversity and socialized ( ) access to public opinion is what makes PA great, if I want a professional critic's stance on a piece of music I know where to find it.
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Posted By: Dean
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 06:45
moshkito wrote:
NotAProghead wrote:
Thanks, good article. Though I don't think it will change the situation. |
Not sure that "change" is what is needed.
I just think that the leadership requesting a bit more from its "reviewers" is not too much to ask ... except maybe one person or two ... but then, that would be par for the course.
Again, and I posted this elsewhere, reviews should have a standard ... period ... and they should be checked or approved. In my book, opinions are not enough, and should not be the main thrust of a review. |
I've tried to explain this before - there is no leadership here. The site owner, the admins, the collaborators are only enablers - we provide and maintain the tools that allow people to review, but we do not dictate, demand or control what they review or how they do it. We have a few loosely enforced http://www.progarchives.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13152&title=reviews-guidelines" rel="nofollow - guidelines that's all. Those members with Prog Reviewer status attained that status because they have written an number of reviews that achieved some arbitrary level of quality in writing, but not some prescribed standard of content. PA reviews are self-publication in micorcosm - you are your own proof-reader and editor - the reviewer has complete control of what they do.
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This is the old Objective/Subjective debate again - music is not a statement of factual information even though it is composed of factual elements, such as notes, melodies and rhythms ordered by instrumentation and orchestration; it is designed to be subjective, to create and stir emotions, to effect more than just objective assessment of those factual components and there it is valid to have an opinion of that subjectiveness. If that were not the case then all music would be equal and reviews unnecessary, just as a review of a telephone directory is unnecessary even if it does contain all the same words as War And Peace but in a different order. If the music does not stir you to be subjective then it is as meaningful as a Sanskrit telephone directory to an Inuit and the objective assessment of that music becomes pointless.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 07:18
harmonium.ro wrote:
Diversity and socialized ( ) access to public opinion is what makes PA great, if I want a professional critic's stance on a piece of music I know where to find it.
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Even a professional critic gives us his or her opinion.
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Posted By: harmonium.ro
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 07:23
Snow Dog wrote:
harmonium.ro wrote:
Diversity and socialized ( ) access to public opinion is what makes PA great, if I want a professional critic's stance on a piece of music I know where to find it.
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Even a professional critic gives us his or her opinion. |
I know, and I'm not implying otherwise.
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Posted By: Rivertree
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 07:25
how can someone write insightful without having an unformatted opinon?
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 07:26
Well I just don't understand Moshkito's point at all. Who can seperate ones personal view of something and what they feel about something when writing about it. What would pure "facts" tell us?
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Posted By: LinusW
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 07:28
Snow Dog wrote:
What would pure "facts" tell us? |
Very little.
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Posted By: harmonium.ro
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 07:33
Snow Dog wrote:
Well I just don't understand Moshkito's point at all. Who can seperate ones personal view of something and what they feel about something when writing about it. What would pure "facts" tell us? |
I suppose a review could be stripped down to bare facts up to a degree, but I don't know how useful would that be. I don't think that could even be called a review. One can describe the elements of the music, but to say if those elements work together as a piece of music means judgment (ergo, opinion).
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Posted By: irrelevant
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 07:36
A review made up of pure facts is useless.
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Posted By: Epignosis
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 08:40
Epignosis wrote:
"Subjective opinions" is like saying "two twins" or "the male penis." |
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Posted By: NotAProghead
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 10:13
Easy Livin wrote:
Of course we should be respectful towards the artists, reviews should never degenerate into personal insults. Constructive critisism is perfectly valid though.
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I think it's the key point.
Atavachron wrote:
Well a good writer is also an artist, why don't they deserve the same sensitivity? |
We are more delicate with our "writers" than with artists.
For example, I don't like some reviewers' styles, but If I'll risk to critisize them I already know the answers: "It's their right to express themselves in a way they like", "Many site visitors like their reviews", "Come and write better reviews" etc. There is a community, we have virtual (or real) friends and even a constructive critisism can look as a personal attack.
