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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 21:48
Originally posted by James James wrote:

Evening Patural.

How's your weekend been?  Mine's been non-eventful... sort of.  I was out Friday night but yesterday I was tired all day but didn't get much sleep.

I've listened to no music.

But I did have a chat in the club with a guy who likes stuff like Ulver, Patton projects and Meshuggah.


Mine's been non-eventful as well, mostly doing Christmas related stuff.  Haven't listened to anything either, although I did order Dun "Eros" on CD the other day.  I need to do a huge Wayside order after Christmas in addition to getting the HC box.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 21:51
Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

Originally posted by James James wrote:

Evening Patural.

How's your weekend been?  Mine's been non-eventful... sort of.  I was out Friday night but yesterday I was tired all day but didn't get much sleep.

I've listened to no music.

But I did have a chat in the club with a guy who likes stuff like Ulver, Patton projects and Meshuggah.


Mine's been non-eventful as well, mostly doing Christmas related stuff.  Haven't listened to anything either, although I did order Dun "Eros" on CD the other day.  I need to do a huge Wayside order after Christmas in addition to getting the HC box.


Man, I really want that HC box... but copyrighting is so first-priority. Looks like I may not be getting it. Ouch

Oh well.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 21:53
Rob,

It's dialogue I need help with.

The thing is, I once wrote three different intros (in different tenses) to a story after following this writing tutorial.  My dialogue for that was much better.

But for this, I just cannot get my head around it.  I want it to sound more natural, less stilted and more believable.

But it doesn't.

Thanks for perusing it though.  Just send me an e-mail when you have the time.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 21:55
Originally posted by James James wrote:

Rob,

It's dialogue I need help with.

The thing is, I once wrote three different intros (in different tenses) to a story after following this writing tutorial.  My dialogue for that was much better.

But for this, I just cannot get my head around it.  I want it to sound more natural, less stilted and more believable.

But it doesn't.

Thanks for perusing it though.  Just send me an e-mail when you have the time.


Trust me.  I have some points that should really help.  I promise I will email you before Christmas.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 21:57
Originally posted by MovingPictures07 MovingPictures07 wrote:

Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

Originally posted by James James wrote:

Evening Patural.

How's your weekend been?  Mine's been non-eventful... sort of.  I was out Friday night but yesterday I was tired all day but didn't get much sleep.

I've listened to no music.

But I did have a chat in the club with a guy who likes stuff like Ulver, Patton projects and Meshuggah.


Mine's been non-eventful as well, mostly doing Christmas related stuff.  Haven't listened to anything either, although I did order Dun "Eros" on CD the other day.  I need to do a huge Wayside order after Christmas in addition to getting the HC box.


Man, I really want that HC box... but copyrighting is so first-priority. Looks like I may not be getting it. Ouch

Oh well.

That does suck, but copyrighting is more important.Approve
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 21:58
Originally posted by birdwithteeth11 birdwithteeth11 wrote:

Originally posted by MovingPictures07 MovingPictures07 wrote:

Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

Originally posted by James James wrote:

Evening Patural.

How's your weekend been?  Mine's been non-eventful... sort of.  I was out Friday night but yesterday I was tired all day but didn't get much sleep.

I've listened to no music.

But I did have a chat in the club with a guy who likes stuff like Ulver, Patton projects and Meshuggah.


Mine's been non-eventful as well, mostly doing Christmas related stuff.  Haven't listened to anything either, although I did order Dun "Eros" on CD the other day.  I need to do a huge Wayside order after Christmas in addition to getting the HC box.


Man, I really want that HC box... but copyrighting is so first-priority. Looks like I may not be getting it. Ouch

Oh well.

That does suck, but copyrighting is more important.Approve


Yeah, we'll have to see how it goes too and how much money I get for Christmas from extended family.

Copyrighting is more important though, I agree. Big smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 21:58
How's it going BREEwithteeth?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:02
Pretty good FailingScienceClass.

Yourself?Tongue
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:04
Originally posted by birdwithteeth11 birdwithteeth11 wrote:

Pretty good FailingScienceClass.

Yourself?Tongue


Drinking beer and eating Combos - yeah, that's right.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:06
Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

Originally posted by birdwithteeth11 birdwithteeth11 wrote:

Pretty good FailingScienceClass.

Yourself?Tongue


Drinking beer and eating Combos - yeah, that's right.


Combos rock. Big smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:07
"Pizzeria" Combos.  Tongue
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:07
Ehh, just got home, figured I needed a break from the computer a bit.
I guess as usual, I didn't miss muchLOL
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:08
Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

"Pizzeria" Combos.  Tongue

The best kind.Big smile

And hi, Harry.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:08
Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

"Pizzeria" Combos.  Tongue


Nice. Clap

I like the cheddar ones the most though.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:08
Originally posted by HughesJB4 HughesJB4 wrote:

Ehh, just got home, figured I needed a break from the computer a bit.
I guess as usual, I didn't miss muchLOL


Hello, Harry. How have you been?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:08
Originally posted by MovingPictures07 MovingPictures07 wrote:

Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

"Pizzeria" Combos.  Tongue


Nice. Clap

I like the cheddar ones the most though.

Pizzeria >>>> Chedder
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:09
Originally posted by birdwithteeth11 birdwithteeth11 wrote:

Originally posted by MovingPictures07 MovingPictures07 wrote:

Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

"Pizzeria" Combos.  Tongue


Nice. Clap

I like the cheddar ones the most though.

Pizzeria >>>> Chedder


Lies.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:10
Hey Harry.

I should try some BTBAM one of these days.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:11
Originally posted by MovingPictures07 MovingPictures07 wrote:

Originally posted by HughesJB4 HughesJB4 wrote:

Ehh, just got home, figured I needed a break from the computer a bit.
I guess as usual, I didn't miss muchLOL


Hello, Harry. How have you been?


Been a bit away from the computer as you can see this weekend.
Yesterday morning, went out to a guitar store, played a 7 string guitar, tried an amp.

Last night (well technically today really, since I went out after midnight) I hung out with my friend Kellie, met her friend Tara, then had some complicated issues along the way that weren't meant to happen, but made it safely back to Tara's house and all 3 of us squished in her bed, and considering it's summer, the next morning we were all sweaty and yucky feeling LOL
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: December 20 2008 at 22:12
Originally posted by NaturalScience NaturalScience wrote:

Hey Harry.

I should try some BTBAM one of these days.

You should.Big smile Start with Colors. It's easily one of my top 3 metal albums ever.
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