My Cover of Overture 1928

hi guys how u doin' , i just wanna to represent my cover of Dream Theater's Overture 1928 ..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LeRVXV5D0Jg&fmt=18

Hope u Guys like it , also watch my other vids on utube's profile..

thnx ! feel free to tell u'r opinion.. thnx i wait comments

Cheers !
with all respect ,
RRONI.

Good playing- I think... Hard to tell with the actual track playing with you. Finger style and technique looks good though.

Might want to get the levels in the mix sorted out.
You should make a backing track with no keyboards, so we can hear all the guitar parts clear and loud.

From the bits I could hear well, you did an alright job. Some out of tune bends in there occasionally that you need to work on and some of your vibrato has that "bedroom shredder/Kirk Hammett" quality to it, which is not a good thing, means your vibrato is sometimes too quick and shallow. If you want to match Petrucci's vibrato, it needs to be wider, a bit slower and more even.
If you're serious about working on vibrato listen to these guys:
Mikael Akerfeldt
Joe Satriani
Steve Vai
Marty Friedman
Yngwie Malmsteen
Frederik Akesson (now in Opeth)
And while I'm not a big fan personally, Zakk Wylde has great vibrato too.
Jeff Loomis

All are guys with amazing, emotional vibrato that is always even and consistent, and always bending in tune too.

I've watched your other videos, other than your bends and vibrato, you seem to be doing well, keep up the good work dude.


Edited by HughesJB4 - February 06 2009 at 17:53