From the other hand, everybody (well, some of us) thinks that he has the right to teach artists: Keith Emerson should not do this, Phil Collins should not do that and so on.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 10:19
harmonium.ro wrote:
Snow Dog wrote:
Well I just don't understand Moshkito's point at all. Who can seperate ones personal view of something and what they feel about something when writing about it. What would pure "facts" tell us? |
I suppose a review could be stripped down to bare facts up to a degree, but I don't know how useful would that be. I don't think that could even be called a review. One can describe the elements of the music, but to say if those elements work together as a piece of music means judgment (ergo, opinion).
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I suspect that Moshkito made this thread due to me. From a comment I made elswhere. Glad I'm not going mad.
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Posted By: Evolver
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 10:49
Reviews are opinions.
It's best to back up the opinions with examples.
We don't always do that.
So what?
Read, and use the opinions that matter to you.
Discount the rest.
Problem solved.
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Posted By: The T
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 12:25
Posted By: timothy leary
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 13:13
Music especially lyrical music is opinion.
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Posted By: lazland
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 13:52
I've written a lot of reviews on the site now. Each and every one of them is an opinion based upon the music I listened to. I fail to see how it can be anything else.
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Posted By: stonebeard
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 14:29
One of the most important thing in a review is the listener's opinion about the music. if I wanted to get a history lesson about a genre that doesn't mean anything or some verbal bullsh*t Pitchfork w**kery, I would read Pitchfork and then shower afterward because that site is full of twit reviewers. Maybe their review is clever, whatever.
1) Listen to music 2) Describe feel, tone, timbre of the music 3) Describe production aesthetic 4) Describe any highs and especially jarring lows 5) Determine whether the lyrics are actually good (hard for prog rock, I know) 6) Describe how the songs make you feel
If you can do those well with accuracy to how you envision the album, and your vocabulary and flow isn't horrible, congrats you just wrote one of the least pretentious, most helpful, and best reviews on the Internet.
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Posted By: Slartibartfast
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 15:46
They start off in this key at this time signature and then the do this key at this time signature. They use these particular instruments. This was recorded in this year and released in this year. These guys recorded it in this location. It was engineered by this guy. Nothing wrong with including factual stuff in your reviews, but reviews are more interesting with opinions.
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Posted By: Catcher10
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 16:30
I'm not sure what Mosh's point he is trying to make...but all I can think of is maybe some of the "bad" reviews that get posted. I don't do reviews because they are exactly that... my opinion...and my opinion is no better than the next persons.
What I don't think is being used correctly is the rating system. A 1 star does not mean its "krapp, horrible, junk, never should been issued, don't buy it"...yet people use it to express their opinion more when they feel that is the case.
If I am not mistaken there is no rating for "junk".
Maybe Moshkito needs to "review" his original post and amend it to convey his feelings better.....sometimes it is hard for some to express their true feelings in the first shot.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 17:24
Catcher10 wrote:
I'm not sure what Mosh's point he is trying to make...but all I can think of is maybe some of the "bad" reviews that get posted. I don't do reviews because they are exactly that... my opinion...and my opinion is no better than the next persons.
What I don't think is being used correctly is the rating system. A 1 star does not mean its "krapp, horrible, junk, never should been issued, don't buy it"...yet people use it to express their opinion more when they feel that is the case.
If I am not mistaken there is no rating for "junk".
Maybe Moshkito needs to "review" his original post and amend it to convey his feelings better.....sometimes it is hard for some to express their true feelings in the first shot.
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All I know is in another thread he said reviews shouldn't be about opinions (that's the gist) and I disagreed. I wish I kinew whitch thread.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 17:30
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Posted By: Catcher10
Date Posted: February 05 2011 at 20:24
Thanks Dog.....I do agree that opinion is part of the review and would argue a large part at that. I don't look at ratings, but read the commentary and use that to judge how much I want to buy, download an album....or not pay attention to it.
Although with my Zune Marketplace account I can pretty much preview anything, download it and then decide if I want to get the CD or vinyl.
So again, I think Mosh is pretty smart I just wonder if he is articulating himself well enough...but then again who am I to judge anyone.
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Posted By: moshkito
Date Posted: February 09 2011 at 19:45
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Also, you shouldn't feel compelled to oppose him simply because you're on a website he's describing, perhaps even one he's thinking of, since we've had entertaining run ins with him before. I think he would recognize the prog reviewers as being an informed opinion, although they don't have the blessing of somebody working for dead media, so maybe not. |
I think this is missing the point of the discussion and taking things a bit further than necessary.
The request is for the writing to be a bit more than just a bar room discussion, which is a fun discussion amidst friends, not a "review" or a "literary criticism" as things are usually done and marked up in Europe.
In America, no one cares because "literary criticism" doesn't exist and the only thing that you can find is kissash stuff on stars ... so because the music is about that ... you are critical ... and if you want to write a review about that do so, but don't sit here like in a drunken rumble after a few extra beers on a Saturday Night with all of us ... but in the end, politeness is what gets you somewhere ... it may not be your favorite .. fine ... DON'T WRITE ABOUT IT ... but no ... your ego has to say something ... and at that point the review dies, because you are NOT being objective.
Please separate your personal feelings on this ... has nothing to do with anything else. Make it look like you are having to write an essay for your English teacher (Dean of course!) and it is due tomorrow, or Snow Dog, the enforcer, is not going to be very happy!
Forget the person stuff that you don't like that you find hippocritical ... show your class and ability by talking about something else that you find better ... and leave PT behind.
My preference is for not writing about bands of things that I have no preference with ... I am not going to sit here and trash something I don't like ... but a somment like the one above belongs in an board/forum, not in a review. Any teacher would give yo a D at best and tell you to go home and rewrite it, by taking the anger out. Which as you wrote it, you didn't do!
And that is a very fair request. IF, you can not write without the anger, and put together a review, then it is not a review ... it is a personal feeling that tickles your bullocks ... but I'm sure that you are intelligent enough to write something orderly and without the need to be angry and still make your point.
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Posted By: moshkito
Date Posted: February 09 2011 at 19:51
The T wrote:
The one factor that has made PA what it is, you want to eliminate: the ability for any Joe tp review any album of any geek with a guitar and an ego... Sorry. Don't support one damn bit. |
I don't want to suggest that any Joe that wants to review anything can NOT do a review ... what I am saying is that we should have 4 or 5 things that are required in the review ... and him saying that blah and blah is sh*t ... is not a review!
Now if he puts down the 10 explanations of why, and then the chemical explanations, and then even shows you pictorial valiadation of the statement ... how the hell can we disagree with him ... but notice that his "thesis" did not need any anger to get the point across! It's just very Jean Genet!  ((must read of course is "Our Lady of Flowers"), which is just right about the point here!
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Posted By: moshkito
Date Posted: February 09 2011 at 20:03
Sean Trane wrote:
Indeed, Wilson has been pumping essentially the same music ever since Stupid Dreams (whether solo, blackfield or PT and hundreds of other collabs). He's got an instantly recognizable sonic paw, but he's been selling essentialkly the same thing over the years....
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Please ...
That's like saying that Picasso never did ... or Mozart, where half of his stuff was so repetitive it was boring! ... or anyone else.
Ohhh c'mon ... like Harry Potter isn't? Or Chainsaw Massacre 69?
Give it a break ... that is not even a review of their work! That's just a comment that YOU are not hearing what you want ... and my suggestion would be ... go listen to something else! Why would you want to waste your time with crap? ... where is the logic in writing that, when there is so much good stuff that you can be writing about?
In between on a forum or something, just say ... nah, grew out of it 10 years ago ... end of story ...
It makes it all look like the very typical discussion and arguments that we have that the public "owns" the artist ... and they don't, and never will ... and if you don't like it, specially in the advertising age, go buy Lady Gaga! Don't waste your money on PT, or bothering saying anything!
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Posted By: moshkito
Date Posted: February 09 2011 at 20:11
Rivertree wrote:
how can someone write insightful without having an unformatted opinon? |
When you go to graduate school and write a paper off your opinion alone, and unfformatted ... I'm going to tell you ... good luck being in graduate school next quarter, because you WON'T.
And the same fate is going to befit us here if we don't improve our literary standard so we stop discussing these things like we don't care how it's done. If you want to be quoted like Wiki ... you have to get better, and all you're saying is that you don't care, because you think that your opinion is more important than anyone else's ... that is called in some circles "petty tyranny".
You can have an opinion, of course, and it is a part of the review ... but people are confusing the discussion and not reading the subtext ... transform your opinion into an intelligent discussion and comment ... not into a single paragraph saying that it is full of crap!
There is a massive difference ... massive!
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Posted By: moshkito
Date Posted: February 09 2011 at 20:25
Snow Dog wrote:
I suspect that Moshkito made this thread due to me. From a comment I made elswhere. Glad I'm not going mad. |
Don't you think that would be a bit personal and not worth my time or yours?
I just happened onto that article and it was a very good article and I sympathise with Steven from a literary point of view ... I was born in a house with 40k books of Portuguese, Brazilian and Spanish Literature and while I have not gotten to the big banana in the literary circles, I can tell you that my dad, in my family, did, and he is in the Brittanica, if you care to be curious enough ... and all I'm asking and suggesting, is ... that we raise the standard a bit ... Snow Dog might not enjoy it, because his one word euphemisms might take a hit ... but that's ok ... he can do 2 word euphemisms and anything else too! 
Basically, if you or I were teaching a class and had to grade folks on these things, a good 25% would not get very good ratings ... and you and I would ask for a rewrite, or it would be removed. But what you are saying is that you want to write whatever you want and no one is gonna do anything about it ... and that's ok ... and after a while all you have is good stuff buried along side all the crap ... how nice ... well, to be fiar, flowers do grow on dung! 
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 10 2011 at 03:48
moshkito wrote:
You can have an opinion, of course, and it is a part of the review ... but people are confusing the discussion and not reading the subtext ... transform your opinion into an intelligent discussion and comment ... not into a single paragraph saying that it is full of crap!
There is a massive difference ... massive! |
Not one person has disagreed with you about that. That's not WE mean by a review must be opinion. I sometimes wonder if you read OUR posts.
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Posted By: Atavachron
Date Posted: February 10 2011 at 04:11
Posted By: AtomicCrimsonRush
Date Posted: February 10 2011 at 04:30
I will admit I rarely read non collab reviews cos I don't trust them. However some of them can be rather informed at times.
A CD review to me is 3 things:
1. an expose of the type of music you will hear
2. an opinion on whether or not the music appeals
3. a detailed informed analysis of the overall purpose, concept and thematic content.
And you can write academically or in an analytical sense, or you can choose to be more personal. Either way the review must at least review the music, some of the tracks should be mentioned and the artists styles should get a mention.
Theres no worng or right way i guess but a review with at least some of these things gains my respect. Reviewers that churn out one review after another that just goes for the jugular - stating the music is crap without any justification soon wears thin, and nobody can trust that type of review.
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Posted By: Tony R
Date Posted: February 10 2011 at 04:55
Enjoy it ... but some of you won't read it because it is a bit long ... ohhh damn ... someone has something to say! |
I thought you were older that. I didn't read it because based on your post I presumed the link would take me to some silly teenager's forum.
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Posted By: Snow Dog
Date Posted: February 10 2011 at 05:02
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